Tere sang pyaar Mai nahi todana....ShraHir TS Last pt pg2

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Tere sang pyaar Mai nahi todana....I will never break my love relationship with you... Part 1


A beautiful girl was sleeping.Her phone started ringing.She attended the call.It was a video call.

"Hi Shravani".

The boy turned out to be Mihir.

Shravani:Mihir...you?You spoiled my sleep yaar.

Mihir:Were you sleeping?

Shravani:It's midnight.Obviously I will be sleeping.Right?

Mihir:How can a studious girl like you can sleep at night.Studious girls sacrifice sleep and study.Right?

Shravani:To score good marks there is no need to skip sleep.We just have to concentrate well while studying.Why did'nt you sleep yet?

Mihir:Exams are coming up.So i decided to study.

Shravani:You decided to study?Great news.

Mihir:But I can't understand accounts.You please help please.Only you are there to help me.After all you are my best friend.

Shravani smiled:Chill buddy.For you I can sacrifice sleep.

Mihir smiled:So sweet.But no need of sacrificing sleep.Sleep well.We will meet in the college tomorrow.There you teach me.

Shravani:Are you sure?

Mihir:Yes Shravani.

Shravani:Ok.

In the college....

Shravani was teaching Mihir.Mahir embraced her from the side in a friendly manner.

Mihir:You are a great teacher.You should be a teacher.

Shravani:Yes,I will become a lecturer in this college itself.

Suddenly they heard a voice:If so,Shravani will be teaching my and Mihir's kids.

Shravani stared at that person.It was the college beauty Vishaka.

Suddenly Shravani imagined Mihir Vishaka getting married

 and felt horrified.

She said in her mind:Have Mihir Vish decide to get married ?Aready planning for kids?How is it possible?

Shravani:Yours and Mihir's kids?Are you both going to get married and produce kids?

Mihir and Vishaka laughed.

Vish:Just chill Shravani.I was just joking.

Mihir giggled:Shravani..Vish meant that when she gets married to someone and I get married to someone ..when we have children ...we will be sending them this college.So you will be teaching them.Right?

Shravani:Bad joke.

Mihir-Vishaka laughed while Shravani was irritated.

Shravani and Vishaka were playing chess.Vishaka won the game.Shravani became upset.

Vish:You may be the best in studies.But in chess you cannot defeat Vish.

Shravani was irritated.Mihir came there:Hi girls..what's happening?

Shravani thought:Mihir can play with Vish on my behalf and defeat Vish.

Vish:We were playing and you know?I won the game.

Mihir:Really?Congrats Vish.

Mihir shook her hands while Vishaka smiled saying 'Thank you so much Mihir'.

Shravani's eyes were on their hands which were entwined.She could'nt bear it and pulled Mihir from Vishaka.

Shravani:Vish...Mihir is the best in chess.He will defeat you.

Mihir was silent.

Vish:Really?

Mihir:No...Shravani is simply bluffing.

Shravani:No Mihir.You have to play with Vishaka.

Mihir:No..

Vish:Mihir..please play with me na.

Mihir:Ok.

They started playing and Mihir won the game.Shravani jumped with joy screaming:Hey..Mihir won.

Shravani embraced Mihir.

Shravani:As usual you are the best Mihir.

He smiled.

Vish:Congrats Mihir.

Mihir:Thank you.But Vish..you were truly amazing.It was a pleasure playing with you.

Vish:It was my pleasure too Mihir.

Shravani was becoming jealous.

She thought:Mihir is over sweet with Vish.

Mihir:I will see you guys.Need to go to canteen.

The girls:Ok.

Mihir went away.

Shravani smirked:Hope your over confidence has gone.See..I told you that no one can defeat Mihir.

Vishaka smiled:Ok.But you are becoming happy as if it's not Mihir but you who won the game.

Shravani:Ya.Because Mihir's success is my success too.He is my best friend since childhood.

Vish:Only friends or lovers?

Shravani was stunned by her question:What a stupid question is this?We are just friends.

Vish:That means Mihir is single and ready to mingle.I can woo him.

Shravani was shocked.

Shravani:What?You want to woo him?

Vish:Of course.I want him to be my boy friend.He is so charming.He is the first person to defeat me in chess.He is very smart.I am really impressed by him.

Shravani was becoming insecure.

Shravani:But how do you know whether Mihir will like you or not?

Vish:Mihir already likes me.Very soon he will fall in love with me.I know Mihir's taste.He must be wanting a beautiful stylish girl as his girl friend.Am I not beautiful enough for Mihir?

Shravani could not say anything.

She thought:I can't imagine Mihir and Vish as lovers.What an odd pair!

Class room...

Mihir:You did the assignment.I know that.

Shravani:You also did it.Right?

Mihir:No.

Shravani:What?Why?I had taught you everything.

Mihir pouted:But I forgot everything.

Shravani:Oh God!That means as usual I have to do your assignment.

Mihir nodded innocently.

Shravani smiled seeing his cute naughty face.

Shravani:Ok,i will do it for you.

Mihir:That's like my bestie.

She smiled.

She started doing assignment for Mihir.Mihir kept looking at her with a smile.

The students including Mahir and Vishaka were doing break dance in the practice hall.

 key sera sera

Najauvano .....

Baat mano

kabhi kisi se,

na pyar karna

Najauvano.....

Baat mano kabhi kisi se

na pyar karna

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Pyar zindagi

Pyar har khushi

pyar jisne paya hai

Wohi dil phool jaisa khila

Pyar galti hai pyar dhoka hai

pyar dhalti chaya hai

dekho phir na karna gila

hoooooooo,,..

Pyar zindagi Pyar har

khushi pyar jisne paya hai

Wohi dil phool jaisa khila

Shravani could not bear Mihir and Vishaka dancing together and yelled at them:Stop it.

Vish:What happened Shravani?

Shravani:What a stupid dance?We are students.Instead of preparing for the exams you all are dancing and wasting time?

Vish:It's so boring to spend all the time with books.

Mihir:Come on Shravani.We need leisure time also.Relaxation is also needed for our brain.Right?

Shravani:But studies...?

Mihir:You study.Please let us enjoy.Please...

Mihir requested innocently as without her permission he can't even enjoy.

Shravani pouted:Ok..

Mihir pulled her cheek:Thank you.

Mihir Vishaka and others continued dancing.Shravani suppressed her anger.

Pyar galti hai

pyar dhoka hai

pyar dhalti chaya hai

dekho phir na karna gila

Pyar hi dhadkano ki kahani hai

pyar hai haseen dastaaan

Shravani imagined Mihir-Vishaka dancing romantically.

Pyar ashkon ki deta nishani ha

pyar mein hai chain kahan

Pyaar ki baat jisne na mani hai

uski na to zameen hai na hai aasman

Naujavanon Baat mano

kabhi kisi se na pyar karna

Shravani could not tolerate it.

Shravani thought:No...this is not possible.When Mihir dances with Vish it looks so horrible.

Shravani imagined Mihir dancing with her.

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara

phir chahe jo ho

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara

phir chahe jo ho

music..........

Pyar jaise hai purab pashim

pyar hai uttar dakshin

Yaha hai pyar hi har disha

Pyar rog hai, pyar dard hai

pyar tore dil ek din

Yehi hai pyar ka silsila

Pyar se hi to rangeen jivan hai

pyar se hi dil hai javaaaaan

Pyar kanton ke jese koi ban hai

Pyar se hi gham ka samaaa

Pyar se jane kyon tumko uljan hai

pyar to sari duniya pe hai meherban

Naujavano Naujavano Naujavano

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

music....

high pitch....

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

music...

Nana nana Nana nana Nana nana Nana nana

Pyar pyar pyar pyar Pyar pyar pyar

pyar Pyar pyar pyar pyar pyar

Okay Okay Okay

Hey key sera sera sera jo bhi ho so ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

Hey Key Sera Sera Sera Jo bhi Ho So Ho

Humme Pyar ka ho asara phir chahe jo ho

phir chahy jo ho

phir chay jo ho...

(Pukar).

She smiled:I think Mihir and I look better together while dancing.

Suddenly she became dull:But I can dance well only in dreams.

Mihir Vishaka and Shravani were having lunch together in the canteen.

Vish:Mihir...you danced so well.

Mihir:Must say...you are the best dancing partner I could get Vish.

They both smiled which made Shravani fume in anger.

Vishaka's birthday party...

Shravani was walking towards the food section.She slipped and was about to fall down.But two strong hands held her.Shravani was in Mihir's arms.

Shravani:Mihir!

Mihir:I am your bet friend.I won't let my best friend fall and get hurt.

Shravani smiled.They shared an eye lock.


Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Chaahe tere pichhe
Jag pade chhodana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Oh

Vishaka came:Hi Mihir...

Suddenly Mihir released Sravani from his hold and walked towards Vishaka:Hi Vish!

Shravani could not bear it.

She thought:Mihir left me to spend time with Vish?

Mihir:Happy birthday Vish!

Mihir gifted her earrings.

Vish:This is so beautiful.Thank you so much.

Vishaka wore those earrings.

Mihir:Absolutely stunning.

Shravani was really irritated.

Vishaka cut cake.Shravani's eyes were only on Mihir.

Vishaka went to attend her friends.

Shravani asked Mihir angrily:You have not gifted me any a single piece of jewellery till now.But you gave earrings to Vish.

Mihir:You don't like ornaments.That's why I don't gift you ornaments.Vish is the birthday girl.When she invited me in such a friendly manner I have to give her a gift.Right?Vish is the college beauty.She loves dressing up and wearing ornaments.That's why I gifted her earrings.

Shravani was not convinced by his answer.

Mihir got a phone call.

Mihir told Vishaka and Shravani:Hey..I need to go as dad needs me to arrange some stuffs in his office.

Vish:Ok..thank you so much for coming her and making my birthday special Mihir.

Mihir smiled:Bye...

Mihir left.

Vish:Shravani....

Shravani stared at Vishaka with teary eyes.

Vishaka was stunned to see her tears.

Vish:What happened?

Shravani walked to the balcony without saying anything.

Vishaka followed her.

Vish:Say Shravani..what happened?

Shravani wiped her tears.

Shravani said angrily:Finally you succeeded in wooing Mihir.He is flattered by your beauty.

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Tere sang pyaar Mai nahi todana....I will never break my love relationship with you Part 2

Vish:Say Shravani..what happened?

Shravani wiped her tears.

Shravani said angrily:Finally you succeeded in wooing Mihir.He is flattered by your beauty.

Vish:But why are you crying over that?Are you sad about losing Mihir?

The realization hit Shravani.

Vish:Why don't you admit at least now that you love him and that's why you are getting irritated whenever you see me with Mihir?

Shravani wept silently.

Vishaka smiled:I knew from the beginning that you love Mihir,but you have not realized it.Though you are good at studies in case of love you are a fool Shravani.So to make you realize your love for Mihir purposefully i lied to you that I love Mihir and I am planning to make him mine.

Shravani could not believe it:What?You did it purposefully?

Vish:Yes.

Shravani:You don't love Mihir?

Vish:No.I love Mihir's cousin Ajitabh whom I met during the last college fest when he also participated in it.Mihir is our cupid.But we are keeping it a secret as his parents are yet to accept me.

Shravani was surprised:But Mihir did'nt tell me anything about you and Ajitabh.

Vish:Because we requested him to keep it a secret as we knew that he can't hide anything from you.Those earrings were sent by Ajitabh for me.Mihir just gifted them to me on his behalf.

Shravani was relieved and felt happy.

Vish:You love Mihir.Right?

Shravani:I don't know when and how I fell for him.

Vish:Why are you not confessing your love to him?

Shravani:How can I tell him that I love him?Like you told me Mihir prefers a beautiful girl as his girl friend.I am not attractive enough for him.

Vish:I just said that to make fun of you.Who knows?In Mihir's eyes you may be the most attractive girl?You should not hide your love from him.You should confess your love to him.

Shravani was silent.

Mihir went to meet Ajitabh.

Aji:Did you give the gift to Vish?

Mihir:Yes.She loved your gift.

Aji:Mihir...you are helping lovers so much.Why are you not helping yourself to win your love?

Why are you not confessing your love to Shravani?

Mihir:It's true that i love Shravani.But how can I propose her?She might reject me as an average student like me does'nt suit a brilliant student like her.

Aji:You are over thinking.It's evident that Shravani loves you.You should confess your love.

Mihir:Why should Shravani love me?What quality do I have to attract her?

Aji:Your pure friendship and affection are enough to attract Shravani.It's sure that she too feels the same for you.

You better propose her.Otherwise you may regret.

Mihir was confused.

Shravani was becoming restless thinking whether Mihir loves her or not.

Shravani:How will I know whether Mihir loves me like I love him?I will do coin tossing.But if it shows negative?

While murmuring:He loves me...he loves me not She threw the coin in the air and checked which side is showing when it landed.


Suddenly her face blossomed.

Shravani:Wow..Mihir loves me.

Suddenly her face became dull.

Shravani:It's only a blind belief.There is no guarantee that the coin shows the right thing.




Mihir-Shravani in college...

Mihir:Close your eyes.

Shravani:Why?

Mihir:I am telling you...Close it yaar.

She closed her eyes.

Mihir:Extend your hand.

She extended her hand.

He kept something in her hand.She opened her eyes and was surprised to see a book in her hand.

Shravani:Wow...this is the book I longed to read for a long time.

Mihir:That's why I bought it for you.

Shravani:Thank you so much Mihir.This is the best gift ever.

Mihir:I knew that a book is he best gift for a book worm like you.

Shravani:You know my mind and likes very well Mihir.

Mihir:Of course yes.After all you are best friend since childhood.Anything for you Shravani.

Shravani's face blossomed:Why anything for me Mihir?

Mihir:You are very special to me Shravani.

She smiled.

They shared a pure eye lock.

Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Chaahe tere pichhe
Jag pade chhodana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana

They all went for a picnic from college.Mihir and Shravani always walked together.They enjoyed a lot.They were climbing a mountain together.Suddenly Shravani slipped and fell down.

Mihir got panicked:Shravaniii..

Shravani looked at him.Her face was full of mud.

Mihir cupped her face in his hands:Shravani..are you alright?I am sorry..I could'nt save you.


Maang meri shabnam
Ne moti bhare
Aur najaaro ne
Mehandi lagaayi
Maang meri shabnam
Ne moti bhare
Aur najaaro ne
Mehandi lagaayi

Shravani:I am alright Mihir.This is just a small fall.No need to feel guilty.This happens in such areas.

Mihir:I got scared.

He embraced.

She was stunned by his embrace.

Naache bin hi payaliya
Chhanakane lagi
Bin hawa ke hi
Chunari lehraayi
Chunari lehraayi
Aaj dil se hain
Dil aa jodana

Mihir broke the embrace shyly.He was not able to face Shravani.

Shravani looked at him:Why were you scared Mihir?

Mihir:I can't see you in pain.I can't lose you at any cost.

Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Aankh banke tujhe
Dekhati hi rahu
Pyaar ki aaisi tasvir ban ja
Aankh banke tujhe
Dekhati hi rahu

Mihir:Shravani..are you ok?Can we continue our journey?

Shravani:Yes sure.I am perfectly alright.After all you are with me to take care of you.

Mihir:That's the spirit.

They both smiled.

Mihir:Before we continue the journey let me wipe your face.Otherwise people will think that you are a ghost seeing your muddy face.

They both burst into laughter.

He took wet wipes and wiped mud from her body.Shravani was looking at him deeply.

Pyaar ki aaisi tasvir ban ja
Teri baaho ki
Chaanv se lipati rahu
Meri saanso ki
Takdir ban ja
Takdir ban ja

Shravani thought:Seeing Mihir's gestures I feel that Vish is right in saying that Mihir has feelings for me.

Mihir noticed Shravani looking at him deeply.

He thought:Seeing the way her eyes are gazing at me I feel that Ajitabh is right in saying that Shravani too loves me.

At home...

In their room...

Mihir and Shravani blushed thinking of the moments they spent together.

Shravani looked at the dolls which were kept closer to hers and Mihir's photograph.Those dolls were dressed exactly like Mihir and Shravani.

Shravani smiled looking at those dolls.

Shravani:Really we look so cute together.

Mihir looked at the dolls kept near Shravani's photographs.

Those dolls were exactly like Shravani.

Mihir:You are so cute Shravani.Wait..I will confess my love to you after exams.

Shravani:I will open my heart to you soon Mihir.

Their exams got over.

Shravani told Vishaka:I am going to confess my love to Mihir.We have decided to meet today.

Vishaka:Wow..that's lovely.But are you going to confess your love like this?

Shravani:Means?

Vish:Oh come on Shravani.Your confession day is special.So wear a nice dress.

Shravani:Oh!But I have no idea what to wear.It's Mihir who chooses dress and accessories for me to wear for special occasions.

Vish:This time I will dress you up.

Vishaka dressed up Shravani in beautiful salwar suit and hairdo.She removed her glasses and made her wear the power contact lens which ordered specially from the shop on emergency.

Shravani could not believe her own eyes seeing her make over.

Shravani:I never thought that i can look so beautiful.Thank you much Vish.

They hugged each other.

Mihir was waiting for Shravani restlessly.His heart was beating fast.When Shravani entered he could not believe his eyes.She looked that beautiful.

Tere saath vada
Kiya nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana.

Mihir:Shravani...you had make over?

Shravani:Ya..but only for this day.

Mihir:You look damn beautiful.

Shravani blushed.


Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Chaahe tere pichhe
Jag pade chhodana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Oh

Mihir:But even if its only for today it's ok as there is no need of make over for you.

Shravani:Why i don't need any make over?I look so dim and boring?

Mihir:Who said you are dim and boring?You are perfect in your own way.You don't need any change.You have not seen your own beauty.

Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Chaahe tere pichhe
Jag pade chhodana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana

Shravani was surprised:Means I am beautiful?

Mihir:Yes.In my eyes no one is as beautiful as you.

Shravani blushed.

Maang meri shabnam
Ne moti bhare
Aur najaaro ne
Mehandi lagaayi

She thought:It means like I feared Mahir does'nt care about my appearance.

Mihir:By the way why did you do make over?

Shravani was shy.

Shravani:I wanted to open my heart to you and show you my feelings.That's why.

Mihir's eyes started glowing:What's that Shravani?Say.



Maang meri shabnam
Ne moti bhare
Aur najaaro ne
Mehandi lagaayi

Shravani:First you say what you wanted to say.

Mihir:I...I ...

Shravani got fed up and said in irritation:You can't study properly.At least talk properly.

Shravani turned back.Suddenly Mihir pulled her to turn her back side and looked at her eyes intensely.

Mihir:I love you Shravani.

Shravani was surprised.


Naache bin hi payaliya
Chhanakane lagi
Bin hawa ke hi
Chunari lehraayi
Chunari lehraayi
Aaj dil se hain
Dil aa jodana

Mihir:I know that an average student like you does'nt suit you.But in love I suit you Shravani.

Shravani started chuckling.Mihir:Why are you laughing?Is it a joke?

Shravani:I thought you don't love me as I am not attractive,but you fear that I don't love you as you are not a brilliant student.

Mihir was stunned:What?You thought like that?How can you think  that I am a guy who values only looks?And who said you are less attractive?No one is as attractive as you.Understand you brainless girl?I don't without brain how you study well.

Shravani giggled.

Shravani:How could you think that I will think that you are mismatch for me because of your academic performance?I can see only your pure friendship and care,I don't care about your exam marks.

Mihir smiled happily.

Shravani giggled:You know?We both are fools to think so stupid about each other.

Mihir held her closer:It means we two fools are made for each other.Right?

Shravani smiled:Yes.I love you Mihir.

Mihir:I love you too Shravani.


Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana

They shared a sweet eye lock.

Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana

Mihir became a successful business man and Shravani became a college lecturer.

They both revealed their love to their parents.Both parents became very happy and supported their decision to marry each other.

Shravani's father:Your selection is the best Shravani.

Shravani's mother:No one can handle you like Mihir.

Shravani became happy.

Mihir's mom Kanika :A girl like Shravani was needed to manage you.

Mihir's father Samarjeet :You both are perfect for each other.

Mihir smiled.

Finally Mihir Shravani got married.

 

 

They clicked family photographs

and then crazy photographs with Vishaka who was their main cupid.

Later Ajitabh also joined them.

Mihir Shravani in their decorated room....

Mihir looked at her deeply:I can't believe that my best friend Shravani has become my wife now.

Shravani:Even I can't believe it Mihir.But it's a beautiful experience.

They smiled at each other romantically.

Aankh banke tujhe
Dekhati hi rahu
Pyaar ki aaisi tasvir ban ja
Aankh banke tujhe

They came closer and immersed in passionate intimate romance.


Dekhati hi rahu
Pyaar ki aaisi tasvir ban ja


Teri baaho ki
Chaanv se lipati rahu


Meri saanso ki
Takdir ban ja
Takdir ban ja
Tere saath vada
Kiya nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana


Ho tere sang pyaar


Mai nahi todana.

After a month....

Ajitabh and Vishaka got married.

Shravani:I really feel happy that finally both families blessed them and they became one.

Mihir:Only lucky couples like us are blessed with true love.

Shravani held his hand:You are right Mihir.I promise you that I will always love you like this.We will never break our love relationship with each other.

Mihir:Yes..we will never break our love relationship with each other.I also promise you that till the end I will shower you with my love and friendship.

They smiled at each other holding each other's hands.

Tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
Chaahe tere pichhe
Jag pade chhodana
Ho tere sang pyaar
Mai nahi todana
(Nagin 1976).

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice! Really like the way you take efforts to put up suitable images. They are a unique factor of your stories. 

I just have one suggestion. See if you can include it in your narrative. Try and be more descriptive. Like instead of 

They clicked crazy photos with Vishakha

You could maybe try describing the madness?

I have read a few of your stories now. Your themes are good. Just a little more description will elevate them to the next level. Think about it. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

thank you very much for your suggestion.I will  consider your suggestion for sure.Actually I did not know how to describe the photo session scene.sorry for that.thanks a lot for commenting.i am very happy. 


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Nice! Really like the way you take efforts to put up suitable images. They are a unique factor of your stories. 

I just have one suggestion. See if you can include it in your narrative. Try and be more descriptive. Like instead of 

They clicked crazy photos with Vishakha

You could maybe try describing the madness?

I have read a few of your stories now. Your themes are good. Just a little more description will elevate them to the next level. Think about it. 

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