Hi all,
My name is Ratika, usually a silent reader here on this forum and I do write. I have a bad habbit of writing romance. I am not sure whether you will relate my short One shot with the kind of Characterisation, I will give in here.
You all are welcome to not like it. But just for fun if anyone do, appreciate their appreciation. Thanks in advance and do ignore if any kind of mistake you may find.
This whole scene is happening in the night, after Hanuman returned from his duty and informed both mother daughter about his wish.
Happy reading!
Hanuman Singh is restless, excited to know that Babita has agreed to marry him. He couldn't believe in his destiny. "Imarti was my soul, and now kiraydarniji is my life" he thought to himself. "Bholenath, ib ke agar aapne mother daughter ko mujhse dur karna chaha toh dekhlena fir, Hanuman Singh, Hanuman ka bhakt na rahe.." his prayers now have conditions.
Been through alot in life, there Babita was praying to not give any kind of abshagun in her life...she cries, while standing alone in the balcony, she looked above and said "bohot ho gaya ab, bas.....ab aur kuch bhi bura nahi.."
There was no one in the house, then. Mini was so happy to share this news with everyone that she left them alone in the house and made sure no one disturbs them at least for 2 hours. She understood, they both need to talk their heart out to each other.
With a nervous heart, Hanuman started walking up to Babes. He reached to the balcony only to find her alone. She senesed his presence but didn't turn around. She wiped her tears and said "Kya aap sachmein..", Hanuman cuts her " ji..Sach mein!" He confirmed his decision to her once again.
"Yeh sab much pehle jaisa nahi hoga....yeh Bata pyar nahi hai, pehli Shaadi nahi hai, pehla ehsaas nahi hoga, pehli tadap nahi hogi....hum dono ke beech aisa much bhi pehli baar nahi hoga" as she was saying all this, Hanuman reaches next to her. They looked into each other's mind to read all what was going through.
"Janta hun" he looked up to the stars " pehla na bhi ho, lekin pyar ho.."
"Aur mein aapse pyaar karta hun, ib ke yeh toh na keh saku hun, ke kitna karu him par pyar toh karta him" he turns his face to see her reaction and she looked happy.
"Par mein aapse kuch kehna chahta hun....aur Ji puchna bhi" she nodded on his questions. " Maine Imarti ko bohot pyar Kiya tha" he took a pause and looked straight into her eyes, bending a little closer to not give her any discomfort " Puri tarah se pyar Kiya tha, har tarah se.."
She understood what he meant, she fidgets with her dupatta. " Janti hun" hearing this Hanuman reduces the space in between them and she turned to leave as she felt shy to talk about all those things but her dupatta got stuck near the door.
Hanuman took those strides of emotions and reaches to escort her dupatta from getting torn away. They both were facing each other, he didn't leave her dupatta, Babita's back touched the door. Hanuman raised his hand to shut it and kept his hands on her sides, enclosing her.
"Aap Kya Kar rahe hai." She shoots nervously.."shh" he shunned her question.
"Is..Shaadi se pehle, mein chahta hun ki aap mujhe Puri tarah se qubool Kate.."
They both float into the high tides of emotions, "Kya chahiye hai aap?" She asked whispering. "Kuch sawalo me jawab"
"Puchiye"
He looked at her lovingly " aapko qubool hai? Is Dil ki dhadkan mein rehna?" he questioned her, taking her hand to his heart.
With a pounding emotions and feeling of grace and desire together, she said "qubool hai"
Keeping his proximity close enough.."qubool hai aapko, in ankho mein apne liye shararatein dekhna?"
"Qubool hai!" she felt happy.
" Qubool hai mere chuna?...aapko?" He slides his hands on her waist, sending chills down her spine..."qubool hai!"she shuts her eyes while breathing heavy.
He raises her face and brought his face near to her "qubbol..hai..? Meri saanso ka aapki saanso mein ghulna?"
She opened her eyes, her eyes had soft spark due to her tears..."qubool hai!" He smiled on her reply and content that she was ok with him, close to him.
"Toh bas fir, doli uthne ki set hai.." he said and he went down stairs leaving all needy Babita for her Hanuman.
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