Hi pals😃..
Me and my guruji Uru have tried to write a scene which I so so want on MishBir......I want TIP TIP BARSAA PANI song on MishBir... So me and Uru tried to write this small scene 😃
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Abir in the camp site...
Sitting all alone lost in thoughts.... finally releived that kuku are married...Mishti is back.... suddenly hears someone...
'abir"
Abhir is sitting beside the fire and looks around ..it's Mishti.....he's happy to see her.......
Abhir: Mishti ....tum iss waqth, yahaan kya kar rahi hoo???
Mishti: tumko thanks bole aayi hunn........Kuku ki shadi finally hogayi.......
Abhir: I am happy for them, jissee pyar kiya..usise shaadi ki kuhu and kunal ne....
Mishti: haan....
Abhir ammm..Mishti..tumko sirf yhe baath karni thi kya??..aur kuch nahi?
Mishti is getting his signal but pretends to ignore it
Mishti : aur kya baath?......kuch nahi
Abhir gets a little angry..and hands over a gift to her...
Abhir: yhe lo..mein tumhare liye laaya tha........
Mishti takes the gift..looks at him lovingly and then opens the gift.........its a yellow see through saree .....
Mishti: Abhir....
Abhir: meine thum ko iss saree mein imagine kiya tha.....iss liye.......
Mishti looks at him..he is not meeting his eyes with her....and she smiles and with the gift goes into the tent
Mish is inside the tent ...Abir still sitting outside...but audible to her
Ek Kahaani hui khatam ek kahani is mod pe aayi
Pehli baarish jaise Zameen pe meethi khushboo layi
Keh do aaj jo us din tum Chahkar b na keh payi
Na jaane kab se ho chuki hai tumhare saath mere Dil ki sagaai
Mishti is draping the saree inside the tent but she can hear Abhir 's words......she is blushing while draping the saree............
Abhir is wearing a see through white shirt....... and sitting beside the camp fire......... Just then it starts thundering........Mishti opens the curtains of the tent...
Mishti:
mein shayar nahi hun tumahri taraa....
magar itna hai pata.....
iss dil ki baath samahj ne ka..
meine bhi ki hai khata.........
Abhir just turns back and see's it's mishit...in that beautiful yellow saari.....she has tied her blouse as a bow tie........she is looking ravishing....Abhir cannot take his eyes off her........he just cannot....she has all her hair put in one side.
Mishti gets cautious............Abhir turns his face a little away closes his eyes and runs his fingers on his hair.....as though he is holding himself back......
Abhir:
chand nahi, chandani nahi
par phir bhi hai kuch pata
aaj iss mausam mein aye zaalim..humse na hojaye koi khata.........
saying this Abhir looks back at MIshti..Mishti is blushing............just then she slowly comes towards him....and he too moves forward.....they are standing in front of each other...face to face......just then a rain drop falls on mishti's cheeks.......
A loud thunder is heard and MIshti gets scared and quickly grabs Abhirs see through shir colar....and in a second is nestled in his arms.....he is a little shocked for a sec, but then slowly hugs her back....Mishti realizes that she is in a intimate hug .....nestled in his broad chest between almost crushed his arms....and then it starts raining........
Aaj hamare saath yeh Mausam bhi hai
Mere saath meri ek chorni Masum hai
Saying so he breaks the hug and caresses her cheeks gently
Aaj to kudrat ne bhi kar diya hai hasin ishaara
Meri chorni main hamesha banuga tumhara sahara
He asks her for a dance....
Mishti Smiles a little and shy's away and moves a little away ignoring Abhir....Abhir's smile fades off....he acts as though he has got angry and goes and stands near the fire place..... Just than it starts raining......
Abhir:
sataathe hain who, rulate bhi hain
pass na aakar dil dukhate bhi hain
Tip Tip Barsa pani...music starts.........The fire slowly is put of by the rain....at that moment abhir suddenly feels someone hugging him from the back tightly.......it's mishit....It's started raining by now..... Mist is giving him back hug...He smiles but pretends to be angry. He pushes her hands a little.....she hugs him again...he pushes....she makes him turn around....takes his hand and keeps it on her waist..but he takes it of....
TIp TIp barsa pani para starts.....she comes close to him singing that song..she caress his face...but he pretends to be angry and acts to move away. She pulls him closer....very close. He starts getting effected.......
just as she becomes sad thinking he's angry he picks her up romantically....she hugs him as he slowly puts her down....
Male para of the song starts........ he hugs her and lifts her in thate hug...holding her waist tightly......they do a small close dance.....he gently touches her hand comes close to her and lightly kisses her cheeks..... she turns and hugs him. He than takes her hand and puts It across his shoulder...she lifts her leg......he holds her by her waist and they have a intimate hug...........
The song ends
They are still in a hug
Abhir: yhe kya hai Mishti.....itna khoobsurath sa...
Mishti suddenly realizes what all has happened and she suddenly breaks the hug....They are super drenched in the rain
Finally the rain stops
Mishti: mujhe ab Jana chahie Abir...She starts leaving.....
Abir: suno......
Mishti turns back....Abir makes her wear the glasses which she had removed while wearing the saree... saying iske bina tum adhuri ho...she starts leaving again...
Abir:suno.......
Mishti again turns back
Abir: hamesha mere suno kehne pe palatna....
Mishti feels emotional for not turning back the other day....she nods ...smiles and leaves
Abir: suno.....
She again turns back ....
Abir: just checking.....kuch nai...jaooooo!
Pyaar karna toh hai aasan...nibhana hota hai mushkil....
Sambhalunge hum hamesha jab gabhraye humara Dil
Ek Din badalon se aage Nikal kar mil jaegi Manzil
Phir karenge yaad hum yeh Badal yeh Mausam yeh jheel.
Hope you all like it.....
And guruji.. we Rock😎
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