PreRish One-Shot: The Smell of Dread and Guilt

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Posted: 5 months ago

Reserved. 

Unressing 

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Shrutiiiii what did you write ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👏

This was wonderful ❤️❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜😘😘😘😘 

First things first, I loved how she got a panic attack and how you handled that  so effortlessly yet effectively. One is bound to face such traumatizing attacks Especially when thrown into such life & death situation and then the guilt of having someone else, Especially when it is your husband even if Naam ke wastey, to be the victim instead. 

Second how she assured him that his daughter was safe with her mom. 💜❤️ Ofc how she took as much care gave him as much comfort as possible in the situation / position he was in, allowed her to. ❤️💜  

& The last. How she wondered and pondered upon who she meant to him and how she would prove him her worth for he had saved her from a near death situation. ❤️💜🧡💚💛♥️

This was BEYOND BEAUTIFUL. I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU COULD CHURN SOMETHING AS BEAUTIFUL AS THIS OUT IN SUCH A SHORT SPAN OF TIME. 

COMMENDABLE

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Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 5 months ago
Posted: 5 months ago

Yeh unres hoga bhi ya nahin? smiley36

Posted: 5 months ago

Shruti, it was very quick and awesomesmiley32

Prerna placed her head upon his chest and gently clutched both his shoulders, and felt her racing heartbeat normalize upon uniting with his tranquil heart. - smiley27

Edited by shin-chan - 5 months ago
Posted: 5 months ago

Absolutely amazing 😉 smiley32smiley32thank u so so much dear smiley27smiley27🙏🙏🙏

Posted: 5 months ago

Beautiful ....smiley27 I cud so visualise the whole OS smiley27

Posted: 5 months ago

 Shruti you just laid out Prerna's heart   .. it's beautiful smiley27

Posted: 5 months ago

Originally posted by Wistfulness


Yeh unres hoga bhi ya nahin? smiley36

apne manga aur hum na de?  smiley31 Check kar li jiye Image

Also 

 OS and and and 

^  took me last 15 minx to locate this 😂😂😂

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 5 months ago

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