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I loved it to the core.
It was emotional and your writing was depicting each emotion.
Aparna is better out of Malhar's house...
It's hard to wait for next part
Continue Soon
and Thank you so much for the PM
I loved it to the core.
It was emotional and your writing was depicting each emotion.
Aparna is better out of Malhar's house...
It's hard to wait for next part
Continue Soon
and Thank you so much for the PM
Originally posted by: rammehra103
Di I was crying while reading
It is so beautifully written that I was imagining each and every line 🥳👏
Awesome superb story .... 👏and aap to super awesome ho 🥳
Update soon ......( Hamko chahi jaldi jaldi )🤗😆
Hey Jyoti thank you for loving it.😊
Thank you so much for your appreciation.. you and everyone on this forum are awesome.. I love you all..😍🥰
I myself cried while writing it.n got emotional every time I used to read it.😂😁
Yup will update soon. The teaser for part 2 will be up by Friday and part 2 would be there soon . I still need to work on it and editing would be done so thoda intezaar.
( chinta naahi karo tumka tohaar update jald hi milega hum oo abhi likhat rahe hai)😆
Nice one .but don't understand the time period. Wether it happens before sayygis death or after..jaldi update Karna..
Hi ,
Thank you for liking it. It doesn’t have anything to do with any track of the show.
Except for the character traits of KalMa.
Kallu is chulbuli 18year old n mallu is angry bird atom bomb..😆
All characters are positive here show se koi lena dena nahi hai..😆
Will update soon.😊
Thank you so much for liking it dear..😊
Yup teaser n update for the next part are coming soon ..
Originally posted by: asmitasb
Hey really very well written. I can feel kalyani's pain being a mother. I almost cried while reading her letter. How much pain an eighteen year old will bear. Poor soul. Everybody except Anupriya n Pillu have hurt and blamed her. She deserves much much more.
I got engrossed into your writing. So well put together. Eagerly waiting for the next part and please do unite them soon unlike CVs. 😉
Keep writing yaa..
Hey dear thank you so much for liking it and appreciate it.
I have tried to catch the emotional flaws of an 18 year old who suddenly out of nowhere became a wife n a mother.
A responsibility at a very young age. I tried to write down what I would feel if this happens to me and CVs had also done good work in developing Kalyani ‘s character in initial phase of KalMa wedding that too helped me write this story.
I myself cried while writing some portions.😁😂
And for the letter written by Kalyani in my story the credit for that goes to Aazeen who helped me writing that letter n in development of my story.😊
Next part will be up soon n don’t worry I won’t disappoint you in my story you will get plenty of KalMa. As we all love them..😍🥰❤️
Originally posted by: InkAndFable
I loved it to the core.
It was emotional and your writing was depicting each emotion.
Aparna is better out of Malhar's house...
It's hard to wait for next part
Continue Soon
and Thank you so much for the PM
Hi dear. You are always welcome.😊
Thank you so much dear for loving and appreciating it.❤️😊
N for Aparna I always wanted if Malhar oust her earlier when she was troubling kallu..😡
Yes second part would be there soon. 😁
awesome update di
loved it
kallu neh ghar chodkar gayi jaateh wakat bhi she was thinking about her baby and her husband only
acha hai malhar get to know about truth
wanna see hw acp saab will find his wife and get her back
please do continue soon di
Originally posted by: kusharberry
awesome update di
loved it
kallu neh ghar chodkar gayi jaateh wakat bhi she was thinking about her baby and her husband only
acha hai malhar get to know about truth
wanna see hw acp saab will find his wife and get her back
please do continue soon di
Thank you so much dear for loving it.
Kallu always had put others before herself so it is obvious to show this side of her to buddhu mallu..😂🤣
Lets see how the story unfolds and I hope I won’t disappoint you guys..
Thank you again for appreciating my work.😊😁
Amazing... Kalyani's letter & her feelings😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 what will happen next???? Update sooooonn
Amazing... Kalyani's letter & her feelings😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 what will happen next???? Update sooooonn
Hi ,
Thank you so much for liking and appreciating.😊
Update will be there soon.
I hope it was not difficult for you to understand the dialogues written in Hindi ? I tried to provide meanings of some difficult Hindi/Urdu words.
Thank you again.😊
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