Hlo Hlo my cute naughty friends๐ค
I want to write one short story ๐ณ
if you all OK with my DS ๐
Here is prologue :
"Mommy I won't talk to you "
Said four years little Jia to her Mom.
Why my cutie pie angry on me, hu bolo
Mehak asked her daughter holding her cute face in her palms.
You know all my friends father's came yesterday to parents meet but you were busy at your work n papa ...she starts sobbing, every year you told that he was definitely come but instead of him dadu attended all meetings, she cried holding her mom.
Her eyes welled up seeing her daughters plight
sorry so sorry my baby she hugged her tightly...
So tell me is this prologue interesting or not ๐
Part one on pg 2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=2&pc=150000317
Part two on page 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=3&pc=150120808
Part 3: page 8
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=8
Part 4: page 11
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=11
Part 5: page 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=13
Last part : pg 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=16#150538395
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