*Forever only Mine* Last part on pg16 dt 17. 06.19

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hlo Hlo my cute naughty friends๐Ÿค—

I want to write one short story ๐Ÿ˜ณ

if you all OK with my DS ๐Ÿ˜†

Here is prologue :

"Mommy I won't talk to you "

Said four years little Jia to her Mom.

Why my cutie pie angry on me, hu bolo

Mehak asked her daughter holding her cute face in her palms.

You know all my friends father's came yesterday to parents meet but you were busy at your work n papa ...she starts sobbing, every year you told that he was definitely come but instead of him dadu attended all meetings, she cried holding her mom.

Her eyes welled up seeing her daughters plight

sorry so sorry my baby she hugged her tightly...

So tell me is this prologue interesting or not ๐Ÿ˜†

Part one on pg 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=2&pc=150000317

Part two on page 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=3&pc=150120808

Part 3: page 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=8

Part 4: page 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=11

Part 5: page 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=13


Last part : pg 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5080996?pn=16#150538395

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Posted: 5 years ago
Congratulations anu for your new story..
Here mehek is mother of 4 year old...what about jia's father..want to know 
Go ahead..
Waiting for the first part...continue soon

The title reminding me of a film called" forever my girl" which i have watched recently  


Edited by friendlyghost08 - 5 years ago
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Wow Anu something interesting cooking up here... continue soon congratulations on your new ff
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wooow ..Our cutie is back with story๐Ÿ˜›
Theur is no chance that we will.say NO to it๐Ÿ˜‰
Prologue is interesting๐Ÿ˜›
Please do continue๐Ÿ˜‰
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Di  ๐Ÿ˜ก
I want to read more work on it and give us a fast update ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Edited by Nandu0123 - 5 years ago
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Mumma Mehak and her cute baby conversation about their workaholic dad looks so cute๐Ÿ˜ณ

Eagerly Waiting for chapter 1โญ๏ธ
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hearty congratulations for your new story Anu di...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—
Am so happy...๐Ÿฅณ
The prologue us interesting as well as intriguing...๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ
Can't wait to read what's in store for us...
Please do continue soon...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice prologue Anu.
So little cutie is missing her daddy . Where is Mr. Daddy ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ???
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank you so much for liking this prologue
Lima Arthi Haseena kamali Jen shinu Nandu
๐Ÿค—
I will update soon cutie pies
n pls silent readers pls hit button if you want first chapter ๐Ÿ˜‰
n my Pboss I want your comment also ๐Ÿ˜•Edited by Anuteja10 - 5 years ago
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Hmm mehak is mom here..that's new coming from you anu...
Continue ...soon...