RagLak TS~ Kheenchay Mujhe Koi Dorr Teri Ore (Continuation)

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Chapter 6

At the day of competition, Swara's painting for Sanskar and Laksh's painting for Ragini was ready and they even won the competition but still they hadn't got their eyes back because frozen eyes weren't available anywhere, the ones which were available, they weren't good for transplant because of carelessness. Two months had passed by and Laksh took Ragini and Sanskar everyday to eye specialists but everyday they returned heartbroken. They decided that they will marry as soon as possible to avoid circumstances. They went to temple and made the arrangements, but Ragini and Sanskar, both were confused if they should really do this or not.

They cancelled the marriage as none wanted to pressurize each other. Next day, Swara met Sanskar at his house and they had a we moment. Sanskar was playing piano. "What type of music do you want to hear first?" he asked. "Happy one," she said and he played it for her. "Woo hoo hoo hoo," he said musically in between making her laugh. "Woo hoo hoo hoo," she too said. "Woo hoo hoo hoo hoo," they both said together and laughed. "Now which one?" He asked. "Love," she said and he played it for her.

For sometime, they both were quiet during the music but then he sang suprising her.

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do
Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do
Aaitbaar Kiska Hai
Intezaar Kiska Hai
Abhi Na Hua To Phir
Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

She too sang:
Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do
Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do
Aaitbaar Kiska Hai, Intezaar Kiska Hai
Abhi Na Hua To Phir
Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do...

Pyar Ke Beech Mein
Hum Nahin Aayenge
Jis Taraf Le Gaya Dil
Chale Jayenge, Chain Sa Aa Gaya
Yoon Laga Dil Gaya
Abhi Na Gaya To Phir
Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do
Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do
Aaitbaar Kiska Hai
Intezaar Kiska Hai
Abhi Na Hua To Phir
Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do...

He sung and a lone tear escaped his eye.
Mujhko Aankhoon Se
Dil Mein Utar Jane Do
Kuch Bigad Jane Do
Kuch Sawar Jane Fo
Ek Bhana Bane, Ek Fasana Bane
Abhi Na Bana To Phir
Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do
Pyar Mein Kho Jane Do
Aaitbaar Kiska Hai, Intezaar Kiska Hai
Abhi Na Hua To Phir
Kabhi Nahin Kabhi Nahin

Pyar Ko Ho Jane Do...
Aaj Kal Phir Kabhi
Phir Kabhi Baad Mein

She sang.
Baat Reh Jayegi
Yaad Hi Yaad Mein
Jo nahi hai kaha
Jo nahi hai kiya
Abhi na kiya to phir kabhi nahi kabhi na
La la la.. la la la..

He was quiet for sometime but then spoke up. "Are you just like I thought you are?" he asked, she said nothing, she took his hands in her hands and made him touch her face. "Yes, you're just like I thought you are, but I m not of your compatibility," he told her.
Her smile dropped.

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Laksh and Ragini were dancing in Laksh's room, she accidentally hit his foot while dancing. "Owww," he moaned. "I m so sorry Laksh," she apologized. "It's okay, but once more,"  he said and she agreed and once again she hit his feet. "Did it hurt?" she asked. "No, it's okay," he said again and they continued. For the third time, she hit again. "Sorry," she said. "What sorry? First you hit and then you say sorry? Halwa hai kya?" He said without realizing and hurting her feelings. "You already know I m blind, I can't see, i already said I may urtt"

She said and tears rolled down her cheeks. He looked on and realized his mistake.

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"Why do you think like that Sanskar?" she asked and he held her hand between his hands. "A positive and a negative always gives a negative in return," he said. She got confused. "Means?" she asked. "Means that I and you can never become us, how will I take care of your expenses? How will we live our life like this? I don't want my darkness to affect your brightly lit life," he said and she hugged him tightly and cryingly.

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Laksh went to Ragini. "I m sorry Ragini," he said and she shook her head. "What sorry? First you hurt me and then you say sorry? Like this, you think we will spend our life? No ways? How many taunts will you tolerate daily? How many times will I get hurt? How will you face the others like this? I m sorry but I can't marry you," she said and was about to leave but he stopped her and hugged her. "Please stay?" he asked and she shook her head and began to leave. He ran after her worriedly and held her hand.

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Swara hugged Sanskar tightly and began to cry. "No, don't say like that, you're my light, my life, my love, my everything," she said and he broke the hug. "Everything isn't just about love, it's about perfection too, I m not perfect, no one is perfect," he said and she cupped his cheeks. "So then you are no one, and this no one won't ever go from my life," she said shedding uncontrollable tears. "You go from here please," he said. She hugged him again crying badly. "I won't ever go leaving you, no one has the right to juge you," Swara said.

"Swara you please go from here," he said making her break the hug and pushed her away, she fell on the couch. "Listen to me for once, hear me out, when my parents themselves gave a birth to two blind daughters in which one is blind from eyes and another is blind in love, then why will they judge you?" she asked and he held her shoulders. "I told you to go, didn't you hear?" he asked and she made him leave her. "I m going, but one thing is for sure, that you are scared like other men, phattu ho tum, jab itna darrtay ho to pyaar kiya hi kyun? Darrtay ho tum rishtay bananay se," she said and rushed out of there.

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Ragini got out of Laksh's house and he held her hand. "I will go by myself, mauhtaaj nahi main kisi ki," she said trying to stop her tears. "Go, but think twice before you take action, I really love you, I said by mistake," he said and she sat in his car. "Then drop me to my house and then leave me forever," she said and he sat in the car and drove off.

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sad that ragsan eye operation is not happening.sanskar playing piano for swara n swasan singing together was sweet.sad that sanskar told swara that they are not a match n they can't be together. swara's dialogues to sanskar were emotional. sanskar pleading her to go n swara saying that he so not  leave him n go was touchy.swara asking that if he is so much scared why did he fall in love was painful.sad that when ragini apologized after stamping herfooton laksh he passed some sarcastic comment...but ragini took it seriously n she too decidednot
to marry him waspainful.
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Ragini and Laksh were driving off. Both were sad. "Ragini, just chuck it, leave it, sorry," he said. "No it's okay, everyone keeps saying stuff, now I m habitual of all this," she said and he got more disheartened

He touched her hand which was on her lap, she moved her hand away, a tear fell from her eyes.

 

 "Ragini please," he said but she shook her head and wiped her tear.

Laksh felt bad seeing her cry.

 Swara walked gloomily on the road.

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 "Ragini please, please forgive me," Laksh tried to calm her but in vain. "No problem, I m used to it," she said with a smile on her face but tears in her eyes

Laksh dropped Ragini at her house, she stepped out and he too stepped out of the car, he came to her and held her hand. "Leave it, don't hold my hand when you want to leave it the other second," she said and just then Swara too came there, she was lost in her own thoughts. "But why will I leave you?" He asked. "Because I m blind. Why will someone love a girl who's in darkness? Why do you want to be a part of my darkness filled world? Go enjoy your life," she said and began to leave. "But Ragini..," he said but was cut in between by Swara."Didn't you hear? Leave her. I will take her with me inside," she said and took Ragini by her hand, he looked on sadly and then drove off

Ragini and Swara came to their room and sat together on the bed. "You're very sad today, right?" Ragini asked. "Hmm," Swara said. "Me too," Ragini told her. "But what happened with you?" Swara asked and Ragini told her everything. "Oh, how dare he? I won't leave him," Swara said and stood up in anger but Ragini held her hand making her sit again. "No Swara," she opposed, Swara breathed heavily in anger."What has happened with you?" Ragini asked and Swara too narrated the whole thing. "Oh, so he told you to go away and you said that he's afraid of relationships?" Ragini asked and Swara nodded. "I don't know why is that so," she said. "Even I m afraid of relationships," Ragini told her. "But why? You can't see but if you would've been able to see, you would've fallen in love with your ownself," Swara said and Ragini sobbed. "What to do Swara? We blind ones are such from our birth, it's natural," Ragini said. "I have a plan," Swara said and then whispered something in her ear to which Ragini began to laugh. "Nice plan," she said and Swara wiped her tears and hugged her.

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Laksh reached home and saw Sanskar beating the punching bag. He went and stood between him and the punching bag and stopped his hand and then made him sit on the bed. "What were you doing?" He asked. "Trying to vent out my anger, I told Swara to go away from my life and she went saying that I am afraid of relationships, and I realized that it's just so true to be false," he told Laksh removing his gloves."I have a plan," Laksh said. "What?" Sanskar asked and he whispered something in his ear and Sanskar began to laugh. "Nice plan," he praised and they had a hug.