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divyadaya13

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Suoerb Os. And i always love the way you end your stories with beautiful, heart touching lines 👏 Edited by divyadaya13 - 5 years ago

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Octothorpe

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Originally posted by: cute.manasi
again great plot... 😃

& what a title...👏👏👏

if only they take it , actors will do great job & it would be totally worth watching...😃

kudos to u dear writer...👍🏼

How I wish we get to see something like this in future.😃

Thank you so much 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Suoerb Os. And i always love the way you end your stories with beautiful, heart touching lines 👏

Aww thank you😃.

I just want the reader to go with some thoughts😳

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 5 years ago

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can so imagine this in golden future

and yes last words are golden words for living

had seen some of best relations based on love and friendship then on blood so can totally relate to it.

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Octothorpe

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
can so imagine this in golden future
and yes last words are golden words for living
had seen some of best relations based on love and friendship then on blood so can totally relate to it.

I'm glad you found the thought relatable 😃
Thank you so much for reading 😳

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Shreya

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Wow, dear Hash! 😳

I loved this one so much...of course, the idea of Meeta and Babita becoming friends wasn't new or not thought of before but Meeta and Hanuman's bond was very much new and the idea instantly was a hit with me. Not siblings by blood but, by heart, without doubt! ❤️

Sometimes, second chances in love or anything for that matter work out better than the first time because we learn from our mistakes. Meeta left Ashok, very good for her! I like the sound of Kunal also, he still has to grow on me.

Another bond I loved immensely was of Meeta and Minnie. And I couldn't help but chuckle when I read Meeta Aunty, the relationship has surely evolved otherwise I am used to hear Meeta, Woh New wali. 😆

The vibrant atmosphere spread out lots of positivity, Hash! I felt really glad after reading this piece! 🤗🤗

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Octothorpe

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mayashika
Wow, dear Hash! 😳

I loved this one so much...of course, the idea of Meeta and Babita becoming friends wasn't new or not thought of before but Meeta and Hanuman's bond was very much new and the idea instantly was a hit with me. Not siblings by blood but, by heart, without doubt! ❤️

Sometimes, second chances in love or anything for that matter work out better than the first time because we learn from our mistakes. Meeta left Ashok, very good for her! I like the sound of Kunal also, he still has to grow on me.

Another bond I loved immensely was of Meeta and Minnie. And I couldn't help but chuckle when I read Meeta Aunty, the relationship has surely evolved otherwise I am used to hear Meeta, Woh New wali. 😆

The vibrant atmosphere spread out lots of positivity, Hash! I felt really glad after reading this piece! 🤗🤗

Aww. This was much awaited😃

I just wanted Meeta to have her own family and what better one than this one of a kind?😉

I would write more of Kunal-Meeta bond to show what exactly the character of Kunal is. In this one I wanted to showcase Meera's bond with everyone especially Mini. In the Show Mini is bit disrespectful (though that's completely understandable but I don't really like for some unknown reasons😆). I want them to develop a beautiful relation in future😳

Thank you so much for such beautiful words. Means a lot🤗