Originally posted by: Mayashika
Hi Meenakshi Di,
When I read the first chapter and now, the latest chapter...the word that was constantly playing in my mind was Different. I can say, this is such an awesome concept and there's a mystery element which you can guess, is already making me restless for the third chapter.The child; I am open to both options. Either it is Rohan's child or maybe, Sameer and Sunaina's lovechild. But, if it is Rohan's, then who is the mother? Shefali? Rohan has a past, that is clear but is Naina aware of the past which included the child? Because, it seems Vishaka is aware of the child.I am going to guess; Rohan won't be able to make it to the wedding and Sameer and naina will marry. But, how will sameer, who is in house, will reach the venue? So many questions! πAs I always say, your strong points are your effective dialogue writing and, this plot is superb and has lots of potential! π€Lots of love,Shreya
Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Another dhamakedar twist!
Rohan is already a father but doesn't keep his daughter with him??! Shefali sounded more like a carer than the child's mother though... looking forward to finding out more about this twist.
Sameer sounds like a much more caring and responsible version of Devdas!
Waiting for the next update and what happens with the shaadi...
Lovely lovely update dear!
Originally posted by: Pallavikamble
Hey hiii i like ur story...
Something new...waiting for next...when ur updating..
Originally posted by: suhaaana
waiting eagerly
Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Waitinggg!!!! Kab tak hume yun hi tadpaoge! :P (This coming from me- the late lateef! :P)
Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Hi Meena π€
Thank you for updating it amidst your demanding work schedules.I can empathize how difficult it is to manage and type the update.A big thank you for that.Coming to the update-Reading this wonderful update I remember those beautiful quotes, and I would surely quote one here..which pretty sums up the update -"Life is Unpredictable.Don't ever get too comfortable.Always be ready for a change".Truly this SS has captured the flavour of this quote so immaculately.The mind boggling twists and turns you have inserted;my dear! I want to read the whole story right now.You are truly checking my patience. But I shall wait to savour it not as fast food but as that finger licking and lip smacking Dum Biryani...π³The starting word of 'Papa' ...So many feels..I will not ponder on 'yeh kiska bacha hai' theories..Again I will wait.I can smell that you have something very very interesting under your sleeves to surprise us and throw us into some good shock.What's a story without a good plot and much better plot twist..And Meena! I tell you someone might get deluded by your title.Jeevansathi will always imply Romance and much more romance only..But you have such a fine intricately woven story with you..I am so glad you decided to pen this down.You have a fine flair for writing in you.Keep writing and getting better ππΌI think I wavered away a bit..Coming back to the update-Shefali taking care of cutie Aahana was a sure surprise element.Her dynamics with Rohan gave several vibes..I can't put my finger what's the history actually.Keeping everything aside my heart really went away to the poor baby..She is ill.Every child would want her /his parents.That adorable munchkin has won a prize too..Meena! Can you make me a character in your story so that I can give her a hug..You made me cry.Why do parents bring child into this big bad world only to leave them to fend for themselves,begging for love and presence.π Though it was so emotional this was my favourite part.How beautifully showed the symbolism of Moon and the surrounding clouds..That scene was so unnerving.I literally shivered with that fraught silence of dark night.And the nasty wait for long..Topping it all Rohan's decision ,so immediate and untimely..Sameer's anger was justified but then his anger on Rohan's visits is another mystery.The reason has to be rock solid.And a big thank you to you again for giving such a screen space to Ramdhari.That character was not explored much in show.But I am liking how you are showing Sameer and his bond..He doesn't feel like just a servant but an intimate friend of Sameer..Just a fine characterization.Kudos to you πThere is so much to say but for now I would conclude.I tell you this is a magic storytelling and hence I request to update it quick.Thanks for the PM and keep coming with your bestest of ideas.With love-Minu
Originally posted by: AMereWanderer
Meenakshi! π€
I received a PM from you regarding this SS a few days ago, but had been really caught up with work and wanted to devote my undivided attention to this piece and so I decided to lessen the work pressure a bit. And here I am!Firstly, may I just express my happiness at seeing another piece of writing from you! I've always adored your stories, especially the dialogues, which is why I'm so happy to see an SS from you! Waise have you considered changing this to an FF? ππComing to the update, Meenakshi you truly left all your readers astounded! I reread the first part of the chapter around three times just to make sure it was Rohan and not Sameer. You truly did the unexpected and unanticipated possible; humare group ki yaad bhi dila di aapne!So Naina aspires to be a writer one day but her dreams lay forgotten amidst her responsibilities and Taiji's taunts. Yeh Taiji ki baatein...π‘ Waiting for the day when Naina finds the courage to dumbfound her with solid comebacks.Naina Agarwal; the girl with many layers. Though she continues to plaster a smile on her face, each day a part of her shatters into pieces, each taunt makes her more vulnerable.And Rohan. Oh my God! Probably because of the image we have of him from the show, it took me a while to digest Rohan and Naina together...kya dhartiphaad idea hai, Meenakshi! πA flirtatious Rohan and a happy Naina..ready to embark on their new phase of life. Along with that, she is also well aware of Sameer's importance in his life...eager to know her views on him.Sameer and Naina are in the same boat; struggling through pain that makes them vulnerable, only for different reasons. Where Naina is shattered from the constant taunts that pierce her heart, Sameer faces the wrath of pain given by Sunaina's betrayal. In order to succumb the one emotion that dares to take his life, he finds himself drowned in intoxication...only because he hasn't experienced the sweet addiction of love. Waiting to know more about his and Sunaina's past.The shayari, the song, everything reminded me of the lost Sameer we saw in Delhi. Wanting to be loved, to be cared.I can't wait to read the second part! Page 5, here I come! πBeautifully penned, Meenakshi! You've left us all intrigued! ππ³
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