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Posted: 5 years ago
Hi,
Thanks for the lovely update.
sumi said, half of what I wanted to.
The cute adjective indicating its vivaan, then Suraj comments on imli and visualising MeeJay in sukor meet..
all ditto felt same.

Chakor's answers 👏, well she possess those abilities by default , so waiting to see how it gets sharpened by being in law college, by the way I love the profession you chose for her.

I have an advocate friend but with your writeup, I think I can come to know new law terms and terminologies in upcoming chapters. liking that aspect.

loving this college fun,tease and environment. Tina is a live wire and poor Adi.

Suraj, already having a record with ACP lal, later can imagine chakor lecture to him..lol

then finally coming to their meet
indeed dreamy with the fireflies. i can visualise those dark eyes,playfulness glowing bright in that light from fireflies.. if seen visually, not only suraj,we would hv been smitten too 😳

oh you stopped right there, now waiting eagerly for next update. update soon.


I enjoyed your reply post to mine too:)
I would love to read more stories from you with all the dream roles you dreamt for her:) and yes wishes for bajao imli mission.😆

 


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Posted: 5 years ago
Interesting update👏
Loved the entire college atmosphere,  can visualize everything👏
The introduction of Vivan was interesting,  loved TinaVivan's first meet😆
Chakor is so intelligent
Loved Susan's conversation😆
Suraj's line about Imli was perfect😆
Sukor's first meet was dreamy with the fireflies
Waiting for next
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice chapter👏
Sukor scene was mesmerising 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Entertaining chapter.
   
Loved how Suraj was mesmerized by Chakor and Chakor's innocent but free spirit.

Tina and Vivaan's scene was cute and funny.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

At the outset thank you so so much for the font and the colour.

It's my pleasure,hope u are okay with the present one
And my first comment... 🤣🤗a big hug to you for 
 kisi ache kam karne se pehle imli ko dekha nahi gadbad hojani hai

just loved it 
Hugs back🤗🤗
I was ROFLing like hell while Pening down this,how I miss suraj's encounters on imli during initial days after leap...😆

ok now coming to my comment

just loved the whole story loving the college atmosphere and ha ha knew when you wrote cute it should be Vivaan, doodhboy😆

Glad to know that,haha I was expecting  this, b/w doodboy sounds cute😳
loved your flow and also so refreshing it is about the whole college scenario

Thanks a lot again,It really means a lot
Chakor wow floored the lecturer Wow!
Yeah after all She's a charmer⭐️

Adi laaala land but poor boy punctured car ...

loved the entire convo of SuVaan which i always wanted in the show too.
I'm so happy u loved their conversation,Add me in,though I loved their tashan I always craved for the brotherly bond sadly it never happened

ACP Hitler LAL ha ha ha not a good intro!!!

IKR we need a character dheela to add spieciness in the story😉
i just loved the fireflies the whole moments i was visualising it.

So lovely
I'm on cloud nine knowing this, i believe I have done justice to the whole scenario😛

waiting for the next update

please update soon!!!

Yeah I will try to update soon


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Hi,

Thanks for the lovely update.
sumi said, half of what I wanted to.
The cute adjective indicating its vivaan, then Suraj comments on imli and visualising MeeJay in sukor meet..
all ditto felt same.
Thank you so much dear!!
Ahh well,Great minds think alike😉
Chakor's answers 👏, well she possess those abilities by default , so waiting to see how it gets sharpened by being in law college, by the way I love the profession you chose for her.
Yeah!! And this college will turn a medium for her to recognize her hidden abilities⭐️I'm so glad u r loving it
I have an advocate friend but with your writeup, I think I can come to know new law terms and terminologies in upcoming chapters. liking that aspect.
I'm happy to know that and Of course u can expect as the main plot will  be revolving around the court 
loving this college fun,tease and environment. Tina is a live wire and poor Adi.
Thank you😳yeah Tina is a wackho and Adi is love sick😆
Suraj, already having a record with ACP lal, later can imagine chakor lecture to him..lol
IKR His poor fate
then finally coming to their meet
indeed dreamy with the fireflies. i can visualise those dark eyes,playfulness glowing bright in that light from fireflies.. if seen visually, not only suraj,we would hv been smitten too 😳
I'm feeling so so satisfied knowing it😳and ya that's true, it would be a dream come true for me seeing Meejay in this sequence 

Oh you stopped right there, now waiting eagerly for next update. update soon.
It was needed to maintain suspense😛

I enjoyed your reply post to mine too:)
I would love to read more stories from you with all the dream roles you dreamt for her:) and yes wishes for bajao imli mission.😆

 Thanks yaa🤗pleasure is all mine,I will surely pen down my dream roles for her and VJ too and Mission imli Bajao is on😎

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Posted: 5 years ago
Thank you😃
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update 👏

Thanks!!
Loved the entire college atmosphere,  can visualize everything👏
I'm so happy to know that😊
The introduction of Vivan was interesting,  loved TinaVivan's first meet😆
Thanks yaa😆
Chakor is so intelligent
Yeah she is indeed sharp witted
Loved Susan's conversation😆
Suraj's line about Imli was perfect😆
I know right🤣
Sukor's first meet was dreamy with the fireflies
 I'm So so glad u found it dreamy😳
Waiting for next
I will try to update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita38

Nice chapter 👏

Sukor scene was mesmerising 😳

Thank you,I'm so happy to know u found sukor scene memorising🤗
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Entertaining chapter.

  Thank you🤗
Loved how Suraj was mesmerized by Chakor and Chakor's innocent but free spirit.
I'm very glad u loved the flow of sukor scene😳
Tina and Vivaan's scene was cute and funny.
Thanks😆
Eagerly waiting for next.
I will try to update soon :)