Kalma TS Part Eight on PG 9 - Page 3

I am absolutely in love with your writing. Its unique still has the essence of the show. 

Talking about this update i loved how Malhar stood for Kalyani and how indomitably he said "Toh bas, ab toh tumhara vishwaas jitne se mujhe koi nahi rok sakta." 😳

Cannot wait for the next update 

PS: thanku for continue this post...love u yrr

Part Four 

SAMPADA had come to this house again. The house that housed most of her bad memories. Everything from her marriage to Malhar to every insult which had been bestowed upon her and her mother. She had never thought of this house as her home. She had not even thought of Malhar's house as her home. To her, her home was with Atharva, wherever he was, she was. 

While this was her attempt at avenging herself, she had noticed the pleasant flush on Kalyani's face when she had exited that room. She was blushing and embarrassed about something. And then, Malhar walked put of the room shirtless. Even though she knew she shouldn't think like this, but even she knew that Malhar had been one fine specimen. He was a gift to womankind. With all those abs highlighted in his shirtless glory, she nearly swooned, but caught herself. 

Coming to a sudden realisation, she finally noticed that Kalyani had rushed out of that room, blushing and now Malhar had came after her shirtless. She had no idea what the hell was going on between them. She was mostly sure Malhar was not in an actual relationship with Kalyani. That their's had been a marriage of convenience. That nothing had actually happened to establish a relationship between them, a relationship that existed between husbands and wives. She could only hope that it was not the case. Otherwise getting custody of Moksh would be even more difficult than it was now. 

KALYANI had noticed that Sampada was checking her husband out. She nearly fainted herself when she noticed that he had come out of the room shirtless. God, what was wrong with this man? Had he gone insane? She immediately rushed back into their room.  

MALHAR had been really happy when he had followed his wife out of the room. But his happiness vanished in seconds when he noticed who was at the doorstep. He lost all his mirth and proceeded towards them with anger. It was clear that he was not happy to see them. 

ATHARVA had thought the same thoughts as Sampada when he noticed Kalyani's and Malhar's behaviour. He was shocked even if he didn't let it show on his face. However, when Kalyani moved back towards their room, he composed himself and in his teasing way said, "Kya baat hai Bhau, Sampada ke jaane ke baad aapne kapde pehna bhi chod diya kya? Itna dukh hai Sampada ke jaane ka, yaa phir Kalyani sirf Moksh ki Aayabhai hai, aur aapka kuch khayal hi nahi rakhti?" After saying this he looked to Sampada and both of them laughed. 

KALYANI had gone to the room to get Malharji a shirt, but when she had came on outside to Atharva's comment, she seethed. She went towards Malharji, grabbed his hand from where it was beside him, put the t-shirt in his hand and proceeded towards Atharva. She, with a bitter smile said, "Kyun, jealous feel kar rahe ho, ke tumhare pass aisi hot body nahi hai, yaa phir iss baat ki jealousy ke tumse itne bade hokar bhi unhe apni body maintain karne aati hai?" As she said this, she wiggled her eyebrows and all that teasing and smugness from Atharva's face disappeared. 

SAMPADA, however, was not going to back down from Kalyani. She moved towards Aausaheb's part of the house and leaned her elbows on the partition. Resting her head in one hand, she said, "Itna gussa, kyun Kalyani, aakhir kyun? Kaunsa tum Malhar ke saath koi sambandh bana pai ho joh tumhe itna gussa aa raha hai? Kaunsa pati-patni ka rishta hai tum dono ka?" Sampada chuckled. Continuing, "Khair woh sab chodo, hum toh aapke saath apni khush khabar baatne aaye hai. Atharva, aao, sabko batao, humari khush khabar." 

ANUPRIYA had heard what Atharva and Sampada had said. She did not want any drama today again, but lately their life was a constant drama. Everyone had heard the ruckus that was going on in the courtyard. They all gathered there, and noticed that Malhar was putting on his t-shirt. Thank God they were not here when he was out here parading himself without a shirt. Then that Atharva had begun speaking, and what he was saying, disturbed her to no ends. 

ATHARVA, who had been let down by Kalyani's spot on description of what he was feeling, immediately lightened up at the opportunity to demean the Deshmukh family. He said, "Toh mein aap sabko yeh khush khabri dena chahta hun." He then produced the papers he had recieved from that ugly old Saahukaar in exchange for his gold teeth. "Aapne jis Saahukaar ko yeh papers deke paise liye the na, uske paise meine de diye, par usne badle mein yeh papers mere naam kar diye." He said mockingly. Looking at Aausaheb's shocked expression, he continued derisively, "Iska matlab, mein yaha, iss ghar mein, aap sab logon ke saath rahunga." 

KALYANI was lost. What the hell was Atharva saying? He and Sampada were to actually stay in this house. Why was this happening? She looked to her Aai and noticed she too looked ashamed. She asked her Aai, "Aai, yeh kya bol raha hai?" But before she could say something, Sampada interrupted her and said, "Kya Kalyani, issi ghar mein rehti hona, toh itna bhi nahi jaanti ki Vivek Mama ne ghar ke papers jis Saahukaar ke yaha girvi rakhe tha, uss Saahukaar ne kal Vivek Mama ki jaan lene ki koshish ki. Aur Atharva ne apni behen ke suhaag ko bachane ke liye uss Saahukaar ko paise de diye. Kyunki, Aausaheb, Aausaheb ke pass toh paise hai hi nahi. Ab mein aur Atharva yahi rahenge Kalyani, aur bahut jald Moksh bhi mujhe Aai maan lega."  

This rocked Kalyani to the core. What would she do now? She had no idea how to get them both out of the house. She turned to look at Malharji, but he was calmly watching the events transpiring. Like he had no worries in the world. She did not understand this man. One moment he was all shirtless and rebellious and the next he was calm and composed. She had to do something, because there was no way, absolutely no f**king way that she would let Sampada and Atharva stay here, in this house when she knew how Sampada and Atharva affected Malharji. She would fight tooth and nail to get them out of the house. 

She turned and looked back Atharva and said, "Tumhe iss ghar mein rehne ki kya zarurat hai, tum toh apne uss mansion mein raho. Bahut ameer ho gaye ho na, tumhe aise chote se ghar mein mazaa nahi aayega. Woh sukoon aur shaanti joh akele ek mansion mein rehne se milegi woh yaha iss chote se ghar mein, itne saare logon ke sath rehne mein kaha milne wali hai." Apparently, this line of attack was too predictable of Kalyani, because immediately, like a counter attack that had already been prepared, Atharva said that, "Kalyani, Kallu uski chinta tum mat karo. Gareebon ke ghar mein bhi ameeron jaise kaise rehte hai mein tumhe batata hun na." He stopped and looked at the temple in the house and moved toward it. He said, "Yaha, yaha banega mera bar, aur yaha har type ki sharaab hogi. Wine . Champagne. Beer. Vodka." He laughed mockingly. 

AAUSAHEB had had enough . As soon as she heard him say sharaab she said, "Poornviram! Iss ghar mein naahi kabhi sharaab aaayi hai aur naa kabhi aayegi." Sampada also aaid, "Kaise rokegi aap hume Aausaheb, naa apke pass humko yaha se nikalne ka koi raasta hai, naa zariya. Waise aapko bata dun ki ab agar mein aur Atharva yaha aa gaye rehne ke liye toh aapko aur Raosaheb ko bhi baaki sabke saath aangan mein shift hona padega. Ab mein aur Atharva thodi nahi sone wale hai aangan mein." And that made Aausaheb worried, she had no idea how she would manage that. 

KALYANI had been outraged hearing Sampada just now. She replied, "Sampada bas karo, bas abhi niklo yaha se. Tumhe yaha rehne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Pehle hi bahut zindagiyaan barbaad kar chuki ho tum yahan pe. Aur tum Atharva, tumhe toh dekhke hi mera khoon khaulta hai." And to this Atharva smiled slyly and said, "Aur tumhe dekh ke mera khoon khaulta hai Kalyani. Tumhe yaad nahi aata, kaise mein tumhe bike pe bhelpuri khilane leke jata tha, kaise tum mera phone leke bhaag jaati thi, tab bhi bahut achi lagti thi, aur aaj jab tum mujhe aise khunas se dekh rahi ho na, tab bhi bada maza aa raha hai. Sampu, agar mein tumse pyaar nahi karta na toh pakka isse bhi apni side kar deta. Kyun haan Malhar Bhau waise bhi aapko pasand to hai nahi, mein hi rakh leta." He said without looking at Malharji. Everyone could hear Sampada cackling in the background.  

MALHAR had been maintaining his calm and collected composure, but he was furious inside. When he heard Atharva's comments on Kalyani, he had be been enraged. He didn't think, before Kalyani could rebuke Atharva, he moved towards the partition, grabbed Atharva by his ear and dragged him by his ear, outside the house. He was so full of rage, that he didn't even notice when the family followed them. He could hear Kalyani's screams to stop, but he wasn't listening. He punched Atharva, right in his face, so hard, he thought that perhaps Atharva's nose broke. But before he could do something else, he saw Kalyani rushing towards him. He was still moving forward to beat up Atharva, maybe break his jaw too, but before he could Sampada stood up in front of him. 

KALYANI saw that as soon as Sampada came in front of Malharji, he stopped. She didn't know why, but that hurt. Because she was sure he had seen her rushing towards him and he hadn't stopped. But before Sampada could say something, he grabbed Sampada by her arm and moved her to the side. She didn't know what was happening now. But she noticed that Malharji was coming towards her. He grabbed her wrist and started pulling her with him to the house. She started following him voluntarily, bit then too he didn't let go of her wrist. Suddenly they had reached their room and he pulled her in front of him and made her turn so that she was sat on the bed. She didn't know what had happened. She startled when she heard a thud. She looked up and noticed that Malharji had punched the wall, that too with the hand that he had used to punch Atharva. "Kya zarurat thi Atharva ki koi bhi baat sunne ki. Kaha hai na meine tumhe ke uss ghar ki baaton mein involve hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai." Malharji said.  

Kalyani was hearing him but wasn't listenimg to him. She leaped forward and grabbed his injured hand. She looked at his injured hand, then at him. Then she grabbed his wrist and made him sit on the bed. She then went to the chest of drawers that had the first aid box. She grabbed it and went back to him. She sat beside him and opened the bottle of dettol to clean the wound and soaked the cotton with it. She then proceeded to apply it to his hand. He hissed at contact. "Dard ho raha hai?" She asked. He nodded his head yes. She applied it more roughly and said, "Hone do!" 

MALHAR looked at her incredulously. She was somethong else. Totally. But she did apply it more gently, so that he wouldn't feel any more pain. He heard that she was mumbling again and asked her to raise her voice. That was a mistake. Because she raised her voice and said, "Waise toh bade calm aur collected se khade the, ek baar yaad kya dila diya Atharva ne, ki kaise woh Sampada ko bhaga kar leke gaya, aur bas, chad gaya aapka paala, maar diya usse." She was really something. Moments before he had promised her that he would win her trust. He could see that there was long way to that goal. He saw that she had finally put the dirty cotton away and was applying some kind if ointment on his wounds. He grabbed her wrist by his other hand, forcing her to look up. "Kalyani, tumhe lagta hai ki meine Atharva ko isiliye maara kyunki usne mujhe Sampada ke baare mein yaad dilaya?" He said. She replied, "Aur nahi toh kya, aapko gussa aata hi sirf mujhpe aur Sampada pe hai. Aur Atharva pe." She freed her wrist and continued to apply the ointment. He was looking at her. Staring at her. She looked up to grab some cotton when she noticed that he was staring. She asked, "Kya dekh rahe hai aap?" 

"Dekh raha hun Kalyani ke tumhe mujhpe itna bhi bharosa nahi hai, ki tum yeh maan pao, ke tum par joh woh comments pass kar raha tha, uske liye meine usse maara." At this Kalyani was stumped. Malhar continued, "Kya mein itne bharose ke laayak bhi nahi hun, ke tum mujhse itna expect karo, expect karo ki mein tumhare liye bhi lad sakta hu. Aur expectations ke saath yeh accept bhi karo ki aaj meine Atharva ko punch sirf tumhari wajah se maara. Jab usne kaha ki waise bhi tum mujhe pasand nahi ho, toh woh tumhe rakhle, tab mujhe joh gussa aaya, woh gusse par mein kaabu nahi kar paaya aur meine usse maar diya. Kyunki Kalyani, 'mein tumhe pasand nahi karta', yeh sarasar jhooth hai. Meine tumse keh diya hai. Kuch bhi jo jaye mein tumhara bharosa jeet kar rahunga, aur iske liye mujhe tumhare liye stand lene ki zarurat hai." 

KALYANI had not ever seen Malharji like this, ever. She still could not believe that he was defending her and not Sampada. But she knew she had to clear somethings with him. She said, "Malharji, aisa nahi hai ki mein aap par trust nahi karti, I trust you, with my life, mein jaanti hun ki jab meri jaan khatre mein hogi, tab aap mujhe bachayenge. Kyunki aapne humesha meri jaan bachai hai. But Malharji, you have to understand, ki mein apni feelings ke saath aapko trust nahi kar sakti. Aapne mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai Malharji, pehle meri baat na sunke aur phir mujhe bina meri hi advice puch, divorce ke liye apply karke. Malharji, mein aap ko trust karti hun, but mein iss baat par trust nahi karti ki agar kabhi koi situation aaye, aur phirse saare saboot mere khilaaf ho, toh aap mujhpe trust karenge. Mein iss baat par trust nahi karti ki aap mujhpe trust karke mere liye stand lenge. Ki aap apno ke khilaaf, mere liye lad jaayenge." While she had been saying this she had applied cotton over the ointment and bandaged his hand with some gauze. She looked up, freed his hand, went to Pillu to feed him.  

MALHAR was baffled by what Kalyani had said. He had been dumbfounded by the accusations she has placed on him. But if he looked back towards his attitude towards her, he could see why she would doubt him. Why she had created walls so high around herself, why she wasn't letting him enter. Because she was scared of being disappointed yet again. He had to think of something so that he could be of help to her. So that he could prove that he did want her trust, in any and every way.  

He would do anything to enter those walls.  

He would f**king take them apart if he had to. 

Though few of the scenes were from the show but u gave them a different touch...which I really appreciate.

Good going.