AKSHAN OS- chapter 6: CHAOS ( part 2)updated

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Posted: 5 years ago
Salam and hi.
I am back 🥳

I am loving show these days..
Apart from new song..mi only like the qawali part😆...but khair..Anshan are magical.

This is a bit continuation of honeymoon OS. If not read uptil now, you can check os  pin post.

Enjoy.
AKSHAN OS- chapter 6: CHAOS ( part 1)

Its being 2 hours since their arrival from Ankara and since then, guddan was speaking non stop.she described every detail, every moment ( hiding the obvious ones) to especially daadi who was blessing this couple in heart.

" pata hai daadi, hum  n wahan itni achi achi jagayain dekhin or ap Sab k lye itni sari chezain layay" she unpacked her bag.

On other hand, akshat has straight away directed himself towards his room, have shower and throw himself on his bed.

Downstairs, one by one, guddan started to open her stuff.
" daadi, apke lye yeh shawl ,kaisi hai?"

" bauhat piyari meri  bachi"
While others response was like this:

Laxmi " saasu maa, makeup acha to hai but shayad apko brands ka pata nahi.kabhi lene ki haisiat Jo nahi hui.yeah itna acha brand nahi."

Sarru " saasu maa! Thanks! But yeh bags to India main bhi mil jatay. Turkey ka to essence hi nahi in main"

Durga " jab tumhain brands ka, quality ka aur  hmari choice ka pata hi nahi,to kun paise zaya kiye  AJ k"

Daadi was looking at guddan who was taking all these comments with a smile.
" kab yeh loog is bachi ki kadar karain ge"she thought 

" theek kh rahay ap loog.ainda apki pasand poch kar hi laongi main."

" wese saasu maa, ap n apne liye kia liya ?" sarru chirped.

" han han.dekhayay. AJ n apko kia dilaya?" Laxmi added.

"Woh, yeh  Sab" Guddan opened her second bag.all three bahus were shocked to see items in her bag. What was not present in that bag; from dresses to shoes to accessories,bags, perfumes and all of that of top notch brands.

" wah saasu maa! Hamare liye apko brands or style ka pata nahi tha  aur apne liye Sab s top ki chez li hain  apne" laxmi taunted.

" yeh to uncle n Sab liya hai.ap logon ki chezain to main n li hain" 

" BA's karo Ab.kab s yeah shopping shopping laga  rakha hai. Aik to bachi tum logon k lye tohfe layi aur tum log ho k nuqs p nuqs nikale ja rahay." 

All of them stood quitely when laxmi mind lit up.
" acha saasu maa, apka honeymoon kesa raha?"

Guddan shut her eyes with all intimate visions of turkey.

" woh  ...sahi tha" she didn't know how to respond.

" nahi Na...sahi s btayay. AJ kitne romantic the. Ap wahan s kia yad  lekar ayin"

Other three witness have different expressions ; daadi blushed, sarru intrigued while durga indifferent .as guddan was about to speak, a sudden feel erupted.her stomach churn and rushed straight away towards her room.

" guddan beta!"
" sassu maa!"

All four ran behind her.akshat almost felt that a rescue operation started in his room when guddan banged into the room followed by her followers.he looked almost lost on his bed ,messy hair, red sleepy eyes with an inner and trouser.

All ladies were banging on washroom door while akshat was trying to figure out the situation.
10 minutes later guddan came out of washroom ,dabbing her face with towel.she looked drained.daadi took her and made her sit on bed.

" kia hua beta?"

" daadi ...woh vomit. Bauhat ajeeb feel horaha." She laid on bed.on other hand, akshat was still sitting on bed with closed eyes.
Laxmi eyes opened in shock.
" to yeh layi hain app saasu ma"

" kia bol rahi hn ap laxmi bahu" she was still drained.

" dekha durga di. Maine kaha tha.AJ k pota s phle hmara dewar Na ajayay. Dekhye! Saasu ma pregnant hain."

Guddan almost fainted on bed in shock while akshat, who was almost in sleep, his hand slip on edge of bed and he banged on floor.

" AJ.aram se" durga moved in front.

Guddan was almost in tears. " we just kissed! Us s yeh kese hosakta"

" daadi!!!" She started crying loudly which made daadi think " can this be true." While other three stared in disappointment towards AJ who was still on floor.
" main n yeh kab kia!"

Continued.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice os😊
Continue please
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Oh pls continue soon attiya!
Can't wait to read ahead 


Idk why but the last scenes in these parts were hilarious and cute too😆

Enjoyed it alot👏
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We just kissed🤣
Guddan is just too innocent. Sabke saamne pol khol
"Maine ye kab kia?!"😲
Baffled Aj falling down the bed in shock was 😆
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Awesome cute update 
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Omg last part was best🤣
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Haha this is quite funny 🤣
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What an os the last one 'main ne ye kab kiya'  I am still laughing 
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Beautiful update dear
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Behen thank you for being back & continuing the most loved honeymoon OS...
When I read the title I  didn't know that the  Chaos would be this awesome. ...

I think she vomited due to jet lag ...
but love what they are thinking...

Aww guddu is so masoom...
AJ being stressed ke kab kiya...
Pur Awesomeness ...

Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting 
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