OS :- Yeh Muhabbat Hai !

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Posted: 5 years ago

In this OS I have assumed all MUs between Akshan sorted. All bahus are in good term with Guddu, all villains have disappeared & Guddu have joined college. This is mainly from Guddu's POV so I decided to keep AJ's side of feeling ambiguous for you guys to interpret. 

Guddu stormed in her father's house all upset & ignoring all questions went straight to her room. Meanwhile AJ calls chutki to ensure if Guddu is there or not as she has turned off her phone & she reacted very weirdly to him. & Chutki assures him she is here but mood is too off & hence not answering anything to anyone but tells him not to worry, she will be hopefully all right within few hours.

Meanwhile Kaushalya started her taunting regarding Guddu to Bhushan & he just sat  all stressed resting his head on his hand. But Chutki decided to check on Guddu abit later.

Guddu kept thinking on what happened. It has been a month she shifted to hostel for exam month. It was AJ's decision as he felt she was being too distracted in Jindal Bhavan chit chatting with Dadi, kathoor, bahus & was not concentrating on her studies but she can't be that laid back during exams.So he announced his decision to send her to hall for a month to which Dadi strongly protested but he gave no ears to her & to this Durga even supported him & somehow managed to convince Dadi. 

& Guddu clamed down Dadi by assuring her that she will be all right on this as she knows she can't overthrow this decision of AJ's. But there was something else pricking her other than missing everyone with this which she couldn't understand.

While in hostel, as AJ had thought, she had all her concentrations dedicated to her studies. Though dadi had somehow agreed to her staying in hostel, but she put a strict instruction as for her all the 3 times meals must be delivered from home & for any other snack, she must order from Jindal restaurant only. & rightly so as the hostel food was such that anyone can fell easily sick. Even the rest of hostel mates usually eat outside.

So everyday, her Breakfast, Launch & Dinner used to come from Jindal bhavaan via drivers. Somedays Dadi herself used to come with the breakfast as she would develop the desire to see her gurdiya from time to time. 

But, the Dinner always used to be delivered by AJ everyday in a way to make up for the tough decision he imposed on her. They used to do their dinner together in his suv parked front of her hostel. This way he used to keep a check on her studies & preparations too. Also solve any type of difficulties she faces. Though the hostel had restriction on girls going outside after 8pm but AJ had special permission from college authorities which gave him no restriction on meeting Guddu. 

Though his a constant uncle like behavior of keeping tab of her studies irritated her, but she cherished the moments they used to share in his car with AJ listening patiently to all her non-stop blabbering till its too late around 11 pm when he had to remind her to go to sleep. & she used to silently leave while pouting.

But since she has shifted in hostel for some reason she has got more sensitive to AJ. His words, his behavior, his gestures towards her has started to impact her considerably more than before. His strict uncle like scolding which she used to ignore before, now pricks her & angers her at times to the extend of being teary when she feels she hates him the most in the world. But at the same time his small gestures of appreciations make her heart swell. She keeps waiting the whole day for dinner time when AJ comes. But she can't understand the reasons behind these changes. She misses all but why this very relevant change is regarding AJ only.

Today she was very happy as today was last paper & today only she is going back to Jindal bhavaan. So after finishing the paper when she was on the way to hostel to gather her stuffs, her way was blocked by a nerdy looking guy wearing very loose T-shirt. Guddu for a moment was shocked & for some weird reasons she was finding him very repelling & a very strange smell was coming from him. He introduced himself as a dropper & needs to clear a doubt as the next batch of paper that he has to appear starts within 25 min & everyone else is busy in lunch. Guddu reluctantly agrees to help but he convinces her to come aside under the shadow of the nearby tree as he is unable to see what she is writing due to too bright sun. As soon as they reach there within no time, the guy grabs her  hand and pricks her with a needle. Guddu realizing the blunder, gives him a kick , bites his hand & manages to run away. The hostel was just 10 min. away while she was running but she was loosing consciousness & getting weak. While the guy was following & was only about 7 feet away.

Then her sight started blurring & all turned blank, her knees gave up & she felt a slight touch of the creep on her bare arm. But the next second she felt engulfed by the familiar pairs of strong muscular arms & heard sound of the creep's scream before losing consciousness. 

Next woke up in college medical, & heard the doctor "she is all fine now & can go home".

Saying this the doctor left, & she sat up to face a very angry AJ. & before she could open her mouth, he blasted her with lectures on why did she even go near him as he was so evidently smelling of drugs, how she hasn't learn to judge people yet,etc etc.Today his words were pricking her like arrows more than before & she was feeling very angry about it. How dare he lectures her in this way while her shifting in the hostel was completely his decision. First he himself sent her away from his home & now he is lecturing her on how disappointed he is with her. But she was getting angry as for some weird reason, her tears have started to flow which is so unlike her especially when he gives those 'haq jataoing' lectures. She was feeling like hating him. So she decided she had have enough & told him straight while trying to control her crying, " Baas ! bohot ho chuka..." to which AJ stopped & was taken back by this sudden outburst along with seeing her in tears, a sight he can't bear. She continued, " ...humein aur nahin sunna, aur na hi hum aapke saath jayenge ". Saying that she stormed off the medical while AJ stood confused & dumb folded as before too he has scolded her numerous times but she has never reacted like this.

When entering this house she was still angry but now lying in her bed in her old room she is feeling regretful of her behavior with AJ. As his lecture was for her own good. She did feel repelled by that guy & that weird smell then why didn't she act upon her instinct. & most importantly why did she react to AJ like that ? & now she is missing him. 

It was evening when Guddu was lost in her thought, Chutki comes inside room & sees Guddu lying on bed with her eyes fixed on the ceiling. 

Chutki :- humm ! toh kyu pareshan kar rakha hai jiju ko ? 

Guddu :- Hume toh lagta hai humne sabko pareshan kar rakha hai... Khudko bhi. 

Chutki :- di ! aap kehna kya chahti ho ?

Guddu :- kya hum bohot bure hai ?

Chutki :- Nahin itni bhi nahin... 

Guddu :- kya humme logokon ko parak ne ki samaj nahin ?

Chutki :- samaj toh acchi bhali hai aapme di, aur kuch mamlon mein toh apni umer se bhi zyada...magar jab aapko gussa aa jata hai na, wahan apki maat mari jati hai ! ...Aur tab accha, bura kuch nazar nahin aata apko.

Guddu :- abb toh hume khud per bhi atbaar nahin raha...Ki jinhe hum accha samajte hai, woh acche hai ya nahin, ya jinhe bure samajte hai, woh wakai bure hai ya nahin ...

Chutki :- yeh toh bohot simple hai, jo acche honge, woh dil ko bhi acche lagenge, aur jo dil ko na bhaye samajle woh bure hi honge.

*hearing that, Guddu lifts up her head from pillow & sits*

Guddu :- aur agar dil dhoka de raha ho toh...

*chutki smiles slightly as she now understood where this is going*

Chutki :- nahin dil humesha sachaa hota hai aur akkal juti... galatfemiyan humesha dimag ko hoti hai, dil ko nahin.

Guddu :- kya dil kissi ke liye nafrat aur mohabbat ek saath pal sakta hai ?

Chutki :- sawal hi paida nahin hota...jab mohabbat kisi ke dil mein jaga bana leti hai na, toh nafrat ko kick maarke bahar nikal deti hai.

Guddu :- aur kaise baata chale ki mohabbat dil mein jaga bana rahi hai ?

*while Chutki is now smiling widely, Guddu's restlessness seems to be increasing with each query*

Chutki :- Kya hogaya hai aapko di ? test le rahi hai aap meri ? aap hi se toh seekha hai sab kuch...

* Guddu now restless & desperate for answers gets up to sits near Chutki at the side of the bed & grabs her hand*

Guddu :- please bata na Chutki...dekh aaj hume aisa lag raha hai ke hum kabhi bade hue hi nahin...humhe kuch patha hi nahin...hume kuch nahin patha...kya sahi, kya galat ...

kya karna chaiye...kya nahin...yeh ho kya raha hai ? hume kuch samaj nahi aa raha...hum jante hai, tu humse choti hai per aaj shayed tuhi hume raah dikha sakhe...

*Guddu looked at Chutki with pleading eyes & Chutki realized the dilemma that has engulfed her sister.So she took Guddu's hands on hers & held tightly giving a small but assuring smile*

Chutki :- Achha apni ankhe band kare, aur meri har baat ka jawab apni dil se maangiye...

*Guddu gives her a confused look but Chutki insists so she does*

Chutki :-  Jab koi app ke liye, bina kisi garz ya talab ke liye, kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar ho... yeh muhabbat hai

Flashback:- *AJ tying his hanky on her feet in darga* Guddu waking up on morning after having high fever at night & finding AJ asleep resting just his head on bed,sitting on the floor & holding her hand while still completely dressed up in his formal suite from yesterday *AJ lighting diya & putting flowers on front her mothers portrait*

Chutki :- Jab koi apni barsaat se bardke aapko khusiyaan dena chahe...saare ghaam uthake, phir bhi aapko muskurata dekhna chahe... yeh muhabbat hai

Flashback:- *Guddu coming out of collage after finishing her paper & finding AJ sleeping on his car in  as he was awake the whole night outside her hostel helping her revise after being busy the whole day in restaurant*

Chutki :- Jab aap kisi ke saat bura kare, aur aapka dil khud aapko lanat malamat karne lage...toh samjho yeh muhabbat hai

Flashback:- *AJ getting beaten by Dutta's goons* AJ's grief sicken face after Antra's portrait got stolen*

Chutki :- Jab har taraf andhera mehsus ho raha ho aur ek, sirf ek shaks ka tasawar, roshni ki kiran ki tarah jagmagaye...toh yeh muhabbat haai

Flashback:-* AJ stepping in to save the diya on her hand during diwali pooja* AJ putting all her galti wali chits on fire*

Chutki :- Aur jab koi band aakhon se hi nazar aane lage... phir toh yeh wakai muhabbat hai

Flashback ;-* cake smashing on AJ's face* marriage proposal* AJ pulling her in announcement party* pool scene* engagement* AJ putting dupatta on her on mehendi night while saving her from goons* haldi* wedding* KC* diya making* darga sequence *

both tying threat together in darga* 

Finally Guddu opened her eyes & tears of realization started escaping silently. While she was drawn in this realization, Chutki seeing her state decided to move out silently, giving her time to let it sink in.

A smile appeared in Guddu's face as her tears changed to those of happiness as she realized that, she was in love with AJ. She finally got her answers. She felt the urgency to see AJ at this instant so without thinking about anything, she ran out of the house like wind leaving everyone except Revti shocked who just smiled & shook his head before noticing Guddu's purse on the sofa that she threw while entering.

Meanwhile Guddu reached the ground level, AJ was coming out parking his suv. He stopped when he saw Guddu who without wasting a second ran towards him & embraced him in a hug. AJ felt relieved & at peace in her embrace & hugged her back with equal intensity.

Witnessing this scene from the entrance of the building were Bhushan & Revti who have come to give Guddu's purse behind her. Both of them looked away & Bhushan shaking his head tells Revti, " jaa in bewakoofon ko andar leaa, na ladne ka salika na muhabbat ka tareeka...ahmaak kahinke ! " & left the scene. 

While Revti just rolled her eyes as now she has been assigned the task of disturbing the love birds. Then looked at the beautiful sight & decided to delay for 2 minutes atleast.

P.S. Dialogues taken from, one of my favorite Pakistani drama "Dil Lagi" & the VM I made yesterday was on the title track of this drama.

I know this turned out too be a bit too filmy πŸ˜† so feel free to share your honest opinion on this. 

All tamatar, annda, chappal are welcome πŸ€—

Edited by captainplus - 4 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow! *Past all expressing*πŸ‘
What an amazing storyline u gave 
The best part was adding ur own imagination of Akshan scenes ( specially, Akshat looking after her while she had fever) πŸ˜³
Now, I want this scene in the show man!!!!πŸ˜†


Btw..what was that "ahmaak kahinke" in Bhushan 's speech ? I couldn't understand ...

And if possible pls provide the link of this drama πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 5 years ago
nice os! i immediately remembered dillagi when i read bhushan's dialogue at the end πŸ˜†  ... well adapted!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow it was amazing OS
I liked the idea the way Guddan remembers all the moments of AJ with her
You wrote so well that I could imagine it
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Posted: 5 years ago
Captain Kuch kahna hai apse 
1. Apke har baat pe hamare chehre pe agar smile as Jaye to
2. Apki har post hame positive vibe de Jaye to 
3. Apki cute funny nosy aunty os hamko bhaaa Jaye to 
4. Apke Galti we banaye VM Sare records Tod Jaye to 
5. Apka ye lovey dovey os Dil Choo Jaye to 



Ha captain ha yeh mohabbat hai or hamko apse mohabbat ho gayi haiiiπŸ˜†

Just love u yrrr captain😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful os 
Loved it
So will we get Aj love realization part too
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Wow! *Past all expressing*πŸ‘

What an amazing storyline u gave 
The best part was adding ur own imagination of Akshan scenes ( specially, Akshat looking after her while she had fever) πŸ˜³
Now, I want this scene in the show man!!!!πŸ˜†


Btw..what was that "ahmaak kahinke" in Bhushan 's speech ? I couldn't understand ...

And if possible pls provide the link of this drama πŸ˜ƒ


@Bold I think we really have good chances of getting similar scene in the show lets hope for the best πŸ˜³

'Ahmaak' means something like 'fool' or 'khiska hua'. He was  calling them that cause they were doing PDA in the full public view in front of a middle class apartment building πŸ˜†

This drama is a 25 episode series & here is link to the playlist :-

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

nice os! i immediately remembered dillagi when i read bhushan's dialogue at the end πŸ˜†  ... well adapted!


I am glad you liked it πŸ˜³

Dil Lagi is a real khazaana of amazing dialogues & that line from Anmol's mom is one of my favorites as it summed up the story so well πŸ˜†



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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you πŸ˜Š
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Originally posted by: samiaadiya12

Amazing os

Love it😊


Thank you dear πŸ˜³