AKSHAN TS Dil Ka sukoon part 3 last part page 2 on 24 dec - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
Lollipop dedi firse😆
Not fair
I wanted to read the *details*😉
I liked rewati ka sharmana😳
Aj ki naughty insinuations😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awww awww awww awww awww👏😳

Jaldi update Karl next part I can't wait ⭐️😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Loved it!
Akshan r couple goals here ❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hayee Kitna romantic tha
Guddan giving good news scene was best
Loved it
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Superb 
Update Soon 
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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 3 (last part)


Guddan opened her eyes n realise that they were in the temple she asked him to leave her. When AJ come out of embrace she found him with teary eyes. She wiped out his tears just then AJ stopped her doing so n said"Nahi guddan bahne do main aaj samajh paya ki Khushi k ansu hote kya Hain. Antara k Jane k baad jab mujhe tum Mili to main Khushi se Bhar utha tha magar aaj Jo Khushi tumne mujhe Di hai na Uske baad main satve aaasmaan par hu. Thank u so much guddan for coming Into my life for making my life so beautiful n lovely. "


He just then went on his knees while other started noticing them guddan was blushing hard n AJ said with full volume of his throat"Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal thank you so much for coming into my life I Love You..." Saying this he opened his hands in a gesture of embrace. Everyone was smiling their. Guddan asked him to get up.

First AJ called dadi n inform her about the good news. They went inside the temple to took the ashirwaad of lord Krishna because of who they are together or should say unseperable.

When they reached home dadi stopped them. She did the ritual of arti n Nazar utarna of her bahu. When guddu touch her feet dadi stopped her n said" Nahi puttar Nahi abse 9 mahine tak koi zarurat Nahi h paanv choone ki" guddu hugged dadi. N then she went inside Kishore n vardaan handed her a beautiful bouquet of her favourite flowers. N said congratulations to her where they hugged AJ n said congratulations papa.


All the three DIL welcome her n hugged her with all the love of their heart n says congratulations sasumaaa.

After it they went to their bedroom as guddan entered AJ came n hugged her from behind n said "I Love you" she replied"I love you too"


He said"see Maine tumhare liye Kuch order Kiya hai ye Dekho" she opened the box n saw a full size XXL kind of dresss pink in colour. He continued"maine padha that Kahi that u will be needing this" she Decided to tease him n said "jab main moti ho jaungi" he gulped as he realise what he said."Nahi Mera MATLAB tha zarurat padegi iski " she again said"jab main moti ho jaungi "


"Nahi tum glow karogi na abhi BHI Karti ho". She asked him " ok but why this is pink" he replied" b coz I know it's a girl just like u " guddan was in her action mode "achcha ji aapki marzi hai kya or agar aisa h to let me make it clear that ladka Hoga "


A- jee Nahi ladki hogi.


G - achcha ji khaamkhah ki zid hai


Just then guddu gets a call it was the doctor she said something n guddan's facial expression changes.


A- kya hua guddan kiska call tha


G- Dr Ka wo kah Rahi thi that I have to be more careful.


A- guddan koi complications h kya batao mujhe.


They talk something n went downstairs n they saw that there was teams.


Durga vardaan n dadi was saying ki ladki hogi


Jabki Lakshmi saru n Kishore was saying ki ladka Hoga.


Just then they saw akshan coming down.


Lakshmi started


L - sasumaaa Dekhiye na ham kah rahe h ki ladka Hoga.


D -aise kaise are ladki BHI to ho Sakti h


They continued fighting when AJ Interrupted


A- aap log jante h ki apki sasumaaa apki har problem Ka unique solution batati h to aaj b in k pass is problem Ka solution h


Kya solution h AJ all Dil asked.


A- batao guddan


G- firstly she fire a glare at him n said maa wo abhi dr Ka call aaya tha unhone Kaha that we have to be double careful


D-koi complication h kya puttar


G - Nahi maaa we have to be double careful as that I m pregnant with twins. According to the sonography reports.

All of them started dancing. As they knew ki agar twins h to it can be a boy n girl both.


While AJ n guddan was smiling at their happy faces.


Days started to pass guddan's baby bump started to show.


One night


AJ got up n saw guddan was woke up he asked


A-kya hua neend Nahi AA Rahi kya??


G - ye Aapke dono badmaash mujhe sone hi Nahi de rahe Raat me khel rahe Hain


A- guddan how can they play now.


Guddan held his hand n put on her womb AJ gets some vibration


G - pichchle do ghante se football ki game chal Rahi h abhi tak to din me khelte the ab Raat me b tang Karna shuru Kar Diya hai.


A- bachcho chalo so jao ab mammma ko b sone do tang mat Karo unke.


N literally Like an Ideal children they slept so guddu slept in akshat's arms.

One day


A- guddan u have already had 3 no more ice-cream now.


G- apko hamesha MERI hi Galti lagti h kya main Khud hairaan hu how can I have three I m craving for more pls yrr le AAO


AJ got defeated


G-suniye pls


A- ha pata hai ek chocolate chips n one butter scotch.


One night


Guddan woke him shaking


A-kya hua water bag burst hua kya just a sec hospital chalte Hain.


He ran out of bed.she stopped him


A- no guddan not again ab na tum sach me uthapgi to b Nahi uthunga


G- mujhe pata hai agar ye drill 1000 Baar b hui tab b uthoge aap.


A- kaise


G- kyonki har drill k baad aap yahi Bolte ho.



One day they went hospital for maa routine check up . They was coming back just then she screams aaa  maaa


They ran to ot.

After n hour their was a boy n a girl in akshat's arms.  Akshat went to guddu n said


A- thank you so much I love you.


G- I love you too...


Then he shows their kids to her she caressed them kissed their foreheads.

After some days they return to home.


They took some family pics.


Then the teams again started


Ladki k liye Kavya gitanjali ...etc etc


Ladke k liye rehaan shivaay etc etc


Dadi then said


D-KOI are Bhai Jin k bachche hain unhe BHI to poocha Karo ...


Ha sasumaaa AJ bataiye na aap logo me kya naam socha hai...


A- maa such Kahu to main ise sambhalne k chakkar me bhool hi Gaya.


D-or guddan tune Tu BATA


G- maa hamne bete k liye socha hai ATHARV ...


A- or beti k liye????????


G- pls hame galat mat samajhiyega magar beti k liye hamne socha hai


A- curiosly) kya bolo na?


G- ANTARA ...


They aap was super duper happy n teary eyed also dadi just hugged guddu n took her balaiyyyaaan.


After the chaos was over they went to their room.


Guddu saw AJ thoughtful about something. She went n


G - aap naraaz Hain hum se???


Akshat turned to her she saw him teary eyed.


A- Maine aaj tak tumhe apni biwi dost Life partner or should I say humsafar samjhaaa but aaj kahne me koi Shaw Nahi Raha hai ki tum MERI humdard ho tumhe pata chal Gaya tha ki Maine Apne beti k liye antara naam socha tha.


Guddu hugged her n said


G - Jo BAAT ek Dil se doosre Dil tak pahunche wo hi pyaar hai.


They hugged each other with sukoon


N somewhere Antara who wanted Akshat to move forward in his life was also resting in peace with her Dil Ka sukoon




Sorry folx could not help it but I literally want this ki akshan ki beti Ka Naaam antara ho...


Tell me how was that


Ande tamatar Sab Kuch Ka swaagat hai


Ragu dear AKSHAN promise complete Kiya Maine.


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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow nice chapter kavya main ne bhi socha tha ke Akshan ki beti ho to wo Antra naam rakhe 
By the way woo 1000 drill wala scene kuch******** aise bhi Serial ki scene se inspired hai kya just my thought as i am previously fan of that serial

Do write more like this
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Posted: 5 years ago
Kavya 🤗
Aaj tak ki Teri best ts thi ye👏
So beautifully written 😳

I too love the idea of the name Antara for their daughter 😳

Accha vo dialogue 1000 drills vala maine dekha h kissi show ya movie me ... I can't recall 😲😆

Fantastic superb update 👏

Aur ye kya? U changed my name to Ragu????😆
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Wow nice chapter kavya main ne bhi socha tha ke Akshan ki beti ho to wo Antra naam rakhe 

By the way woo 1000 drill wala scene kuch******** aise bhi Serial ki scene se inspired hai kya just my thought as i am previously fan of that serial

Do write more like this



Oh haha haan yaad aa gya 

Ussi serial se tha maine suna hai😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update
Love the ending 
Beautifully written