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Sajda...tera sajda I'll worship you Part 1

When I put a poll for choosing Ruchika's love interest both Zain and Parth got equal number of votes.I chose Zain as I felt that he suits my character more and Ashini Patel has already paired up Parth opposite Ruchika in her FF Truth of life.



A party...
Sameer-Shrishti were dancing.

Suddenly Shrishti sneezed.
Shrishti:Sorry Sameer.Let me go to the washroom.
Sameer:Ok.
Shrishti went to the washroom.When she returned she was shocked to see Sameer dancing with another girl.Sameer saw Shrishti fuming in anger.

Shrishti walked off angrily.Sameer ran after her.
Sameer:Shrishti..listen to me.
Shrishti:I don't want to hear anything.I just went just a few steps away from you and in my absence you started romancing another girl.

Sameer:Shrishti..you are misunderstanding me.I was not romancing,but dancing.as you know she is my colleague.She was alone,so she just asked me for a dance.I could'nt say no she is my colleague.
Shrishti:Why does she want to dance with a married man?It's your fault.You are not a baby.You could have refused.But you did'nt do it.
Sameer:Shrishti..I am sorry.
Shrishti:I don't want to hear anything.
They reached home.Still they were fighting.Seeing this Preeta shouted:Will you guys please stop it?
Shrishti:Di..this Sameer only started it.

Sameer:No Bhabhi.
Shrishti:Because of you only I started fighting.
Preeta:Stop it and patch up.
Shrishti:Patch up with him?No way.
Sameer:If you are not interested then even I am not interested for patch up.
Preeta:You both are spoiling your relationship because of ego and immaturity.Only when you lose your love you will understand it's pain.
Preeta's eyes were full of tears.She walked away
Sameer and Shrishti became upset.They walked in different direction.

Preeta looked at her and Karan's wedding photograph.
Preeta:I know that you hate me.That's why you are taking up extra work to be away from me.
But I miss you Karan.I am waiting for you to return home.I know that you will come soon as you can't avoid your dearest sister Krithika's engagement party.Who thought that our beautiful relationship will ruin like this?

Flash back...

Hospital...
A nurse:Dr.Preeta..an emergency case is there.An Accident case.
Preeta:Bring him immediately.

An injured person was brought.Preeta examined him.
Preeta:Bring him to the operation theatre immediately.Get ready for the surgery.
Preeta did the surgery.
Later he got his consciousness.Preeta was relieved.
Preeta:Thank God you are alright.We got you from the accident spot.No one knows anything about you.What is your name?What are you doing?
His face became dull.
Preeta:Say..what is your name?

He:Doctor...doctor...I ...I can't remember my name.
Preeta was shocked.

He started crying.Preeta felt sad.
Unknowingly she caressed his head.
Preeta:Please don't be upset.You just had an operation and a surgery.You are still in shock.May be after some hours you will regain your memory.

After a day too He could not even recall his memory.Preeta realized that he has lost his memory.
Karan:I lost my memory.Right doctor?
Preeta became upset.

Karan cried bitterly.
Preeta:Look...you had a terrible accident.Your life got saved.That itself is a luck.You just lost your memory,not your life.You may get your memory later.Or you can create new memories.

Karan:But doctor..I don't even have a name.I am nameless.I have no identity.
Karan held her hand:Tell me do I have any name?

Preeta recalled the movie which she saw on the previous day.She remembered the male lead's name.
Preeta:Then I will give you a nice name.Karan.How is it?
He smiled:Karan..it's a good name.Thank you Doctor.
Preeta smiled.
Karan:When will I get discharged?
Preeta:You just had a surgery.It will take some time.
Karan:I am not in a hurry to leave the hospital.Because I have no home to go.This hospital is my only home doctor.

Preeta looked at him emotionally.

Present...


Krithika attended  phone call.
"Hi sweet heart".
Krithika's face blossomed:Ranbir!
Ranbir:Ya.your Ranbir.
She blushed.
Ranbir:What are you doing?
Krithika:I was just looking at the moon and stars.
Ranbir:You know what?Even I was looking at them.
Krithika:You too?
Ranbir:We both doing the same thing is a beautiful coincidence.But not a surprise as our hearts and minds think alike.



She smiled.
Ranbir:Seeing the glittering stars I was reminded of your glittering eyes.And the moon reminded me of your beautiful face.That's how I decided to all you.
Krithika blushed.
Ranbir:The atmosphere is so romantic.I wish i were with you now.
Krithika smiled:Even I wish for it.But wait for 2 more days.It's our engagement.Then we can see each other.

Ranbir:I can't wait for that day.I am longing to see you.
Krithika:Me too.
He smiled.
Ranbir:Till then give me something to keep it with me.
Krithika:What?
Ranbir:Kiss.
She became shy:No no.

Ranbir:Why?I just asked for a kiss over the phone.Not on my body.Then why?Give yaar.
Krithika:Ok ok..I will.
She closed her eyes and placed a kiss on the phone.Ranbir enjoyed it's feel.
Ranbir:Your kiss reached my cheek.Very romantic.
She was shy.
Ranbir:The next time hopefully your kiss will reach my lips.
Krithika cut the call due to shyness.He giggled.

Shrishti changed her dress and put the bed sheet properly.Sameer went near her.
Sameer:Shrishti..
She did'nt mind him.
Sameer:Shrishti..do you remember our confession moment?

Flash back...

Sameer gave a red rose to Shrishti.She blushed.

Maine pucha ye dil se
Main kyu hoon jahan mein
Ek dhahkan boli tere liye



Sameer:Shrishti..will you spread fragrance in my life till the end like this red rose?

Maine yaadein tarashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di tere liye



Due to surprise Shrishti could not believe it:What?
Sameer:I love you Shrishti.Will you marry me?

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye



Shrishti nodded smiling:Yes..I love you too Sameer.

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye


She embraced him in excitement.


Joh main kehta hoon
Joh sunnta hoon
Joh sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hoon, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..



They looked at each other's eyes romantically.

Koi dard hoon gehra
Koi akks hoon pisra
Main kya hun bata de tere liye..



Sameer:Promise me that after marriage whatever fight takes place you won't leave me and go.
Shrishti:I promise Sameer.I will never leave you.Because I want to fight with you always.
They both giggled.

Yaadon ka chehra
Koi khwaab sunehra
Main kya hoon bata de tere liye..



Sameer:I also promise that whatever fight will be there,I will patch up with you instead of prolonging the fight.
She smiled.

Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..


Suddenly she slipped only to fall in his arms.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..


Shrishti:Let us take a selfie to cherish this precious moment.
Sameer:Yes Sure.
They took a selfie.

Main khoya saa ik lamha hoon
Bas is pal hoon tere liye
Main awara baadal hoon
Bas is pal hoon tere liye




Present...

Sameer:Do you remember what we had decided?I am keeping up my promise.I am ready for patch up.Because when I fight with you I am in pain which I can't bear.I am sorry Shrishti.Please forgive me.

Shrishti became emotional:Even I don't want to fight with you anymore.
Sameer smiled.

Mere har marz ki tu duaa hai
Hui hai qubool woh duaa hai
Yeh ulfat hai ya koi nasha hai
Jise chhuna chahe wo dhuan hai



Shrishti embraced him emotionally.

Tere liye.. tere liye
Tere liye.. tere liye
Jo main kehta hoon
Jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hun, sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..
(Fitoor)

The next morning...
All Luthras were having break fast together.
Shrishti:For Krithika's engagement our cousin Chahat is coming from US.

Karan Rishab's mother Rakhi:That's so nice.
Preeta:Mummiji..Chahat's house is getting furnished as she has not lived in India for a long time.Can Chahat stay here till her house gets ready?
Rakhi:Why not?Let her stay here.
Rakhi's husband Mahesh:Chahat will be comfortable here with her two sisters and we will also treat her as our family member.After all she is the sister of our daughters in law.

Shrishti and Preeta smiled.

Karan,Rishab,Sameer and Krithika's younger sister Ruchika was walking in her college compound with her friend Pinky.Some boys said looking at Ruchika:Hey Roo..you are looking beautiful...
Ruchika stared at them with a with a weird expression.
Ruchika:I know that I am beautiful.After all I have won many prizes in the beauty contests.Is there anything else to say?
One by one the boys asked her:Will you be my dance partner for the prom night?
Ruchika:Roo does'nt dance with anyone like that.Roo's dance partner should match her level.So bye bye.Try your luck next time.

The boys became dim:Ohhh
Ruchika walked away with Pinky.



Pinky:Roo...all guys are after you.But you don't care about anyone.You like boys' attention.Then why?
Ruchika:Roo likes only one boy's attention.Arjun..I just want Arjun to look at me.
Pinky:But he is not even looking at you.
Ruchika:That's why I am irritated.He is so handsome and charming that all the girls are after him.But he behaves as if he is blind.He does'nt even look at the college beauty Roo.I don't know with what stone God has made him.How can he ignore me?He is the only person who has not admired my beauty.
Suddenly they saw Arjun passing up.Ruchika walked fast to reach him and collided with him purposefully.She began to fall.Arjun caught her by her waist.They shared a romantic eye lock.
Suddenly Ruchika realized that it was only her imagination.Arjun did not catch her and Ruchika landed up on the floor.Everyone was laughing.Ruchika was irritated.
Pinky walked towards her and whispered:What was the need to bump into him?See..still he did not look at you.Catch my hand and get up.
Ruchika:No...if Roo wants something she will get it for herself.
Suddenly Ruchika pretended to cry loudly.Arjun who walked away heard this and turned back.
He walked towards Ruchika:What happened?Why are you crying?
Ruchika:Can't you see that I am lying down?I had a terrible fall and I am not able to get up now.
Arjun:Oh...don't worry.I will help you.
He picked her up in his arms.Ruchika felt dreamy.He placed her on the chair.
Ruchika pretended to cry.
Arjun:Now what happened:?
Ruchika:I am not able to move my leg.It's really paining.I think I won't be able to dance for the prom night.
Arjun:Don't be upset.I guess your leg sprained.That's why.I will make it alright.

He twisted her leg.
Ruchika screamed:Ahhh
Arjun:Now your leg is fine.Right?
Ruchika gave him a pale smile:Yes.Thank you.
Arjun:Now smile.You can dance for the prom night.
She smiled.
Ruchika:Who is your dance partner for the Prom night?
Arjun:I did'nt get anyone yet.
Ruchika:I also did not get anyone.
Arjun:Oh..
Ruchika:Since we both have no partner what about dancing together at prom night?

Arjun:But we don't even know each other's name.
Ruchika said in her mind:I had enquired about you when I saw you for the first time itself.So I know your name.
Arjun:Hi I am Arjun Khanna.
Ruchika:Hi ..I am Roo.



They shook hands.
Ruchika:You will dance with me.Right?
Arjun:Ok.

Ruchika got excited.
Arjun:Take care.See you later.
Arjun walked off.Pinky went near Ruchika.
Pinky:What was the need of this sprain drama?Because of that he actually twisted your leg and you had to suffer from pain unnecessarily.

Ruchika:So what?I got Arjun's care and attention.He even agreed to dance with me.I am very happy.
Pinky smiled:Your dream is getting fulfilled Roo.
Ruchika smirked:Ya..I told you Pinky.If Ruchika is determined to get something she will get it any way.Guess Arjun is falling in my charm.Who can resist Roo's charm and glamour?
Pinky smiled.




Preeta picked up Chahat from the airport and brought to Luthra house.Shrishti ran to her in excitement.
Shrishti:Hey Chahat...
Chahat:Hey Shrishti...
Shrishti hugged her.

Shrishti:We missed you.
Shrishti kissed her.

Chahat:I also missed you guys.
Preeta:Now since we are together we will enjoy a lot.
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Chahat:Yes.We will relive our childhood days.
Preeta and Shrishti introduced Chahat to Sameer,Mahesh,Rakhi,Krithika,Ruchika(Karan-Rishab's youngest sister) and Dadi.Chahat touched the feet of elders and they got impressed with her.
Chahat:I met Shrishti's husband now.Where is your husband Preeta?
Preeta:He has gone to Delhi for an important meeting.He will come for the engagement.
Sameer:But one more person is there.Our eldest brother.
Rishab came downstairs.
Rakhi:Rishab beta..meet Preeta and Shrishti's cousin sister Chahat from US.

Rishab looked at Chahat.He got shocked.

Chahat was in complete shock.
Rakhi:Chahat will be staying here for some days.Rishab was again shocked.
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Shrishti's behavior is odd..
Sameer is too sweet ..

Preeta  is married to Karan but he's ignoring her ..
She reminisces her past as to how does she meets Karan ..

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Chahat ??

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thanks a lot.Divyanka Anjum pic is offscreen.

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Nice story..

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Shrishti's behavior is odd..
Sameer is too sweet ..

Preeta  is married to Karan but he's ignoring her ..
She reminisces her past as to how does she meets Karan ..

Thanx for choosing  Zain Imam ๐Ÿ˜Š

Chahat ??

It means they have worked together ..

Nice pics..
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Awesome story dear!!!! Beautiful starting... Kritika is Karan's sister... Shrishti n Sameer fight... Preeta became upset as Karan is not with her... What happened to them??? KriBir phone convo... Oh Karan lost his memory n Preeta had named him... Ruchika swaag... Her determination became succeeded... Now her Arjun will dance with her... Rishabh became shocked seeing Chahat... What's their relation???? Eagerly waiting for next part dear... Thanks for the PM... N update soon... Really sorry for late dear...