Loved it kribir nok jhok keep posting
Loved it kribir nok jhok keep posting
wow! another beautiful update.... beautifully described every character & every part... its superb
I loved it lot
thank u so much dear for pm
& sorry for late reply
ramjaan mein bohot busy rehta ho isliye, again sorry for late dear 😒
If you are free then post the next part or a new tanshi story🙏🙏🙏🙏
waiting for next part plz it's almost a month since u updated pls update waiting for next part eagerly 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Are yaar Kya hogaya hai aapne To apni sarri stories complete ki hai phir ye wali kyu nhi pls dii pls update Karo almost 5 months ho gaye hai koi tanshi story update nhi karta pls aap To kardo pls pls
I m really sorry that i didnt update this one...giving an update today...❤
Thanks alot to everyone who gave such beautiful comments...much love to all of you..your support made me to continue this story..stay connected❤ if i get good response on this one then i will think about more stories on TanShi or KriBir whatever you want❤
So continuing this story well i actually forgot the whole storyline so i myself had to read again😁😝
Lets start❤
[Chapter 13]
[TEASING THERAPY CONTINUE]
Sunrays entered two rooms making the souls to nourish with a fragrance called love
Yeah they both love each other but Tanu isnt accepting it yet but only infront of Rishi as she herself new that he had become her love her life her priority her everything
Welcoming the warm rays of sun she stood up from the bed to start a fresh day
In other room Rishi cuddled in his bed feeling disturbed by the rays
He pulled a blanket on his face but that wasnt enough as the blanket was very light he then took a pillow and put it on his face
"Arghhh!!! God why u created the sun?"
He questioned God getting irked
"To wake such lazy people like you"
A voice came and he suddenly stood up saying so
"God is talking"
But then the person bursted out in thunders of laughter it was Kritika
"Yeah! God is talking lollll are you for real man?"
She asked in between her laugh
"Dont mock me i was just faking it i knew it was you"
He said making a pout
"Ya ya as i dont know"
Kritika said with smirk
"I told ya earlier its my thing Sirenita"
He told her with having himself a smirk
"What? What Sirenita?"
She asked totally confused
"Hehe its a Sapnish word it means "little mermaid"
He said showing all his teeth
"Whatever! Well i came here to call you mr lazy as mom is calling you to have dinner i was having a good time with Yash dont know why she disturbed us both"
She announced making him angry
He stood up suddenly
"I told you earlier stay away from that Dracula cant you understand?"
He said angrily holding her arm tight
She got li'l bit afraid which didnt go unnoticed by Ranbir
He chuckled seeing her reaction
"Oh! Hello what hehe haha? Mend you ways and then talk to me...i told you earlier i love him and i will stay very close to him now do whatever you want"
She said now getting angry for real
"Oh! So means a challenge to RBK?"
He raised his eyebrows
"Yes an open challenge"
Saying so she left his room and he just smirked
"What the hell he think of himself he always laugh on me now i will show him the hell"
She said stomping her feet and going to the hall where everyone was seated
She joined them and just then RBK came there
"Morning everyone"
He said
"Afternoon dear"
All announced as he didnt wake up for breakfast and now its lunch time
He bit his tongue a little
Just then Yash also came and was about to sit on chair infront of Kittu Ranbir hastily sat there
Giving him a death glare
Yash then sat next to him
Everybody started to eat just then Kritika jerked in her chair and everyone saw her
"What happened are you ok?"
Yash asked
"Yeah! Yeah! Totally fine"
She explained as nothing happened after everyone gave their precious attention to their food she glared at one and only Ranbir Kapoor
And he was smirking already and gave her kiss u can say flying kiss
She gave him a warning look as she remembered the incident which happened few mins ago
***few mins ago***
Everyone was having lunch peacefully and so KriBir
Suddenly Kritika felt something caressing her leg or better say someone
She thought that there can't be any animal as there is no animal in this house
A thought hit her head and she looked at RBK and saw him smirking just then she realised that it was he caressing her leg
She remained calm but then she felt his leg going upward and she jerked in her chair feeling the tickling sensation not only in her leg but all over her body
***Present***
Lunch was a calm affair as RBK didnt tease her more
Then it was time for her and Ranbir to go to work
She asked Yash to come with them but Ranbir forbid infront of everyone saying so they have to meet a client in resturant so what will Yash do there
Seeing no paths to go Kritika gave up and just went with him
They both were in car he turned the front mirror so that he can have a clear view of her face which was glowing more because of sunrays
Suddenly a romantic song played
Her turned to his side and saw him all lost in her and she also couldnt resist
They both were so lost in eachother that they didnt notice they were coming closer
When their lips were li'l bit away from eachother
A horn beeped making them come out of their magical world and Ranbir start the car again and she again turned towards window closing her eyes and a smile lingering on her lips which reached her eyes
She somewhere feels good being close to him..
His one touch gives her thousands of goosebumps she wanted to pause the moment here she wanted to pause her life here but she just couldnt
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Precap:lots of romance
This one is specially for my munchkin my Aru as she loved this story..i m sorry love for not updating but i will update it now and will complete it..love u alottt jana❤❤😘😘😘 and yeah! Guys if i get good response i will start a new one also
Stay connected
Love to all of you
And if there are mistakes then forgive me as i feeling lazy to read it again 😁
Much love to all❤😘
[Chapter 14]
[LOTS OF ROMANCE]
Drive was calm as they both were lost in their world thinking about what was going to happen few minutes earlier
They arrived at the mansion and he didnt utter a word
Yes RBK didnt utter a word IK its a li'l bit shocking😉
Coming out of car they both made their way inside the mansion he ordered her to stay at mansion today
He went out for some work and returned after an hour
Just when he entered the mansion he saw her playing with a kitten
He admired her moves her cute antics
He neared her, she felt someone's presence and turned to see him nearing her
She just stood up unknowingly getting lost in him
They entered their magical world sharing a deep eyelock
Just then a goon came to them
"Ranbir sir"
Goon shouted
he was irked because he disturbed their sweet moment and she turned her precious attention towards the kitten again
"What the hell? Why are you shouting?"
He yelled more
"Sir there is a kitten in house"
Just then the goon looked at Kritika and kitten
"There it is sir"
The goon yelled again
Realising the fact and rule that there is no animal allowed in mansion Ranbir said to Kritika
"Who brought it here?"
He shouted
"I brought it here as it was ill"
She replied confidently
And they continued their tom and jerry fight but in end Kritika won and he allowed the kitten in mansion
"Fine but remember if it come into my way i will kill it and you also"
He warned Kritika and left from there
She felt insulted as few more goons came there after hearing their fight
She stomped her feet and glared at goon who complaint about her and left from there
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Going to his room she sat there with a pout waiting for him to come and then she will attack him as he insulted her infront of everyone
He came there to find a file and saw her sitting sadly
He looked at her with corner of his eyes showing that he is ignoring her
"Cant you see i m angry?😡"
She yelled as she saw him not giving any heed to her
"So?🙄"
He said giving not so interested look
"You should ask me atleast"
She said still pouting
"I dont want to"
He said and she stood up now getting angry seeing his not so interested look
Nearing him she held his collar and he was stunned by her sudden reaction
"First you shouted on me infront of everyone you said you will kill me and my kitten and then you are ignoring me to the hell you should atleast say sorry😡"
She yelled
"So you are angry on me as i ignored you?"
He said smirking
"Yesss😡 i mean no🙄"
She said but suddenly realised what she said and changed her statement
He slid his hands in her waist pulling her closer
They were mere inches away from each other
"Happy?"
He said mischeviously
"Leave me"
She whispered
she wasnt able to utter a word as she shivered under his touch
"You said i am ignoring you now i m concentrating on you and you are saying leave me why?"
He said smirking
"I...I.."
She wanted to utter a word but was failed as he pulled her more closer
She closed her eyes on his action
He bent a little and kissed her left eye
Then he moved towards her right eye
Then he moved towards her ear and whispered huskily
"Want more?"
As she shivered under his touch
Opening her eyes she looked deep into his eyes
And there he lost himself in her
But after gaining her sense she detached herself from him pushing him a little as he held his chest acting like he got hurt
"Woah!! wild cat you hurted my heart"
He said winking at her😉
"Sh..shut up!"
She said stammering as she can still feel his kisses on her face
Saying so she left from there and he fell on his bed holding his heart
"Ahhhh!!! My wild cat😍"
He said closing his eyes still feeling her fragrance😍
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Precap:Will you be mine?❤
Hope you guys like it❤
I will try to update ASAP❤
Hi haya good to see u again🤗
Both part r fabulous 😳n plz update ASAP.. I am waiting
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