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Tanshi os Star crossed lovers
Hi guys
This story is especially dedicated to jasmine n gopss who r eagrly waiting my take on tanshi..Tq jasmine fr making me write this story...Hope u like it
So guys here is introduction
This story starts after tanu died by saving rishi from sandy
Let's go into story
In some xyz hospital
A man and old women r tensed outside ot
Old women went near temple
Old women: hey bhagavan ..Plz save my daughter in law n her baby...Already she suffered 2 miscarriages ...Doctors saying case is complicated it's difficult to save both...They can save only one..Ha i want my dil safe..Bt wat can i say when she ask abt baby..She can't bear another heart break...My only hope is u...U only can save both ...Plz god plzz save them
After half an hr
Doctor came out
Old women n man went to doctor
Doctor smiled
Doctor: ur very lucky..Both mother n baby girl r safe
Old women n man: tq doctor tq so much
Doctor left
Nurse brought a little baby girl wrapped in towel
Old women took her into her hands
Old women: arun c...Ur daughter...Meri pothi..How cute she is...bilkul goddess lakshmi jaisi...
Arun: ha maa...My little pie...My princess..He took baby in his hands.
Love u betaa...U don't know how much v r craving to c u..N take u in our hands
U know one thing...U gave ur mother to me again..Ha i don't know wat vl happen to ur mom if u...
He stopped...Tq beta...Frm now on u r everything to us
Baby smiled
They took baby to her mother
Arun: jyothi c our princess
Jyothi excited
She took baby in her hands
N kissed her
Tears escaped frm her eyes
After 1 week
They went to kaali maa temple
Until that time baby is crying
Jyothi arun n old women didn't understand how to stop her cry
Once they reached temple
Baby stopped crying n started smiling
They were surprised
They prayed kaali maa
At that time they saw an old women who is doing pooja in kali maa temple( she is katyayni bhai )
Jyothi asked arun that they should take blessings from her
Arun agreed
Katyayni stopped her pooja when the family came to her
She asked baby
They gave
She took baby in her hands
She kept her hand on baby fore head
N closed her eyes
She was shocked
She opened her eyes n smiled
Kb: this baby came back fr the purpose...She came again to complete her incomplete story...
Old women: ji wat r u saying
Kb: I'm saying fact...This baby came here to complete her promise...She took another birth fr her love...she saved her love n gave her life..This time her love vl save her ..He vl become shield to her...U take care of her fr 18 yrs n he vl take care of her rest of his life
Kb gave her blessings
Arun family left
Kb: rishi ur tanu took birth fr u again..This time no one can seperate u both..
Kb smiled
After 18 yrs
In Canada
Old women: jiyu jiyu
Jiyu: ha dadi coming
Jiyu came down
Jiyu: ha dadi Y u called me
Old women: wr is ur didi
Jiyu: she is in her room
Dadi: ok tell her to come fast v have to do puja here...Today is diwali
Jiyu: dadi u know na..She won't believe all these stuff...
Dadi: first u call her
Jiyu went to her room
She saw her didi who is in front of mirror n doing her touch up
Jiyu: di...R u going out
Girl: yes jiyu...Gng to party...
Jiyu: di..Party..Frgt abt that...U know wat...Hitler is calling u...She asked u to come.fr pooja
Girl: wat no way...I have party..n u know na...I won't believe all these..
Jiyu: come n tell to dadi only
By saying this she went down
Girl: uff this dadi na...I don't know how to convince her
She went down
Dadi saw her
Dadi: kritika beta..Come waiting.fr u only
Kritika: dadi..Plz leave me today...I have to go.to party
Dadi: kritika..Ur becoming stubborn day by day..N listen I'm also stubborn like u..No party today ..U have to b here fr lakshmi puja
At that time jyothi came
Kritika went to her mom
Kritika: mom atleast u tell dadi na..
Jyothi : kittuuu today diwali beta..Atleast today plz listen to us
Kritika: maa day after tmrw.my birth day ma...V r celebrating pre bday celebrations
Jiyu : dadi..C di is not interested in diwali celebration bt interested in prebday celebration
Kritika whispered in jiyu ears
Kritika: u idiot...Y u r pouring fuel in fire
Jiyu : ha ha u r not taking me to party na..That's Y...Jiyu winked kritika stared at her seriously
Dadi: kittu no more discussions ur.staying.thats it
Kritika didn't find any other alternative
She stayed
After pooja
Dadi sat in sofa
She is thinking deeply
Jyothi came
Jyothi: wat happened maaji..Wat u r thinking deeply
Dadi: jyothi..In 3 days..our kittu is attaining 18..Did u remember wat katyayni ji told
Jyothi : ha maaji
Dadi: nw i was tensed ...As she said...Kritika life vl b danger ...N some one will come n protect...Wat if he can't able to come
Jyothi: maji ur over thinking...Don't worry nothing will happen to our kittu...I believed her..Definitely he vl become shield to her
Kittu n jiyu heard this
Kittu came seriously: arey wat bull shit u both r talking..From.my child hood.same story...How can u believe all those words..They r utter waste to.discuss...How.can.some one predict my future before itself..How can some one say abt my past life..Nothing vl b there like that..N i won't believe all these nonsense
Dadi: kittu i know u won't believe untill u experience it
Kittu laughed
Kittu: I'm sure I won't experience it...N it's my challenge
Dadi: when u don't know abt ur future..How can u challenge
Kittu didn't understand wat to say
Kittu: wat ever dadi .I.wont believe these.cock n bull stories...
By saying this she left place
In india
A family sat in the hall n discussing
Old women: today is diwali...It's festival of happiness...Bt v lost our happiness 18 yrs back itself.along with tanu v lost our rishi also...I don't know how to feel ..Should i happie that tanu save him..R should feel bad that..She took rishi soul with him n left him like life less body..rano raj...Manpreet..V have to do some thing...V should bring back old rishi..I don't know how to bring back..From 18 yrs he is staying in that room itself with tanu memories...He hardly comes out..Even if he come ..He goes to office n work like hell..Day by day his health condition is detoriating bt he is not taking care of him..He became like robot
Plz do some thing
Plz promise me that u vl bring them back
They all looked at each other
They all promised to bring back their old rishi
Maan: ha beeji..V have to plan some thing...
After some time
Manpreet started shouting
He rushed to rishi room
Man:bhai open.d door plz...Bhai bhai
He continuously knocked door
Rishi seriously opens the door to shout at him fr disturbing
Bt he stopped watching man tensed face
Rishi: kya hua chotu
Y u r tensed
Man: bhai dad got heart attack...V joined him in hsptl
Rishi was shocked
He felt earth quake under his feet
He rushed to hsptl
He was shocked to c raj on hsptl bed
Tears escaped from his eyes
Doctor came
Doctor: mr rishi...His condition is som e wat critical...It's better to take him foreign fr better treatment
Rishi: yes doctor
Rishi to man: chotu...V vl take dad to Canada...Fr tratament
Man: really vl u come
Rishi: wat sort of qn it is..How can i leave dad like that
Rishi man raj beeji ahana rano went to Canada
They hi fied each other
As they thought..Their plan worked
Change in environment makes rishi better
Even rishi felt some sort of excitement when they started to Canada
Will be continued
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