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Hi guys,This is my third OS, a bit different from my earlier two.This OS is dedicated to Dil (Samaina) and Dosti (SaMunDit). I tried to incorporate what Mou had suggested in my last OS when she had said to use Sameer's impulsive and childish behaviour in a constructive way rather than in a destructive way... Mou dear, hope you like it and when I say criticism is welcome toh I mean it.
Hope you guys like it.Looking forward to read your thoughts.
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Dil Dosti Duniyadari
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"tu iss hadd tak gir jaayega yeh maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha Munna" said Pandit banging into office cabin door.
" iss mein aisi kaunsi anhoni baat ho gayi ,galti Sameer ki thi" said Munna relaxing on office chair.
" kya? usne tujh par bharosa kiya aur tune yeh sila diya" Pandit said exasperatedly.
"Toh maine bola tha kya itna bharosa karne ko? Yeh toh duniya hai ,yahaan toh sage bhai par bhi itna bharosa nahi karna chahiye"Munna was still cool.
" tu dosti ke naam pe kalank hai" Pandit angrily said.
" Ab zyada bakwas mat kar,bhool mat tu mere office mein khada hai"
" tera office? bhool mat yeh Sameer ka office tha jo tune dhoke se hathiya liya hai aur uska sab kuchh apne naam pe kar liya hai"
" tu ab jaayega ya security bulaon"
" ja raha hun,tujhe teri aukaat dikhane aaya tha."
" aur haan ek baat sunte ja,keh dena Sameer se ki uske paas aaj shaam tak ka waqt hai ghar khaali karne ke liye" Munna said rolling his chair.
One Week ago
" bhai aaj toh bahot khushh hun main teri baat pakki ho gayi Naina se" Munna said hugging Sameer.Pandit joined them.
" haan yaar sab maan gaye aakhir chachaji ne mana hi liya sab ko" said Sameer excitedly.
" kaise na maante ,Sameer bhai ka charm hi aisa hai" said Pandit.
" aur ameer bhi toh hai hamara bhai jo Rakesh Sir ko chahiye tha ek crorepati damaad"Munna said.
" Achcha woh sab chhodo kuchh dinon mein mangni hai toh batao kya gift dun Naina ko" asked Sameer.
" iss mein kausi badi baat hai diamond ring de dena" Pandit was quick.
" Nahi yaar main kuchh aisa dena chahta hun ki jo khaas ho aur bada bhi'"
" haan toh car ka tyre de de," Munna teased.
" haan ring se toh bada hi hota hai aur Naina bhabhi gale mein bhi pahen sakti hai" Pandit laughed.
" tum dono bass aise hi bakwas karte raha karo ,kuchh dhang ki baat na karna" Sameer was irritated.
" Achcha ,toh car de de"Munna suggested.
" tu bhi pagla hai Munna,Naina bhabhi ko kaunsa car chalani aati hai"Pandit interrupted.
" haan toh driver bhi de de saath mein"Munna had a solution.
"haan woh haini haini mamaji hai na woh kis din kaam aayenge" Pandit said jokingly.
" tum phir shuru ho gaye!" Sameer wanted some seriousness "aur main isse bhi bada khuchh dena chahta hun ki Naina aur sab dang reh jaayen,kuchh aisa socho" Sameer had different plans for engagement gift.He continued " aur usse pata chale ki main kitna khushh hun aur Naina ki kya value hai meri life mein"
They suggested different gifts but it couldn't satisfy him.Then Sameer told his idea of gift,both Munna and Pandit got shock of their lives." Kya? Tu paagal ho gaya hai,aisa koi karta hai kya?" Munna was first to object it.
" haan yaar Sameer,Munna sahi keh raha hai,itna bada gift dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai"Pandit joined Munna.
" bass maine soch liya hai,ab yahi plan hoga"Sameer was adamant.
" mat kar aisa,yeh theek nahi hai.Itna bharosa bhi theek nahi hai" Munna was still concerned.
" Par mujhe Naina pe poora bharosa hai"Sameer replied.
" Theek hai Naina pe bharosa hai aur hum par? "asked Munna.
" Tum donon toh mere bhai ho,Jaisa Naina pe bharosa hai utna hi tum donon par bhi karta hun" Sameer said with smile.
" isliye bol rahe hain mat kar aisa" Munna was not ready to give up and wanted Sameer to back off.Sameer had already decided to go with his idea of gift.After much discussions,arguments and counter arguments,Pandit gave up "toh theek hai,jaise teri marzi,Naina aur sab log especially Rakesh Sir toh dang reh jaayenge"
" Tu bhi mil gaya Ponge,kabhi toh apni baat pe kaayam raha kar.Par main bol raha hun aisa karna theek nahi hai aur mujhe yeh manzoor nahi" Munna declared.
At Agrawal house Naina was lost in her dreamland when Preeti disturbed her." kya baat hai bahen tu toh abhi se jijaji ke sapnon mein kho gayi hai" Naina just smiled. Preeti continued " Achcha sun na,tujhe kya lagta hai jijaji kya gift denge tujhe mangni par"
" Pata nahi aur sach bataun mere liye toh Sameer hi sabse bada gift hai" Naina said hugging guchipoo.
"haan,woh toh mujhe pata hai phir bhi kuchh toh pakka denge mera dil kehta hai aur bada sa aur mahenga"
" mujhe nahi chahiye koi mahenga gift,main toh saaf inkaar kar dungi lene se"
"bahen, jijaji ka dil toot jaayega toh koi aisi baat mat kar dena aur mujhe toh lagta hai pakka kuchh imported gift denge"
"Ab tu apni bakwas band kar aur chal market,bahot se kaam karne hain aur engagement ki tayyari bhi" Naina said pulling her hand.
At office Sameer was giving instructions to his secretary then Munna entered.Sameer wound up his dictations hurriedly and she left.
"Kya hua Munna ekdum aise" asked Sameer.
"main abhi bhi bol raha hun Sameer mat kar" Munna said hinting towards their earlier discussions.
" Relax yaar,iss mein itna tension lene ki koi baat nahi hai,tu bina waje stress le raha hai" Sameer said patting his shoulder.
" main tujhe samjha raha hun aur tu hai ki samajhta hi nahi,bata ab kya iraada hai"
" main kal London jaa raha hun aur power of attorney bana diya hai tere naam pe,bass mere aane tak tu sab ready rakhna"
"theek hai par tu wapas kab aayega?"
" main chahta hun meetings ke baad shopping kar lun engagement ke liye aur kuchh imported gifts bhi le lun taaki sab khushh ho jaayen" said Sameer looking at calendar.
" chal theek hai phir jaise tu kahe" Munna grinned.
" tu maan gaya,mujhe pata tha, thank you yaar" Sameer hugged him and Munna was lost in deep thinking.
Present Day Evening
" Arrey gazab ho gaya,sab barbaad ho gaya" Rakesh entered hall where Taiji and Anand's family were present discussing engagement and arrangements. " O Bai,aisa kya ho gaya?" Taiji was quick to ask.
" bahot bada dhoka hua hai hamare saath,woh ameerzaada ab ameerzaada nahi raha,sadak pe aa gaya hai" Rakesh shouted.
" O Bai, kiski baat kar rahe ho" Taiji asked with confused expressions.
" wahi Sameer Maheshwari,usi ki baat kar raha hun" Rakesh informed.
All got shock of their lives,Naina asked " Papa,yeh aap kya keh rahe ho?"
" sach bol raha hun,abhi abhi poore shaher mein yahi baat chal rahi hai ki Munna ne dhoke se Sameer ki poori property hadap li"
Naina couldn't believe it,not only she but everyone were shocked to hear the news.
" bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha,bholuraam toh bahot bhola hai isliye yeh sab hua,ab kya hoga?" Taiji asked.
" Ab kya hona hai,main apni beti ki shaadi kisi sadak pe pade huye insaan se nahi karunga" Rakesh had already taken a decision.
Anand intervened " bhaisahab Naina aur Sameer ka rishta pakka ho gaya hai aur Naina pyar karti hai Sameer se toh aise rishta todna..."
Rakesh interrupted " woh sab main kuchh nahi jaanta ,bass ab yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti"
Naina said " Papa,magar aise paison ke liye rishta todna..."
Rakesh stopped her with his hand " bahot zubaan chal rahi hai kya teri,toh kisi bhikaari se shaadi kar dun teri"
Bela couldn't resist more " bhagwan jhoot na bulaye ab bhikari toh mat kahiye bhaisahab,paisa bhi aa jayega ek din par hamari Naina ki khushi zyada zaroori hai"
" Bass,maine jo kehna tha woh keh diya,yahi mera faisla hai" by saying this Rakesh left and Taiji did some usual taunts on Naina for her bad luck and then left. Naina burst into tears, Preeti,Bela,Anand consoled her. Anand told Preeti to take her in their bedroom.
Naina hugged Preeti " yeh sab kya ho gaya Preeti!"
"tu fikar mat kar sab theek ho jaayega" Preeti said reciprocating her hug.
" Sameer kahan hoga,kya kar raha hoga,mujhe uske paas jaana hai,chal hum jaate hain uss se milne" Naina was restless.
" bahen tu thoda sabr kar,abhi raat hone ko hai aur Rakesh Tauji hum par zaroor nazar rakhe huye honge,kal subah jaayenge"
Naina sat on bed devastated,Preeti was still in shock,she said" yeh Munna aisa niklega kabhi socha na tha"
Naina just looked at her with tears,Preeti was angry" Taiji theek kehti hain,bhalai ka zamaana hi nahi hai,mujhe mil jaaye toh munh tod dun uska"
" Abhi toh mujhe sirf Sameer ki fikar hai uss par kya guzar rahi hogi"Naina said wiping tears.
At Pandit's house, he told Sameer while entering a room" yeh tera room hai,ab se tu yahin rahega"
"nahi yaar Pandit,main tujh pe bojh nahi banna chahta"
"Achcha,matlab hum jo tere ghar pe pade rehte the toh bojh the tujh par tu yeh kehna chahta hai" he said checking his face." Nahi yaar,mera woh matlab..."
"jaanta hun,isliye toh bol raha hun yeh bhi tera hi ghar hai aur Vishakha Aunty ko Delhi bhej ke tune achchha na kiya"
" Mummy ka Delhi jaana hi theek tha aur thode dinon mein main bhi chala jaunga wahin"
"tu kahin nahi jaayega aur sabse zyada ghussa toh mujhe Munna pe aa raha hai"
"mujhe toh ab bhi yakeen nahi aa raha hamara Munna aisa kar sakta hai"
" jaanta tha tu yahi bolega isliye main khud gaya tha aur tu bhi samajh ja ki Munna waqai badal gaya hai,lalach mein aa kar dosti bhul gaya hai"
" Nahi,mujhe lagta hai kuchh toh baat hai,Munna aise kaise.."
" tu ab bhi uski side le raha hai,woh aasteen ka saanp nikla aur ab hum uski koi baat nahi karenge"
" Lekin mujhe Naina ki fikar ho rahi hai,isse pehle un logon ko iska pata chale,main khud jaa kar bata dunga kal"
" haan,yahi theek rahega." Pandit agreed.
Next day,Sameer came to meet Naina at Agrawal house.Rakesh stopped him at the door" yahaan kya lene aaye ho"
Sameer had not expected this sudden change of behaviour especially when Rakesh had accepted their relationship.
" Rakesh sir,main woh yeh batane aaya tha ki"
He was interrupted " jaanta hun ki tu kangaal ho gaya hai aur ab tujh se hamara koi rishta nahi"
Sameer was shocked to hear this " bass ek baar mujhe Naina se milne dijiye"
" Naina ghar pe nahi hai aur hoti bhi toh main use tujh se milne nahi deta"
Sameer tried to convince him but all in vain and he had to return.
Preeti and Naina had managed to go out for some time when Rakesh was not at home as he had declared Naina can't go outside without his permission.They reached Sameer's house and security stopped them that Sameer no longer lives here and as per instructions of Manoj sir he didn't allow them to enter.
" mujhe agar Munna mil gaya na toh munh tod dun uska bada Monoj sir bana phir raha hai" Preeti angrily said.
Naina was thinking about Sameer, she asked security about him.He replied he went with his mother to Delhi.Naina couldn't believe Sameer left without informing her." Preeti,aisa nahi ho sakta ki Sameeer mujhse mile baghair chala gaya ho"
"ho sakta hai Munna ke dhoke ki waje se unki mummy le gayi ho saath"
"Nahi,Sameer aisa nahi kar sakta ,achche se jaanti hun use" Naina said.
"chal ghar chal ke dekhte hain,shayad ghar aaye hon aur hum yahan hon" Preeti said while stopping autorikshaw.
When they reached home and asked about Sameer, Rakesh scolded her and reminded his decision once again.
At Pandit's home,Sameer told him everything " yaar tu Rakesh sir ko jaanta hai na,unki toh aadat hai"
"par galat bhi toh nahi keh rahe na,main Naina ko kya de paaunga iss condition mein"
" toh tu chhata kya hai"
" main bahot mehnat karunga aur phirse Naina ka haath maangunga toh woh mana nahi karenge"
" par kya itne saal woh intezar karenge,tu yeh sab chhod aur direct Naina se baat kar"
" aur baat karke kya bolun,tujhe toh pata hai na yeh rishta family ki marzi se hua tha aur ab woh log tayyar nahi hain iss ke liye"
Then Sameer told him that he will be leaving for Delhi tomorrow evening.
Next day at evening when Sameer was packing his bag,Naina came." toh tum aise ja rahe the mujhe bina bataye" she said standing in front of him.
"Naina,tum yahaan?" he was surprised.
" haan Pandit ne mujhe bataya call karke ki tum Delhi ja rahe ho hamesha ke liye"
"Pandit ki toh aadat hai badha chadha kar bolne ki par main hamesha ke liye nahi ja raha hun,tum toh jaanti ho na woh Munna.."Sameer paused to check her face and continued " aur main aaya tha par Rakesh sir ne rishta tod diya toh maine socha..."
"kya socha tumne ki main bhi rishta tod chuki hun,ek baat sunlo, meri shaadi tumse hi hogi woh bhi aaj aur abhi" she said confidently.
Both Sameer and Pandit were shocked to hear this" Yeh tum keh rahi ho Naina!!"Sameer exclaimed.
"Haan,main hi keh rahi hun,mere liye tum important ho tumhare paise nahi,chahe Papa aur sab hamare rishte ke khilaaf hon main ab tumhein nahi jaane dungi.Jo bhi hoga hum saath mein karenge ab"she said holding his hands.
Sameer couldn't control his joy and he hugged her.Pandit coughed to distract "toh kis mandir chalna hai Naina? " asked Pandit.
" iski koi zaroorat nahi hai" said Munna while entering the room.
" tu yahaan ab kya lene aaya hai,sab kuchh toh chheen liya Sameer se ab kya yeh khushi bhi chheen lega" Pandit was quick to stop him at the door.
" main yahaan kuchh lene nahi aaya hun yaar,dene aaya hun" Munna said looking at Sameer.Pandit snatched papers from his hand and got pleasant surprise to see it,he passed it to Sameer and after glancing at it for a while his eyes widened" yeh sab kya hai Munna"
"tera sab kuchh tujhe lauta raha hun yaar,aur kya"He said in chocked voice.
" toh phir yeh sab kiya hi kyun?" asked Pandit.
"Sameer apna sab kuchh Naina ke naam kar raha tha aur aisa gift dena koi samajhdaari nahi,yahi samjhane ki maine bahot koshish ki par phir bhi Sameer na mana toh mujhe yehi sahi laga." Munna told and looked at Naina.She intervened" Munna sahi keh raha hai Sameer,aisa gift koi deta hai kya? aur mujhe tumhari dualat se nahi tumse pyar hai."
Munna said in heavy emotional tone" aur tu dekh hi chuka hai paisa kya gaya Rakesh sir ne rishta hi tod diya par mujhe ek baat ki khushi hai ki Naina tujhse pyar karti hai teri daulat se nahi aur apni family ke against jaa ke tere paas aayi hai" He looked at Naina and continued." dil dosti apni jagah par thodi duniyadari bhi seekh le bhai.Tujhe duniyadari sikhane ke liye mujhe yeh sab karna pada,maaf karde."
"jab tum dono jaise dost hain aur Naina ka pyar hai toh mere saath kuchh galat nahi ho sakta" said Sameer emotionally. Munna hugged him tightly,Pandit joined them.Naina adored this friendship with a heartfelt smile.
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