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AKSHAN OS- chapter 4(b) : ZID

For past 1 hour, she was witnessing this parade. 
' kabhi 1 bahu kitchen jati, kabhi dosri. Is uncle k nakhre bhi is Umar main khatam nahi huay hain." Guddan was irritated.she was eating her last bites of her third chapati.

" didi, yeh  chal to hum  par hi musibat ki tarhan giri hai. Itna Sab kuch  banaya buddhay k lye, magar majal hai taste bhi karle. Sab kuch  wese ka wesa hi hai. Khana bhi, allergy bhi, aur  woh  sassu maa bhi.woh dekho kese ghappar ghappar kha rahi" Sarru was highly irritated.

" mujhay laga tha AJ us guddan ko dantay gay, kuch  to karain gay.magar yeh AJ us guddan ko kuch boltay hi nahi." Durga replied.

" main n kaha hai ap logo ko, AJ ka kam tamam hochuka hai.fasal itne salon baad Harri ho to bhosay ki qeemat bhi gandum brabar lagti hai.yeh  guddan bhosa hai aur  AJ us k jaal mn phans gaye hain. " laxmi put forward her 1 cent which didn't go well with durga.

" tum pichla thapad bhool gayi ho.dobara lagaon! Bauahat hi wahiyat soch hai tumhari. Ab sojao.subha dekhte hain yeh Sab.bhook bhi kahin ja kar mar gayi hai" 

... 
Dadi was coming downstairs.she was having difficulty as her knees were in pain from last week.

" apni maa k samne bhi nakhray" 

She went straight into kitchen .
" dadi ap kia kar rahi hain?" Guddan inquired.
" lalla n Khana nahi khaya hai.khali pait  dawayi kese lega. Main soup banadeti hun antara wala. Usi se sahi hota hai yeh" daddi started to prep up.

" daddi bauhat RAAt ho gayi hai.ap sojayn." Dadi didn't listen.

" acha ap idhar ayain. Is par bethain.aur mujhay batain k kiya karna hai." Guddan took knife and look into her eyes for instruction.

" beta tujhe nahi..." 
" dadi, Antara ji k bad AJ ki zimedari meri hui.ap btaye." Guddan tried to convince her.

After a lot of struggle, cuts, difficulties and irregular shapes of vegies, the soup was finally there.

" ap sojaye dadi! Main pila dungi" 

"Jeti rahay" she was witnessing this after a long time that someone is caring for akshat.

" chal guddan! Jese hi tujhay dantne k lye mun kholay, soup daal Dena." She assured her self.
As usual, AJ was coughing, sneezing on his bed.he sensed that she is coming into bedroom.he got up and wanted to move to balcony.

" 1 min! " she grab his hand.guddan put soup on table and look into his eyes.

" sorry! Mujh se galti hogayi!" She said it and put her face down.

Akshat was surprised that she confess it quickly. His anger just settle down and eyes went to her hands.

" yeh kia hua! Itne cuts?" Akshat seemed worried 

" aray han! Main n ap k lye soup banaya hai. Jaldi piye or phir dawayi khayin" guddan chirped.

" mazak karrhi ho tum.pagal samajh rakha hai mujhay.pichla khana main bhoola nahi hun. Allergy to chali  jayegi magar mera pait zaroor kharab hojayayga." Akshat tried to back off.

Guddan pushed him towards bed.
" kisi nayi naweli dulhan se bhi zyada nakhray hain  apke" she taunted.
"Aaa karain" akshat followed her antics.she put full spoon in his mouth.

" mera pait..." Akshat couldn't complete his words as something hit him really hard. ANTARA!

" kesa hai?" 
" akshat piyo soup."
" tum apne hath se pilaogi to piyon ga"
" agar kal main nahi hui to kia karoge is allergy ka? Ab har koi apne hath se to nahi pilaye  ga"

"Pehle koi yeh soup banana to sekhe maa se tmhari tarhan, phir pilane ki baat ayegi"

" yeh to free hogyay.main n to 1 chamach pilana tha. Baby day care wali samajh liya mujhay" guddan sadly thought.

" kesa hai?"
"An... Itnehai bekaar " akshat control on himself.

" wah! Bekar chez insan aese ghap ghap khata" 

" mera khana bhi to bekar kaha tha  restaurant main. Sham main halwa or Ab 4-6 roti kis n khayi hai" akshat informed.

" yeh Jo apki khabri bhauyain hain  inko main n chorna nahi hai" guddan was pissed .

" tum Jo itna chehak rahi ho, pait  bhara hua hai isi lye.warna  sabko pata hai guddan bhooki hotay hue kisi aur  ko soup to degi nahi" 

" yeh kia! Phle soup khatam karyn phir cream lagayay ga!" 

She snatched the cream and ran towards other side of bed.

" guddan cream do. Main n bas  pilya."

" nahi pura karye" 

" guddan..." They chase each other about a minute and then akshat pinned her on the wall.her hands on her back.guddan sensed that he was having temperature and her guilt increased.they were breathing heavenly and just inches apart.his eyes were red with fever.guddan just stared in it for a while.akshat broke the moment by snatching cream.

" itna ghussa kartay hain, isi waja se  body par bhi agya hai" she try to calm her down

" tum yeh bhi keh sakti thin k main bauhat hot hun." Akshat replied calmly.
" burhapay main itni khusfehmi" 

She ignored him and  went to washroom and when she came back, he was in deep sleep.she switched off the lights , proper comforter on him, checked his temperature; it was still high.

" partner! Please inko sahi kardo.mujh s ghalti hogyi..." She looked into sky.

" antaraaa" akshat was murmuring it in deep sleep.

" kuch  chaye kia?" Guddan tried to ask.

" antaraaa mera sar" he was pressing his head.

Guddan sat on other side of bed, and reluctantly started pressing his forehead.it was extremely hot. After a moment, akshat turned to her side and dig himself in her lap and hold her other hand.guddan remain motionless for a moment.it was new for her.she control her breath and started pressing his head again.
" he looks pure" she could only think by looking at his face.she laid back a bit and adjust herself in this uncomfortable posture.her one hand was in his hand, other was dancing in his hair and eyes on his face.another beauty is on her way to lost herself to the beast !!!!!

To be continue...