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Originally posted by: Vini4ever
Beautiful. Loved it. Hope we get the next instalment very soon.
Thank you 😊
I thought of it as an OS and was in a hurry to post it before yesterday's Adan pradan episode
Originally posted by: Vini4ever
Beautiful. Loved it. Hope we get the next instalment very soon.
Thank you 😊i liked yours too, very much, especially was it for Keeps
Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Amazing! Will you continue?
Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Loved it especially the last paragraph! Nice play on debt and who is for, to come to that conclusion. Only if that actually happens on the show!
I loved it. I used to watch the original of course before it became a joke. The chemistry between Cezanne and Shweta was off the charts. But somewhere along the line Anu was too sentimental. This is how I wanted him to be. I hope you make this into multiple part story. It is too good to be left here.
Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi
Wow, loved it! With the most logical, befitting twist in the end.
I hope you continue!😳Loved your portrayal of her agony and his shock.That song and that entire paragraph flowed so well!⭐️Please continue.Cheers!Thank you 😃For me, It is always a song that inspires an OS ... when it gets linked to a story line in the show.this one was completed with super speed coz i wanted it posted yesterday itself.Hadn't actually thought of continuing it when I penned this down.. but yeah may be I will add something more.
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