No problem for the delay as long as the comments are big!!! 😆Originally posted by: taahir004
Will read Chapter 15 Part 2hopefully by tomorrow and comment toosorry for the delay
No problem for the delay as long as the comments are big!!! 😆Originally posted by: taahir004
Will read Chapter 15 Part 2hopefully by tomorrow and comment toosorry for the delay
Thank you Ayazu for re-reading and the comments!! I am grateful indeed!!Just read this from start and loving each and every update
Their journey till now has been really bumpy and they both are coming closer now but are avoiding each other at every point but now geet is hell bent on breaking his not so strong controlJust loving itWaiting for more parts
Originally posted by: aparna3011
geet's presence in life affecting maan very strongly which maan is not liking
maan wants to push geet from his life
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chapter 15
Part 2terrific update! awesomely written!Maan's inner thoughts well portrayed! at least he acknowledged that Geet is special!can understand Maan's feelings! he is affected by Geet!nice that Maan is imaging Geet!!his frustration is reasonable!so Maan cannot concentrate at work!
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chapter 15
Part 2impressive update! perfectly written!as expected Maan does not listen to SD! adore Geet;s cribbing to her babaji! omg she thought it was not really there!loved when Geet agreed with Maan that he should watch her clothes!hmm wonder what else Geet has planned for Maan? of cos Maan is angry!Maan is trying to avoid Geet but alas destiny has other plans! everything abiut her just attracts him.Maan cannot help but stare at a wet Geet!update soon
He is of course straight lol!! 😆Originally posted by: paponecon
read all over again all those parts...only 1 day passed, they r in mumbai n both r gone case...first geet day dreamt romantic stuff n now maan...geet is nt remembering dev...who is sameera...ahlam, maan ki upar fida...maan is a cyber genious...lets c how geet examine if maan is gay or not...
Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 15 Part 2Maan comes home earlier then usual and Geet was asleepopening the door and Maan is welcomed by his cute wifethere is no doubt that he already cares for herplacing her on the bed as he thought she has fallen asleepGeet was so cute talking to her Babaji and then realizes that she is not dreamingher husband is actually at homeMaan knows that its difficult for Geet to wash her clothes especially now with herinjured hands still he makes sure to point out her chores has not been donebut also been sarcastic letting her know that she don't know much about householdchores but it was good seeing a strong Geet standing up to Maanthe darkness once again brings in concern and surely Maan is captured by his wife's beautiful form no matter how much he tries but it seems even nature does not want Maan forgetting his wife's images
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