My dearest Shreya!🤗
Hugs for this beautiful piece.Angelou says-''There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you''...so i am glad that you are rid of that agony...😃
Coming to the story--
''All it needs is a glance from you to come alive...''They are fireworks.But the firework fizzles out soon...Fireworks is just a sizzling experience but not the destination.I absolutely love how you portrayed the fireworks transforming into glowing bulbs.No sounds ,no words just silent glowing..the twinkle of shyness in Preeti's eyes elucidated it all.
She has hurt herself and he just coming round to see her..can it get more cute,more romantic.😳 The wick is ignited..fire is starting to catch.But there is a thing about fireworks ..they don't go off while people are in crowd...They go off in cozy flocking only.So is also their relation..
They alone...Padoshi with padoshi..Can I sense a firework again?😳
I absolutely love how you find right words,keep it simple yet delivering it crisp way.👏 Not everything elucidated yet teasing enough for readers to think and imagine much more than put on paper.Great skill that is.
We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect...Well,for me this writing was two in one--moment and retrospect each of their moments...Great job darling.👏
Keep coming with more on them..
Thank you for the PM.
With love-
Minu.
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 5 years ago
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