Anjaan SS: Paanch Saal Pehle...(COMPLETED)

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Posted: 5 years ago
Kya ho jab aapki khushiyon ko aapke apno ki hi nazar lag jaye...kehte hai khushiyan baatne se badhti hai pr agar khushiya baatne se kum ho jaaye toh?...kya ho agar aapka koi apna hi aapka dushman ban jaye?... Kuch aisa hi hua Vikrant, Aditi and Jia ke sath...unki khushiyion ka mahaul matam me badal gya,jab ek din...
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Kya lagta hai continue karna chahiye?
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Posted: 5 years ago
Somewhere in between yaadein na? 
Do continue!
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: loveinshi

Somewhere in between yaadein na? 

Do continue!

Yup
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Posted: 5 years ago
Omg...Kya hone wala hai🤔
Can't wait... continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Continue yaar, wait ni hota!! Super excited👍🏼
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Yeh suspense maar dalegi 😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
Are you kidding? Continue it.
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Continue continue!! Seems good😊
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Chapter-1
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(Viditi house)
(Aditi ke kaano me Vikrant ke words goonj rahe the "paanch saal pehle jo hua tum bas ussi ki wajah se ye sab soch rahi ho")
Aditi: kyu Vikrant kyu? Kyu kia tumne paanch sal pehle hui uss manhoos baat ka zikr,kyu?
(Aditi buri tarah rone lag jaati hai)
(Tabhi Vikrant room me ata hai aur Aditi ko rota hua dekhta hai)
Vikrant: I'm sorry Adu mujhe wo baat nahi chedni chahiye thi
Adu: but tumne kia,ye jaante hue ki uska hum par kya asar hota hai tumne wo baat chedi
Vik: Adu
Adu: Vikrant plz mujhe abhi koi baat nahi karni 
(Jia ka ghar)
Jia: Why..why..why??(shouting now)
Jia: Mujhe nahi sunna uss bare me kuch bhi fir bhi kisi na kisi tarah log mujhe uss baat ki yaad dilate hai ,why??
(Jia POV)
Sab kuch kitna acha tha,sab khush the,sari problems ko hum bhool gye the but waqt ko humari khushiya manzoor nahi thi,sab cheen lia usne humse, sab
(Flashback)
(Special Crimes Unit)
(Puri unit me agar kuch sunai de raha tha toh woh thi ek cheekh,ek mujrim ki jo Jia ke gusse ka shikar ban raha tha)
Vikrant: abe bas kar do ghante se maar rahi hai
Jia: par sale ne ghanta kuch bola hai
Vikrant: aye bhai kya hai tujhe,khud par nahi toh hum pr toh taras kha,pichle do ghante se teri cheeckhe sun rahe hai,bak ab jo janta hai Hetonita ke bare me
Man: mujhe kuch nahi pata
Jia: acha,thik hai fir,Sameer gun hai?
Sameer: yes ma'am
Jia: good,bullets
Sameer: ha
Jia: very good,thok sale ko aur Priya ko bol file me encounter likh degi
Man: nahi
Jia: kya nahi be,tujhe kuch maloom nahi yani tu bekaar hai aur bekaar chizo ko mai phek deti hu,samjha? Sameer,kar jo bola hai
(Aur ye keh ke wo bahar nikal jati hai and Vik uske piche hota hai)
Vik: abe kya hai? Kyu itna tap rahi hai?
Jia: tum reason jante ho
Vik: arre baba case khatam baat khatam
Jia: case khatam? Ek mahina laga case khatam hone me,SCU ka abtak ka sabse lamba case,and end me kya hua? Main vamp Hetonita gayab,aur tum keh rahe ho case over,tabiyat Adu ki nahi tumhari kharab hai
Vik: arre yaar toh aise logo ko pitne fir marne se wo hetonita nahi pakdi jayegi
Jia: mai logo ko nahi sirf uske sathio ko peet rahi hu. And by the way kal jisne uss kaliya ko maara tha panch ghante,as a punching bag wo aap hi the na,DCP Vikrant singhal. 
Vik: bataya tha yaar ki ek hafte se ni ki thi practice toh kar lia hath saaf uss kaliya pr,waise uska naam kuch aur tha na
Jia: kya fark padta hai
Vik: ha yeh bhi hai
(Vikrant ko Aditi ka call ata hai)
Vik: hi jaan
Adu: Vikrant tum jaldi se ghar aao
Vik: kya hua? U ok?
Adu: tum bas ghar aao,abhi
Vik: ha mai aya
(Call end)
Jia: kya hua? Sab thik?
Vik: pata ni,Adu ne bola ghar aao,abhi
Jia: mai bhi chalti hu
(Viditi ghar)
Vik: Adu kya hua?
Adu: I'm pregnant
Vik: kya?
Adu: Vikrant I'm pregnant
Vik: are you serious?
Adu: Vikrant tum toh yeh puch hi nahi sakte
Jia: ewww...guys mai yhi hu,but anyways Adu congrats
(Jia Adu ko hug karti hai)
Jia: wow humare chote se Akku ke sath ek aur chotu baby,how cute
Adu: hahahaha..Vikrant kuch bolo
(Vikrant Adu ko tightly hug karta hai and usko ghumane lagta hai)
Vikrant: Adu I'm so happy, I luv you I luv you I luv you
Adu: I luv u too but mujhe neeche utaro mujhe chakkar aa rahe hai
Vik: oh ha sorry
(Same Night)
(Jia ka ghar)
(Jia aaram se so rahi hoti hai ki tabhi uske kaan me koi kuch kehta hai)
Voice: mai aa gyi
(Jia ek jhatke me uthti hai)
Jia: kaun? Kaun hai yaha?
(Viditi ka ghar)
(Adu ke stomach me bohot tez dard hone lagta hai)
Adu: aaahhh...
Vik: Adu kya hua?
Adu: Vikrant bohot dard ho raha hai,aahhh..
Vik: hum abhi hospital chalte hai,chalo
(Flashback ends)
(Jia POV)
Bas sab ussi pal se shuru ho gya,wo manhoos pal,kyu aya humari zindagi me,kyu?
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P.S:-
1. Vikrant ka maine promotion kar dia hai,ACP se DCP
2. Adu ab Vik and Jia ke sath kaam nahi karti,jabse Advik ka janam hua hai,wo break par hai,coz wo apni special ability kho chuki hai
3. Vikrant and Jia ab Shaitan chowki nahi balki dusri jagah kaam karte hai,Special Crimes Unit (Supercops vs supervillains wala headquarters imagin karlo)
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Edited by Babygirl728 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Kya hua Adu ko ? Update Soon Ankita didi. Bahut accha start hua hai Story.