Is loving you a mistake? DiRa SS pt2-pg9

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Posted: 5 years ago

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Is loving you a mistake? Introduction

Love is eternal.But is love always eternal?
Will long distance affect love?
Will change in time make changes in love?
Can time bring changes in love and relationship?

This story is about Ratan and Diya who were madly in love during their teenage.
Will their love be untouched always?
Can Ratan Diya stay together stronger amidst all obstacles?
Will their love story change with the passage of time?

This is about Ratan and Diya whose story has the mix of love and hatred.

I got this idea from the old malayalam serial Ammamanasu.But I changed the story and not even one scene is taken from it.




Thanks to Mansi who helped me to title this story.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Loved the Intro...Jasmine...😊😊
Would love to read this kinda story of our lovely DIRA...
Update soon..😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful intro I must say👏Sounds really interesting👍🏼Cool banner😳Can't wait to read itThanks for choosing my given title😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice plot Jas, 😳
I'm waiting...😉to read your writing 😊
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
sorry i did not like the theme  ..i cant imagine ratan diya hating each other .i can imagine confused ratan or diya ..or both of them seperated by some circmstances but hating each other ..no i cant 
sorry if i expressed my views bluntly
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome concept 
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Interesting nice intro dear
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 5 years ago
Really nice concept dear... I'm impressed by ur writings...😳. How much talented u r!! Keep rocking I'm already get ready to read... 😉
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Posted: 5 years ago
Interesting concept.
Nice intro.
Continue soon..
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Posted: 5 years ago
nice concept 
continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😊