Tanshi os, ft Rosid: Urs lovingly ( completed)

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                Tanshi / Rosid os Ur's Lovingly

 Hi frineds...im harsha,can call me as honey.some of u knoew me..i hardly comes to forum...im die hard rosid and tanshi fan..till now i wrote some rosid stories..this is the first one im combining my two favs..rsid n tanshi..hope u all like it...plz read it like it n cmnt it..even negtive cmnts r accepted..n sry fr grammitical mistakes..im updating from mobile

This concept is based on a movie which I love

And the characters sketch

Tanu:  a simple, nave girl, she loves rishi , her neighbor

Rishi singh bedi:  fun luving guy n super handsome, a boy next door,  tanu's neighbor

Tanshi: tanu's dairy name

Roli: cute, crazy bubbly girl,  younger sis of tanu, she loves her tanu di a lot

Sidhant bhardwaj:   friend of rishi, fiance of tanu,  gem of a person

And the story starts

Dear tanshi,

Today u know wat  im super hapie, rishi ate the food prepared by me..i heard  how he praised  the food by saying its too delicious..im in cloud nine..this is the happiest day in my life..im waiting for the day when I myself prepare food n make him eat with my own hands...( tanu prepared food n sent to rishi house)

Ok gud n8 for today

By saying this she closed her dairy no her tanshi

She blushed remembering rishi

Then she heard  her father voice

Jamanlal: tanu beta roli is on the line

Tanu  excitedly ran down and took phone from her father

Tanu: chotiii how r u...u r eating well na..hw r u feeling there...sab kuch teik heina...had ur food

Tanu asked all these without taking breath

Roli shouted

Roli: di...

Tanu stopped

Roli: di pahele saans le..

Tanu took deep breath

Roli: gud...im fine di..and everything is fine...don't woory yar..just one more year..after my studies I vl come there and wont leave my di at all

Tanu: I miss u na yar...

Roli: I too miss u di...and di good new

Tanu: wat darling

Roli: im cmng to delhi this week..they gave holidays for 1 week

Tanu: wow super...come fast yar

Roli: definitely...ok di...now its study time..will call u tmrw

Tanu : ok bye gudn8

Roli: gud n8

 

After one week

Roli came

tanu is super hapie as her choti came

and roli too..as she can spent with her di for one week

on that day

tanu is cooking specials for roli

roli went to bath

she came back

as tanu n roli decided to go for shopping..roli is gng to ready for that

she wore simple salwar

and she looked into mirror ..

bt ya some thing is lacking

ya her ear rings

she found it looking odd in that dress

she remembered tanu has jhumkas which suits this dress

she started searching in drawer

she didn't fount in first one

she checked another one she didn't found ...she closed  and abt to search another one

something came into her mind

she opened that 2nd drawer again

she found a dairy

roli to herself: dairy? Is it di's? from when she started writing?

Roli opened it

She found  the name TANSHI

Roli: yeh tanshi  kya hai?

Roli started rolling pages

She found some writings from 14 feb

She started reading

On 14/02/2017

Dear tanshi

Today is valentines day...till now im not aware of this day...I didn't give importance to this day..but now this day became important..this day gave me valentine...I found my love on this day...love at first sight...I fell for him..no he made me fall for him in first sight...and ur confused na wat is this tanshi..tanshi is combination of my name and his name..tanuja and rishi..so cute know...and I have to tell na..how I met him...raj ji along with his family living in our neighbor house...today itself his son came to delhi  by completing his studies...as rano aunty vl come to our house to chit chat with mom...today also she came and she is super hapie as her son came to home after 4 years..and she also raj uncle told him to take up his business but he declined  and he also got job he declined that job too..becz he want to spend withis family for few days...later he vl decide wat to do n wat not to..i heard all rano aunty n my mom convo...I was curious to c him

When I was in my room..i heard a sound...I found a ball came inside my room breaking the glass window

I  got angry..i immediately rushed n peeped through window to c who did that..at that tym I found him

He is pleasing through his eyes to pass on ball...he asked maafi by holding his ears..i was lost in him..he is luking so cute..without saying anything I just thrown the ball he caught it and thanked me..i  blushed

This is my first meet..no first look

 

Roli is shocked

She pouted her lips

Roli: this much happened u didn't share with me na di...vl c u later

By d way its  so intresting...lets c next

 

Roli started turning next page

All she found is her di's sielent ove

Roli: arey di...y ur so shy...if im in ur place I might proposed him then itself

 

Next  15.04.2017

Dear tanshi,

Today u know wat...my hero saved me...today while gng to clz some guys tried to misbehave with me ..and my hero came from back  and thrashed them...bt he didn't c me...as he got call he went...u know how I felt..i just wanted to hug him tightly... fr protecting me

Roli: aww di ...so romantic

 

Roli  is reading ..she involved in it

At that tym tanu came n saw roli reading her dairy...tanu shocked

Tanu; roli

Roli who came out of the world

Saw tanu

Roli gave mischief smile

Tanu  is nervous

Tanu : choti wat r u doing.she  tried to take book from roli

Roli is roli

She pushed tanu little

And started running and talking

Roli: di...don't try to catch me...already I read ur dairy..sorry tanshi...I got to know ur love stry

Tanu stopped  in shock

Roli too stopped

Roli came to tanu

She pulled tanu cheeks

Roli: so my di is in love

Tanu blushed

Roli: aww my di z blushing...im so hapie fr u di...I thought wat if I love any one..this grand ma wont accept...bt here my grand ma itself fell in luv

Tanu glared

Tanu: u idiot..is im grand ma..?

Roli: ha u are...so till now u did not confess ur love  to him...if I was in ur place I might have propesd him n married him too..infact have children also

Tanu: chotiii...u r talking to much

By saying this she hold roli ear

Roli: di...its paining...plz di..leave my earna..i was just kidding

tanu left her ear

Roli: but im angry with u di..u didn't even share this to me..ur tanshi is more better than u..she shared me everything

Roli pouted her lips

Tanu hold her cheeks

Tanu: sorry na yar..ur busy with studies I don't want to disturb u with these matters

Roli: uff all will say like this only..dad wont say me any financial matters..by saying ur small..u concentrate on ur studies like that..and now u also not sharing wth me...u all r thinking me as out sider

Roli became emotional

Tanu hugged her

Tanu: arey chotii...no yar...ur our little one..v care u much..v cant c ur pain..thats y v wont share any thing which disturbs u r upsets u..thats it..it doesnot mean ur outsider..ur our life

Roli smiled and hugged tanu back

Roli; by d way where is my grand pa

Tanu glared at her

Tanu: call me as grand ma ..no prblm...bt don't call him as grand paa

Roli: oho wat a support..so nyc..ok first show him..i vl tell he is grand pa r handsome hunk

Tanu took her to cellar

She showed her rishi who is playing with small kids

Roli: oh my god di..jiju is so handsome...di I swear,,...if u make late..then definitely a random girl will come n take him away...y random girl..if u make late..i vl go n propse him

Tanu glared at her

Tanu: roli day to day ur becoming more naughty

Roli smiled

Roli: di...go n tell him na abt ur love

Tanu: me? ..no roli..wat if he didn't accept...I don't know even he know me r not...no roli...if he wont accept..i cant bear

Roli; di...who will reject u di...one should b lucky to get ur love...go n tell di

Tanu: no roli...vl tell soon...but not now

Roli hmm ok...by d next tym I came u have to confess ur love

Tanu: ok

 

 

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TanShi os wid Rosid!!! It's really interesting!!!👏. Roli as Tanu's sister n Siddhant Rishi's friend. Love bloomed in Tanu!!! Love started from Valentine's day... Wow Harsha it's very nice😳 Loved it very much...
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Part 2

After one year

In Mumbai

Jamanlal: meena is everything is ready...groom family r on d way...

Meena: ha ji...everything is ok

In room

Roli: di..do u think ur doing right

Tanu: ha chotiii

Roli: but ur not hapie with this di..i know

Tanu: fr me our family happiness is my happiness

Roli: but  my happiness is lies in ur happiness di...I know how much u cried when u lost ur tanshi..u value ur dairy itself that much di...u cant able to frgt tanshi itself then how can u frgt rishi

Tanu: but I have too..becz he loves some one elz...that day  nethra herself confessed they both r in love...my love is just one side

Tanu started crying

Roli hugged her

Roli: no di don't cry...di...even u marry u cant be hapie with him..i know how much u luv rishi..i vl stop this  arrangement di

Tanu: no roli..i agreed this fr maa n papa..they want to c my mrg n ur mrg..they cant bear if they come to know abt my heart break...let me lead this life like this only

By that tym  bhardwaj family came

Meena came inside to take tanu

All liked tanu a lot

Jamanlal: by d way wr is sidhant

Mataji: I think he got call..basically he is working machine

All laughed

Roli in mind: I have to tell him abt di..and make himself to tell that he cant marry di...

Roli went out in search of him

At that tym roli got call

She is talking and moving

And suddenly she dashed some one

She closed her eyes in fear of falling

But sensed some strong hold around her waist

She slowly opened her one eye

She found herself in strong arms

She opened her another eye

She lost herself in his eyes

And ofcourse he is sidhant

There is a deep eyelock

They were disturbed by his phone call

They came out of world

Sid; thum teik hein aa

Roli: haa

She felt shivering on her knees

She understud she cant stand there any more

She rushed from there

Sid smiled

Again sid heard phone ring

Sid: hello aman..is it? Im cmng...

By saying this he left the place

He called mataji

Sid: mataji..i have imp meeting ..im going

Mataji: but u didn't c girl..how can I confirm mrg without ur approval

Sid: mataji..yes from my side..u carry on with next procedures

Mataji: sure ha

Sid: ha sure

Mataji felt hapie..she said that sid agreed  mrg..all r hapie

Next day

Sid called meena

Sid: aunty..i want to introduce tanu to my friend..shall I take her out

Meena: ofcourse u can

Meena told this to tanu

Tanu : maa I vl take roli also with me

Meena : ok ur wish

Next day sid came to pick up

Both roli n tanu went with him

Sid smiled at them

They too smiled back

They went to restaurant and occupied seats

They  ordered food

At that tym sid  lukd at in opposite direction and smiled

Sid: my friend came

Tanu didn't  turn back

Bt roli turned

She is shell shocked

Sid to tanu and roli

Sid: here is my frnd rishi sing bedi

By hearing this tanu lifted her head

She was shocked

Her hands freezed

Her heart became heavy

Tears r abt to come

She controlled her self

Rishi:   u both

Tanu is not in position to reply

Sid: hey u know them?

Rishi: they were my neighbours in delhi..later their father got transferred to Mumbai

Sid: ohh so u all know before itself..that gr8

They chitchatted like that

They completed lunch

Rishi: ok guys u carry on..i have some wrk ...vl catch u later

By saying this he started from there

Roli anyhow decided to talk with him

Roli: sid ji..i have to meet my frnd..im gng..plz drop di at house..

By saying this she rushed from there

Sid to himself: crazy girl

He smiled

Sid dropped tanu at home

Roli reached rishi

Roli : rishi stop

Rishi stopped

Rishi: roli u?

Roli: ha me...tell me y u came back

Rishi: wat do u mean

Roli: I mean y u came back in my di life

Rishi: roli..r u crazy...wat r u saying

Roli;jhoot math bolo rishi...may b u r telling lie...bt ur eyes cant..i saw love in ur eyes fr my di..i saw pain in ur eyes..tell rishi..if u luv my di y r u leaving her...

Rishi: then wat I have to do roli...tell me...I came to Mumbai with so much hope fr my tanu...I don't know she luvs me that much when she was near me...after she went ..my  father bought ur house...I went to that house..n I found the dairy...I read that..with each n every word I understud how eternally she luvd me...I understud if she is not there..then there is no meaning to my life..i want to b lucky by getting her love..and that tym I got to know my friend nethra... came to know tanu luvs me..so she want to break her heart.as nethra luvs me...she told tanu that v both r in luv...that day I decided  I should clear tanu mis understanding  and  should confess my love..i came to Mumbai in search of her..then I found my child hood frnd sidhand...he is my bestie...now tanu is my bestie fiance..

Roli: so wat rishi...my di still luvs u..she agreed this mrg only fr my family..ur her life..she luvs u only ..fr ever n evr..janam janam ka pyar rishi..u should not leave like that

Rishi: bt wat can I do yar...sid is not intrstd in mrg..bt after lot of pressure he agreed to marry tanu...as he like her..and that family is so happie ..how can I snatch their happiness

Roli: that means ur ready to give away ur happiness..ur not only leaving ur happiness..bt my di happiness also ur snatching...I wont let u do that

By saying this roli hold his hand and started taking him

Rishi: roli wat r u doing

Roli took him to her house

By that tym both families in tanu's home only

All r surprised to roli with rishi

Jamanlal: roli...rishi here

Sid: uncle rishi is bestie...

Jamanlal: wow..thats good...anyway im happie to c him..rishi u should b there in this mrg

Roli: this mrg wont happen papa

All r shocked

Jamanlal: wat r u saying beta

Roli: this mrg wont happen...rishi and di luv each other ...

Again all r shocked

Sid smiled

Sid: oh my god rishi...is it really..im so happie rey fr u..bt im angry too..u didn't not say to me

Now roli shocked

Roli: did u really agreed?

Sid: ha y not...now my friend vl becum my relative too

Roli to herself: I think he became pagal

Mataji: sid wat r u saying

Sid: ha mataji..y r u shocked..now my dosth becum my relative..lets do one thing..both mrgs vl happen on same day

Roli n rishi mrg...

Tanu n my mrg

Roli head started bursting

Roli: arey pagal..how can I mrg to rishi

Sid: arey pagali when I said u to marry rishi..im saying roli n rishi mrg..he showed finger at tanu n rishi

Now everyone understud d misunderstanding

Roli glared at him

Roli: mr pagal..im roli..

She dragged tanu

Roli: she is my di...tanu

Now sid got jolt

Sid: wat?

Roli: haa

Roli: so till now u mistook me as tanu

Mataji: that means u said yes for roli

Sid: ha ma...u showed me pic which has tanu n roli...I saw roli only

And on that day when I came here..

He remembered the incident n stopped

Mataji: ha when u came here

Sid: woh woh...at that tym I saw her only

Mataji: ho...anyway...misunderstanding cleared..anyways tanu  rishi luv each other..v arrange mrg fr them..n same tym roli sid mrg

Both tanu n roli at same time

Tanu n roli: v don't want this mrg

Now rishi n sid shocked

Sid to rishi: now wat happened to them

Rishi: who knows

Mataji: wat happened

Roli: who marries this pagal...im not interested...he confused between me n di itself..then wat if confuses between me and other women...no I don't want him..anyways I planned fr love mrg..i don't want this arranged this mrg...n that to with this pagal

Sid: u???  if u again call me as pagal..i don't know wat I vl do

Roli; pagal pagal pagal

By saying this she started running

Sid to run behind her to catch

All laughed

Mataji to tanu: wat abt u beta

Tanu: he already loves nethra..im second option to him

All lukd at him seriously

Rishi: no...no...tanu u misunderstood

Tanu: no I crctly understud..ur flirt..ur playboy ..ur attitude king

By saying this she left

Mataji: go n  make her understand

Rishe  nodded and went behind her

Tanu closed door

Rishi: tanu opened the door yar

Tanu didn't replied

Rishi: meri kasam

Tanu opened door

Rishi went inside n closed door

Tanu glared at him

Rishi: tanu..plz believe me yar...I didn't love nethra..she just created a drama...and only girl I luvd in my life is just u

Tanu: sacchii

Rishi:sacchii..he said by holding his neck

Tanu smiled

Bt again her face turned upset

Rishi pulled her

She fell on his chest

He hugged her

Rishi: now wat happened..y my baby is upset

Tanu: u  don't know how much I luvd u..how much I carved fr u

Rishi: I know

Tanu shocked

Rishi: I know how u used to c me from ur corner of eyes...I know frm when u started luving me..i know how u  specially cooked food for me...n I know how u want to hug me fr protecting u...

C u want to hug me..now even I m hugging u..ur not hugging me back

He pouted his lips

Tanu smiled

She hugged him back

Tanu: how u know all these

Rrishi: tanshi

Tanu eyes widened

Tanu: how u know that..i lost it...

She curved her lips down

Rishi: don't worry it reached crct place

Tanu: that means it is with u

Rishi: yes

Tanu hugged him more

Tanu: from when u started luving me

Rishi: from day 1 I was impressed with u...I felt bad when u left Mumbai..i never know u luv me this much..while reading the dairy..i felt ur luv..i remembered all d incidents...I felt if I aware of this..i might rushed to u n propose u..im so lucky to have u tanu..i love u ..i love u so much

Tanu: I luv u too rishi

Rishi  moved towards her

Tanu closed her eyes

Rishi started kissing her fore head and ther her cheeks her nose...

He started pouring his love

He moved towards her lips

Tanu pushed him little and abt to go

He hold her hand n pleased her through his eyes

Tanu looked down

He pulled her

She again fall on his chest

He pinned to her wall

He moved towards her lips

It tuned into deep kiss

Sab tera bgm

They left each other becz of lack of breath

Tanu blushed

Rishi gave mischief smile

They both hugged each other and spent quality tym

And here

Roli reached terrace

Sid too reached

While running she is abt to slip

Sid holded her from falling

They had  an eye lock

Becz of thunder sound rosid came out of world

Its started raining

Roli abt to go

Sid holded her

Sid: so u wont love me

Roli: ya ofcourse..i don't luv this pagal

Sid pulled her

And she fell on him

Sid: but I luv this pagali

Roli lukd down

Sid: ok wat ur prblm..u want luv mrg..thats it na.. u to start luv me...v both luv each other until ur di mrg..later    vl marry

Roli murmered

Roli: pagal

Sid: oii again u said pagal

Roli: then wat to say...buddhuu

Sid: buddhuu?? Wat happned

Roli: becz ur buddhu only...becz u didn't understud I already fell fr u

Sid is surprised

Sid: wat...say it again

Roli blushed

Roli hugged him

Roli: I luv u na yar..i fell u  on the day u came to c di..my heart pricked when I came to know u came to c di

Sid smiled

Sid: I luv u too na yar

Sid:oh that means u  brought rishi here for me..i thought its for ur di

Roli glared

Roli: I did fr my di only not for u

Sid: aha really

Roli: haa

By saying this she pushed him and abt to go

Sid dragged her

It started raining more

He hugeed her tightly

Roli tried to come out off hold

Sid  hugged more

Sid: I was just kidding yar..i know how much u luv ur di

Roli smiled

She to hugged back

Sid kissed her

Roli too kissed him back

They r rain of kisses along with rain

Both rosid n tanshi spent quality tym

One fine day elders arranged rosid n tanshi mrg

And they lived happily fr ever

 

That's it guys

I know its not upto mark

Bt I tried

I hope u like it

Please share ur opinions

 

 please ignore if u find any illogical

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: gopsss

TanShi os wid Rosid!!! It's really interesting!!!👏. Roli as Tanu's sister n Siddhant Rishi's friend. Love bloomed in Tanu!!! Love started from Valentine's day... Wow Harsha it's very nice😳 Loved it very much...

Tq so much yar fr ur words...I thought to.write it as ff ..bt  I have no tym..little bit busy with studies so I completed in two.shots..sorry fr rushing it fast
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Rosid and tanshi are super... it's really interesting... roli and tanu sister bonding and sid and rishi bonding  I loved it... sid confuse who is roli😆 
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Superb story honey...you nailed it...😳
The bonding between roli and tanu is awesome...
Her diary name is so cute "TANSHI"...
Very amazing story keep updating ur stories..
Looking forward for more...😳
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Awesome os rosid tans hi wow..
Roli and tanuja at bonding love it.
Tanja fell for rishi her diary tans hi awesome. 
Sid fell for roli lovely  ..
All couples reunited awesome. 
Lovely  super 
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Awww cute os lovely roli and tanu bonding was. Adorable Dr .
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tanu's diary's name is tanshi. so unique.loved the bond of roli tanu as sisters.their conversation. .grandmaa grandpaa was funny.loved how tanu wrote about her first meeting with rishi n how he saved her.sad that tanu's marriage got fixed with Sid. Rosid meeting was lovely.omg..Sid introduced rishi as his friend to tanu.what a scene! roli rishi confrontation was a nice twist that rishi had got tanu's lost diary n he came to know of her love for him n he too loves her.sad that netra created misunderstanding between tanshi. sad that even rishi is sacrificing his love for sid.hats off to roli for informing others about tanshi love.what a twist that Sid agreed to marry tanu mistaking her for roli.it was a funny scene.tanshi first interaction was so romantic. surprising that roli loved Sid secretly.their rain scene was cute n romantic. happy that both couples got married .I always wanted tanshi Rosid in the same ff.that's why in laal ishq I included both.you really surprised me with this os with tanshi Rosid. what a nice treat.such a sweet romantic cute love story.
is it inspired by tarun sneha movie? 
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Rosid and tanshi are super... it's really interesting... roli and tanu sister bonding and sid and rishi bonding  I loved it... sid confuse who is roli😆 

Tqq so much yar...