REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 10

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Part 4

 

Maan-Maan soch soch kar Antara mentally akhil se compare kare; Akhil's kisses don't reduce her to a hot puddle like that

 

Geet was with Maan in his car on the way while they had gone to pick up some stuff for Akhil

 

Akhil calls her saying ki he is very sad...ye ye hua...and Antara is not giving him importance ...they fought...hence he is miserable

 

Geet ne samjhaya Akhil ko poore time

 

Phone rakha

 

Geet couldn't stop her tears

 

Maan jo mann hi mann khush tha Akhil ki tadap se baukhla gaya; ki I hurt Akhil why are you bleeding?

 

Maan chup chap observe kar raha hai ki Geet kitna tadap rahi hai Akhil hurt hua to

 

He feels a twinge in his heart ki koi aur bekasuur hurt ho raha hai

 

But it's just a twinge...Maan bhi bekasuur tha and he was more than hurt. Akhil got what he deserved

 

He just puts the radio on and starts driving

 

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Akhil, Geet and Maan ek business trip pe zara durr gaye the

 

As Maan used to call Akhil in private...that wimp loved taking pics

 

Wimp ne Maan se kaha pics lo..pics lo...pure trip mein

 

After coming back from trip

 

Maan waapas aaya apne lavish room mein, fiddling with his hi tech laptop

 

Dekhne laga photos ko, zoom kiya, crop kiya...bas Geet wala part alag kiya:, zoom kiya, rakh liya

 

In the pictures, Geet was smiling...she was chucking, giggling at Akhil's jokes

 

She looked happy, even made cute faces

 

He even doesn't know himself what he is doing, phir bhi he is doing it

 

Jahan hot ladkiyan uske peeche hain and wht he is doing is akele mein iss no make up plain jane ki photo dekh raha hai

 

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Antara was all distracted with the thoughts of that mysterious arrogant man, his kissing that girl...that passion...

 

She wa thinking about it and Maan all the time on her date with Akhil

 

Pehle hi khat-patt chal rahi thi

 

She wa even more frustrated and irritated and ddistracted

 

So when Akhil tried kissing her and she didnt feel any passion coming in her own self

 

She had fight with him

 

She said no.. he said yes

 

She pushed and slapped he fell and bled

 

Agle din Geet ko pata chala

 

Geet bhi bikhar gai

 

: akh ka gf se ghagda hua

 

Jab Maan and Geet saath mein kuch deliveries kar rahe the, Maan ne Geet ko smajhaya ki

 

M- Itni bhi nai lagi hogi.. ladkiyaan itni tez maar hi nai sakti...

 

G..ooo...oo where was I...ooo..Akhil...he mst be so sad

 

She banging her heda on the table

 

 M-He would be fine as soon as he gets his girlfriend back. Your head banging wont help..but getting his girlfriend back to him would

 

Agle din fir Akhil bhir bol raha tha Geet se ki

 

A-Antara ko manana hai kya karein...tum uske wahan flowers and choclates deliver karao karao...

 

Maan bhi wahin tha

 

M-How about a nice earing and ring set intead...which she can wear to a nice dinner...

 

Maan ne bhi muhh khol ke suggest kar diya

 

Akhil ne dekha Maan ko upar se neeche tak ...Maan didnt look like a guy who would have ever had a girlfriend

 

A- Tumhe kya pata?

 

M- Do I look like someone who can easily have a gf?

 

Akhil ne kaha nahi

 

M- I know how to keep them. When everything else works against me

 

Akhil ne socha baat to sahi hai

 

Geet se kaha ki kuch achha sa choose karo aur fir ek romantic sa note likho to invite her to dinner and bhej do dono cheez

 

Geet to puzzled si ho jaati hai...inn sab maamlon mein

 

She nods obediently

 

Geet ki choice to achi thi...isiliye kuch Antara ke liye select karna hota tha to Akhil Geet ko hi keh deta tha ki dekho how it will do

 

Car saaf hone gai hai as it had to look swanking new if Antara agreed to the date; to isliye Geet ko Maan ke saath bike pe jaane ke liye keh diya Akhil ne

 

Geet murmured...

 

G-Main bus mein chali jaungi...Akhil

 

She never sat on a bike, darrti hai gir gai to

 

Maan kuch nahi kehta...

 

Akhil ne daant diya

 

G-Time waste mat karo. Jaldi jao and jaldi aao...jab bike hai to faltu kyun time waste kar rahi ho? Tumhe time ki kimat na pata hai na hi time management karn aata hai

 

She looks down..kuch nahi kaha

 

 M-I'll bring the bike out

 

Keh kar nikal gaya khushi kushi ki break mil gaya

 

Geet bahar gai...room ke

 

She does a small silent prayer and comes out

 

Maan hands her the helmet

 

She looks unsure

 

G-Gira mat dena

 

M-Agar koi huamare boss ki tarah drive nahi kar raha hoga to dont worry accident nahi hoga

 

She sits doubtfully holding the peeche wala handle

 

 

M-Hold my waist

 

G-Huh?

 

M -Hath do

 

She reluctantly puts her hand on his shoulder

 

He takes her hand and puts it on his abs

 

M- Keep it there

 

Phir bike chalai and  vrooommm

 

Geet thoda peeche hui

 

She shuts her eyes

 

Kaske pakad liya dusre haath se bhi

 

Maan smirks in glee

 

Pohonche market, bike roki

 

M- You can let go now

 

She opens her eyes...slowly...looks around ki sahi salamat pohonch gai

 

She gets down

 

M-Park karke aaya, tum jao andar

 

Geet nods and goes

 

Maan aaya 5 min baad

 

Geet chup chap khadi h diamonds ke beech...lost in her dreams...looking around...saleswoman kuch bole jaaye...dreaming...if Akhil would ever get anything for her

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Nice part. This Akhil is taking advantage of geet. Geet is like puppet for him. She does his all work. Maan feels bad for her but he just wants to. Take his revenge. Waiting for next dear 

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Nice part. Maan is falling for Geet without intending to.. Geet's simplicity has probably attracted him

I hope geet deosont end up in this revenge game and be used in anyway. she is naive and blinded by love for Yash. maan can see she is a chamchi that will go do anyting for him. On the other hand he is paying attention to her a lot as well. Looking forward  for more and this brake up is like happening for sure. 

bechari Geet feeling sores for her 

Lovely update!