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Bin Mausam Barsaat (OS)


Taiji's voice echoed "Aaj se Naina ka school band...

Naina was on the verge of crying and shouting out the name of the real Prem in her life. But suddenly she controlled her emotions and the brain took the front seat of her bike.


"Sahi keh rahin hai aap taiji. Kya karna hai waise bhi school jaake. Chachi mein aajse school nahi jaungi. Naina's voice roared. The room was filled with static electricity. Preeti, Arjun and Chachi were cemented to their position and expression too.. Taiji herself couldn't find any phrase or proverb or mere words in her own mind.

Nobody could understand how come Naina, the one who always kept quiet and never argued with Taiji had spoken whole 3 sentences!!!!


" Waise bhi 10 vi tak to padhai hogayi hai meri. Mujhe ab padhna, likhna aata hain. Angreji bhi aati hain. Aur kya chahiye, hai na taiji?? Waise bhi mujhe padh-likh kar konsa Einstein banna hai. Waise Einstein pata hai na taiji aapko? Jisne gurutvakarshan (gravity) ki khoj ki thi. Mujhe to silayi, kadai, chula-chokha hi karna hai umra bhar. Issilye maine soch liya hai, ki taiji barabar keh rahi hai. Aaj se balki abhi se mein ghar ke saare kaam karungi.

Naina felt a tinge that she was arguing and discomforting Taiji as she never had known this side of herself. That she can fight for herself.  But today she didn't want to back out. She knew that if she backed out or cried then situation will worsen and the impact of her this (Mahakali) side will have reverse effect.


" Chachiji aap chachaji Kon phone lagayi ye. Naina turned towards her. Chachiji had never seen Naina like this and somewhere inside she could not deny the order Naina had given to her.

" Chacha se kahiye ki Ghar aajay aur papa ko bhi saath kele aayiye.

Rakesh bhaisahab!!!! Now Bela knew from were this temper came from. It was her father's genes that were doing their magic. But Rakesh Bhaisahab too could never win from Taiji. But today, Naina had out-done it.


" Naina beta. Rakesh bhaisahab ko kyun bulana?? Chachi knew that he would add lots and lots of ghee to the already burning fire.

" Chachi papa bhi to hone chahiye yahan. Unhe bhi batana hai ke mein kal se school nahi jaungi.


Thus saying Naina started gathering the clothes and said " aaj see mein hi ghar mein isstri ( ironing) karungi sabke kapde. Paise thodi zaad pe ugte hain, ghar mein isstri hai to kyun niche issitri wale ko dena. Hain na taiji? Taiji just couldn't believe what was happening. She seemed rooted to the ground.


"Naina ye kya kar rahi hai tu? Kya matlab tujhe school nahi jaana? Tu toh school ki topper hai.

Mummy aap bolo na Taiji ko kuch bolne. Preeti said.

Preeti wasn't able to guess was Naina acting a shot or really she didn't want to join school. The way she was delivering her dialogues, nobody could grasp the situation.

" Haan chachiji, taiji. Naina humesha first aati hai school mein. Padhai mein sabse aage hai. Aur aajkal kon aisi topper ladki ko ghar mein bithake rakhat hai. Aur Naina ghar ke kaamo mein bhi to acche hi hai. Usse sab kuch aata hai. Arjun said. He somewhere knew what was going on. Defence is the best offence  was the phrase his mind was going through. But he never knew that Naina would make use of it in such a way.


By that time Chachiji had called her husband and had given a one liner and one breath summary to him. Also she asked him to bring Rakesh Bhaisahab with him. She thought some goddess ( Chamuda mata) had invaded Naina's body and she was speaking on behalf of her. She started thinking of ways how to make goddess happy.


Naina had started doing all kinds of chores till then. She started sweeping floors both houses and then she started cleaning kitchen utensils and all with fast speed. Everyone watched in awe how efficiently she worked. She was now folding the clothes when Chachaji and Rakesh bhaisahab entered.

She had noticed them but didn't say any word.

Chachaji sensed something very much weird had happened. Rakesh too was judging the situation.


"Kya hua bela? Batao bhi abhi. Chachaji asked.

" Ab Kya bataye Preeti ke papa Pooja ki shaadi ki video aayi hain. Hum sab usse hi dekh rahe the. Tab achanak se Naina ne kisiko ishaara kiya... Matlab aisa bhabhiji ko laga. Aur phir unka kehena hai ki Naina ka chakkar hai aur usse school nahi jaana chahiye.

All this was said in such a way and tone that nobody could understand.


" Chachaji, Papa mein kal se school nahi jaa rahi hun. Naina now had gained confidence that this was going to make her win the battle.


" Par Naina beta aisa kya hua hai? Kisine tumse kuch kaha. Tumhe padh-likh kar bada banna hai. Tum padhai nahi chhodogi.


Rakesh too agreed without any argument.


" Par chachaji aap hi ne mujhe shikhaya hai ki baade jo bolte hain acche ke liye bolte hain. Taiji ko lag raha hai mera would Munna - Pandit ke saath tinchu tinchu taay taay chal raha hai; jabki aisi koi baat hi nahi hai. 1 min main abhi bata deti hun. Preeti, Swati ko phone laga jara. Naina said.


" Haan 1 min. she said.

" Hello Swati hai mein Preeti bol rahi hun. Naina ko tumse baat karni hai. She handed the phone to Naina.

" Taiji mein baat kar sakti hun? Naina asked Taiji. Taiji just nodded.

" Swati tere samne woh Munna aur Pandit rehete hain na, unko bol maine bulaya hai gharpe. Jaldi aajaaye. Thus she kept the receiver down.


Swati didn't know what was going that side but knew that she needs the play the part.

She climbed down and gave message to Pandit and said " Naina ko shayad tumhari aur Munna ki jarurat hai. Tum log jao uske ghar jaldi.


Pandit came panting to Munna's house and said

" Munna, bhabhi ko aapni madad ki jarurat hai. Chal jaldi. Munna wore shirt and they started.


" Yaar pakka kya madad chahiye usse? Matlab hum karenge hi par pitnewali madad to nahi hai na? Ghar pe bulava aaya hai isiliye darr lag raha hai. Munna said.


Soon they reached, Pandit was feeling as if they are going to end in some big problem. Standing in front of door, Munna-Pandit saw safari suit and whole Agarwal family.

"Yaar Pandit, yahan to pura khandaan hai. Ye Naina kahan fasa rahi hai humko. Chalo khaa lete hain maar. Sameer ke liye yahi sahi.



Naina saw Munna-Pandit standing out and called them.

" Ab sab dekh lo. Saying so she asked Munna and Pandit give her their hands.

" Humare haat kyun chahiye tumhe??

Naina produced rakhi and tied it to their hands.


Taiji's face turned red with sharam and couldn't face anyone.

" Hogaya taiji. Ab to yakeen hua aapko ke mera inn dono ke saath tinchuk tinchuk taay taay nahi hai. Ab to ye dono mere Bhai ban gaye hain...



Rakesh Bhaisahab ne kahan,

" Isse kehete hain bin Mausam Barsaat hona...


Hain na Bhabhiji!!!




This OS is dedicated towards the growth of Naina's character. I always want her to be strong enough so that her fights her own battles...
Lemme know whether u liked it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thats good. Taiji deserves this kind of reply from Naina for the ways she treats her. 
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Kash hamari naina bhi aise Hoti. Loved this version.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved this bold Naina..
Good one..
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is amazing... πŸ‘

Chamunda mata had me in splits... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I wish Naina would use her brains... really waiting to see her pull herself together and be strong for herself and her love...
Thanks for this OS, it did give us a nice scenario... Naina can definitely tie Rakhi to her devars... πŸ˜ƒ
And Rakesh's dialogue at the end was cherry on top...! 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Is season mei toh shyd naina ka yeh avtaar nai dikh skta hai ... Anyways tinchu tinchu tai tai cracks me up everytime i hear this πŸ€£
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Posted: 6 years ago
Too good dear πŸ‘πŸ‘  Loved this aspect of Naina..Really loved the twists at end.πŸ‘πŸ‘ Keep coming with such stories often.
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Amazing OS Manasi.. πŸ‘πŸΌ
Loved bold and bindas Naina..
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Lovely OS! Loved Naina's switched on bold avatar!
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Hilarious🀣
But I loved this bold Naina
Taiji ki bolti band chhodo gum hi ho gyiπŸ˜†