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Hi YUDKBH Forumwassis. Here is my first attempt at creative writing. Inspired by a lot of amateur writers, I have decided to tick this off my bucket list!
It's a OS that I have based in the future where Samaina are reconciled and in their dating phase as it has been a topic of great interest in the Forum on what we can expect to see in that phase of their relationship.
Do share some feedback. I would really appreciate it.
OS - Jugaadu Sameer
Sameer tried their two ring signal again but Naina still did not answer the phone. For a moment he was frustrated and started hitting the punching bag in his room, but then suddenly a sly and determined smile appeared on his face. He rummaged through his cupboard till he found something that he slipped in his pocket and headed out on his bike.
Naina was sitting at the dining table trying to focus on some maths homework, but for a change wasn't doing a very good job of it. She was still annoyed at him for the stunt he had pulled in class today and had decided to not attend to any of his phone calls.
Naina thinking to herself: Ye samajhta kya hai khood ko! Use pata hai main kitne easily distract ho jati hu uski aaisi hartkatoon se.. aur phir bhi usne aaj mujhe pure class ke saamne! Jab main class ke sammne khaade hoke Physics ka itna important theorem present kar rahi thi! Uske baad agar main aage ka theorem bhool gayi toh issme meri kya galti hai? Per teacher ko kya batati.. daat toh khani hi padi.
She sat there fuming and going over the day's events. Sameer had tried to apologise and make light of the situation as always after school.
Sameer: Aare yaar tum itna ku naraaz ho rahi ho?
Naina: Kya matlab ku? Tumhe pata hai. Teacher ne pure class ke samne hi data tha mujhe. Tum thay na waha?
Sameer: Thik hai na.. wo toh tumhe har do din baad koi na koi presentation dene ko bolti hai. Aadhe topics to khoodne kabhi class mein padhaye bhi nahi hote hai.. Jab dekho class mein baith ke knitting karte rehti hai. Mujhe to lagta hai tumhe unki salary ka hissa milna chahiye.
Naina: Sameer, tumhe pata hai main padhayi ko lekar kitni serious hu. Aur maine bohoot achee se presentation tayar kiya tha.. aur sab gadbad ho gaya tumhari wajah se!
Sameer: Meri wajah se? Itna bada maine kya kiya?
Naine: Tumne kya kiya??! Matlab, aaise kaise tum mujhe aankh maar sakta ho presentation ke beech?
Sameer in a pouting manner: Aare wo maine jaan bhujh ke thodi kiya tha! Tum itni cute lag rahi thi... ke bus ho gaya. Wo hum padhte hai na biology.. sorry mera matlab hai Jeev Shastra mein ke humre body ke kuch involuntary reflexes hote hai. Bus waise hi ho gaya.
Naina retorted grumpily as she left on her cycle: Tum se toh kisi bhi baat per argue karne mein koi matlab hi nahi hai.
Suddenly Naina was called back to reality by a knock on the door. The door was open as their usually was. And Sameer stood there grinning! Naina felt so flustered by this new antic of his.
Naina: Sameer, tum yaha? Kya.. kya kar rahe ho?
Sameer: Tum phone nahi utha rahi thi aur mujhe tumse baat karni thi. Toh bus main aagaya.
Naina: Kya matlab bus aagaye?! Ghar wale poochange toh kya batayenge?
Sameer entered the house leaving the door open as it was before and occupied the chair next to her at the dining table.
He pulled out a piece of paper with a drawing on it and handed it to Naina. As expected by Naina it was a cartoon sketch of a boy holding a card with the word SORRY scribbled across it. She had got many variations of this from Sameer so far. Some days it the boy in the sketch would be holding out s bunch of flowers, some days balloons and some days a heart! Just as Naina was about to lecture him on how she did not want another sorry from him, she noticed that the boy in the sketch was winking. Naina burst out laughing at his sense of humour.
Naina shaking her head: Hey Bhagwan.. Sameer kya Karu main tumhare sath?!
Sameer was about to say that he could a lot of ideas about this.. but realised that voicing that thought wouldn't be in his self interest and just smirked.
Naina: Per tum aaise kaise aagaye? Sab poochenge toh..
Sameer: Waise toh main jaanta hu ke iss waqat ghar mein tumhare alawa koi aur nahi hai. Chachaji aur Tauji ko office se aane mein aur do ghante hai. Tumhare poojya papa Arjun ko uske cricket coaching leke gaye hai. Saali Saheba se toh daarne ki koi baat hi nahi hai. Aur Chachi aur Taiji bus abhi market gayi hai. Unn dono ko wapas aane mein thoda time toh lagega.
Naina: Tumhe kaise pata Chachiji aur Taiji bazaar gayi hai?
Sameer: Aare baba aadhe ghante se neeche nukkad per khada hu. (leaning closer and smiling mischievously) Sahi mauke ki talash mein.
Naina looking a little apprehensive: Sahi mauka! Kya matlab?
Sameer laughing: Kitna darti ho!
Sameer in a more serious tone: Naina, tumhe abhi bhi mujhpe pura bharosa nahi hai kya?
Naina saw the hurt in his eyes. She smiled at him fondly and replied: Pura bharosa hai. Per tum mujhe baar baar chedte ku ho?
Sameer leaned forwards looking at her intensely with a mixture of love and passion: Ku ki... mujhe pura haq hai tumhe chedne ka.
Naina blushed and felt butterflies in her stomach. She was thankful that she was already sitting down cause she was experiencing that weak in her knees feeling that she experienced every time he looked at her with such intensity. She tried to diffuse the intensity of the moment by announcing that she was going in to make him some tea. She headed into the kitchen and got busy making tea in spite of Sameer insisting that he was there to spend time with her and not for the tea. Sameer kept watching her through the window next to the dining table.
After Naina brought out the tea, they chatted about usual school and friends related topics for a bit as they sipped on their tea.
Naina: Waise us din jab tum pehli baar aaye thay ghar.. tum toh keh rahe thay tum chai nahi peete.. phir?
Sameer making a face: Naina, tumhare liye maine itna kuch saha hai.. aur tumhe sirf main chai peene laga hu issi baat pe hairat hai?!
Naina smiled at him fondly, feeling gratitude for all the efforts he had taken and thankful that he did not give up on them when she was going through the heartbreak. It had taken some time and had been a very painful experience for them both. But, they had come out stronger and both had learnt what they really meant to each other. Without realising Naina covered his hand with her own and gave it a tight squeeze still looking at him with love filled eyes. Sameer was really taken aback, surprised by her suddenly initiating contact. Seeing her loving gaze he wanted to pull her to him and hold her really close. But, he didn't want to do anything that would make her uncomfortable and break this magical moment. They shared a long intense eye-lock...
Suddenly they both were brought back to the real world hearing Chachiji and Taiji entering the house. Luckily they managed to put some distance between them before either of the ladies noticed anything. Both Chachiji and Taiji were surprised and a little shocked to find Sameer alone with Naina.
Chachij said a little nervously: Aare Beta tum aaj yaha kaise?
Taiji a little sternly: O bai.. Naina tumne isse humare yaha na hote hue chai pe ku boolaya hai?
Naina nervously: Wo.. maine toh.. nahi..
Sameer immediately walked over to Taiji and touched her feet.
Sameer: Namaste Taiji. Wo toh main aapse hi milne aaya tha.
Taiji: Mujhe milne?
Naina looked at Sameer in confusion, not sure how he was going to spin this. But, she knew that if anyone could sweet talk Taiji it was her Bhooluram!
Sameer: Ha Taiji, main aapse hi milne aaya tha. Naina ne kaha ki aab log abhi aate hi honge iss liye main ruk gaya. Wo.. main aapke liye kuch laaya hu.
Saying this Sameer brought out a bottle of Tiger Balm out of his pocket and handed it to Taiji.
Sameer: Nanaji ne yeh balm Singapore se laya hai.
Taiji: Singnapur? Wo Shani Shingnapur?
Sameer: Mera matlat hain foreign se laaya hai. Bohoot achaa hai. Maine soocha aap ke ghootno mein dard rehta hai toh shayad issse kuch aaram aa jaye.
Taiji was completely overwhelmed by this gesture and couldn't stop praising her Bhooluram for the next 5 minutes.
Taiji looking at Naina: Aare seekho jara issse. Kitna susheel bacha hai.. itne bade ghar ka hai aur phir bhi itna samajhdar aur seedha sadha. Warna hum to zindagi bhar chandan ki tarah gheeste rahe aur yaha kissi ko humari kuch padi hi nahi hai. Aur yeh kya Naina tune isse sirf chai peelayi? Biscuit nahi deeye?
Sameer: Koi baat nahi Taiji, biscuit aagli baar kha lunga. Achaa Taiji aur Chachiji main chalta hu. Bye Naina, kal school mein milte hai.
Taij: Aare Bhooluram, aaise hi aate raho.. accha lagta hai
Sameer eying Naina: Ji Taiji, jaroor aayunga
Naina shyly: Bye Sameer
Naina stood there silently feeling proud of her Jugaadu Sameer.
It's a OS that I have based in the future where Samaina are reconciled and in their dating phase as it has been a topic of great interest in the Forum on what we can expect to see in that phase of their relationship.
Do share some feedback. I would really appreciate it.
OS - Jugaadu Sameer
Sameer tried their two ring signal again but Naina still did not answer the phone. For a moment he was frustrated and started hitting the punching bag in his room, but then suddenly a sly and determined smile appeared on his face. He rummaged through his cupboard till he found something that he slipped in his pocket and headed out on his bike.
Naina was sitting at the dining table trying to focus on some maths homework, but for a change wasn't doing a very good job of it. She was still annoyed at him for the stunt he had pulled in class today and had decided to not attend to any of his phone calls.
Naina thinking to herself: Ye samajhta kya hai khood ko! Use pata hai main kitne easily distract ho jati hu uski aaisi hartkatoon se.. aur phir bhi usne aaj mujhe pure class ke saamne! Jab main class ke sammne khaade hoke Physics ka itna important theorem present kar rahi thi! Uske baad agar main aage ka theorem bhool gayi toh issme meri kya galti hai? Per teacher ko kya batati.. daat toh khani hi padi.
She sat there fuming and going over the day's events. Sameer had tried to apologise and make light of the situation as always after school.
Sameer: Aare yaar tum itna ku naraaz ho rahi ho?
Naina: Kya matlab ku? Tumhe pata hai. Teacher ne pure class ke samne hi data tha mujhe. Tum thay na waha?
Sameer: Thik hai na.. wo toh tumhe har do din baad koi na koi presentation dene ko bolti hai. Aadhe topics to khoodne kabhi class mein padhaye bhi nahi hote hai.. Jab dekho class mein baith ke knitting karte rehti hai. Mujhe to lagta hai tumhe unki salary ka hissa milna chahiye.
Naina: Sameer, tumhe pata hai main padhayi ko lekar kitni serious hu. Aur maine bohoot achee se presentation tayar kiya tha.. aur sab gadbad ho gaya tumhari wajah se!
Sameer: Meri wajah se? Itna bada maine kya kiya?
Naine: Tumne kya kiya??! Matlab, aaise kaise tum mujhe aankh maar sakta ho presentation ke beech?
Sameer in a pouting manner: Aare wo maine jaan bhujh ke thodi kiya tha! Tum itni cute lag rahi thi... ke bus ho gaya. Wo hum padhte hai na biology.. sorry mera matlab hai Jeev Shastra mein ke humre body ke kuch involuntary reflexes hote hai. Bus waise hi ho gaya.
Naina retorted grumpily as she left on her cycle: Tum se toh kisi bhi baat per argue karne mein koi matlab hi nahi hai.
Suddenly Naina was called back to reality by a knock on the door. The door was open as their usually was. And Sameer stood there grinning! Naina felt so flustered by this new antic of his.
Naina: Sameer, tum yaha? Kya.. kya kar rahe ho?
Sameer: Tum phone nahi utha rahi thi aur mujhe tumse baat karni thi. Toh bus main aagaya.
Naina: Kya matlab bus aagaye?! Ghar wale poochange toh kya batayenge?
Sameer entered the house leaving the door open as it was before and occupied the chair next to her at the dining table.
He pulled out a piece of paper with a drawing on it and handed it to Naina. As expected by Naina it was a cartoon sketch of a boy holding a card with the word SORRY scribbled across it. She had got many variations of this from Sameer so far. Some days it the boy in the sketch would be holding out s bunch of flowers, some days balloons and some days a heart! Just as Naina was about to lecture him on how she did not want another sorry from him, she noticed that the boy in the sketch was winking. Naina burst out laughing at his sense of humour.
Naina shaking her head: Hey Bhagwan.. Sameer kya Karu main tumhare sath?!
Sameer was about to say that he could a lot of ideas about this.. but realised that voicing that thought wouldn't be in his self interest and just smirked.
Naina: Per tum aaise kaise aagaye? Sab poochenge toh..
Sameer: Waise toh main jaanta hu ke iss waqat ghar mein tumhare alawa koi aur nahi hai. Chachaji aur Tauji ko office se aane mein aur do ghante hai. Tumhare poojya papa Arjun ko uske cricket coaching leke gaye hai. Saali Saheba se toh daarne ki koi baat hi nahi hai. Aur Chachi aur Taiji bus abhi market gayi hai. Unn dono ko wapas aane mein thoda time toh lagega.
Naina: Tumhe kaise pata Chachiji aur Taiji bazaar gayi hai?
Sameer: Aare baba aadhe ghante se neeche nukkad per khada hu. (leaning closer and smiling mischievously) Sahi mauke ki talash mein.
Naina looking a little apprehensive: Sahi mauka! Kya matlab?
Sameer laughing: Kitna darti ho!
Sameer in a more serious tone: Naina, tumhe abhi bhi mujhpe pura bharosa nahi hai kya?
Naina saw the hurt in his eyes. She smiled at him fondly and replied: Pura bharosa hai. Per tum mujhe baar baar chedte ku ho?
Sameer leaned forwards looking at her intensely with a mixture of love and passion: Ku ki... mujhe pura haq hai tumhe chedne ka.
Naina blushed and felt butterflies in her stomach. She was thankful that she was already sitting down cause she was experiencing that weak in her knees feeling that she experienced every time he looked at her with such intensity. She tried to diffuse the intensity of the moment by announcing that she was going in to make him some tea. She headed into the kitchen and got busy making tea in spite of Sameer insisting that he was there to spend time with her and not for the tea. Sameer kept watching her through the window next to the dining table.
After Naina brought out the tea, they chatted about usual school and friends related topics for a bit as they sipped on their tea.
Naina: Waise us din jab tum pehli baar aaye thay ghar.. tum toh keh rahe thay tum chai nahi peete.. phir?
Sameer making a face: Naina, tumhare liye maine itna kuch saha hai.. aur tumhe sirf main chai peene laga hu issi baat pe hairat hai?!
Naina smiled at him fondly, feeling gratitude for all the efforts he had taken and thankful that he did not give up on them when she was going through the heartbreak. It had taken some time and had been a very painful experience for them both. But, they had come out stronger and both had learnt what they really meant to each other. Without realising Naina covered his hand with her own and gave it a tight squeeze still looking at him with love filled eyes. Sameer was really taken aback, surprised by her suddenly initiating contact. Seeing her loving gaze he wanted to pull her to him and hold her really close. But, he didn't want to do anything that would make her uncomfortable and break this magical moment. They shared a long intense eye-lock...
Suddenly they both were brought back to the real world hearing Chachiji and Taiji entering the house. Luckily they managed to put some distance between them before either of the ladies noticed anything. Both Chachiji and Taiji were surprised and a little shocked to find Sameer alone with Naina.
Chachij said a little nervously: Aare Beta tum aaj yaha kaise?
Taiji a little sternly: O bai.. Naina tumne isse humare yaha na hote hue chai pe ku boolaya hai?
Naina nervously: Wo.. maine toh.. nahi..
Sameer immediately walked over to Taiji and touched her feet.
Sameer: Namaste Taiji. Wo toh main aapse hi milne aaya tha.
Taiji: Mujhe milne?
Naina looked at Sameer in confusion, not sure how he was going to spin this. But, she knew that if anyone could sweet talk Taiji it was her Bhooluram!
Sameer: Ha Taiji, main aapse hi milne aaya tha. Naina ne kaha ki aab log abhi aate hi honge iss liye main ruk gaya. Wo.. main aapke liye kuch laaya hu.
Saying this Sameer brought out a bottle of Tiger Balm out of his pocket and handed it to Taiji.
Sameer: Nanaji ne yeh balm Singapore se laya hai.
Taiji: Singnapur? Wo Shani Shingnapur?
Sameer: Mera matlat hain foreign se laaya hai. Bohoot achaa hai. Maine soocha aap ke ghootno mein dard rehta hai toh shayad issse kuch aaram aa jaye.
Taiji was completely overwhelmed by this gesture and couldn't stop praising her Bhooluram for the next 5 minutes.
Taiji looking at Naina: Aare seekho jara issse. Kitna susheel bacha hai.. itne bade ghar ka hai aur phir bhi itna samajhdar aur seedha sadha. Warna hum to zindagi bhar chandan ki tarah gheeste rahe aur yaha kissi ko humari kuch padi hi nahi hai. Aur yeh kya Naina tune isse sirf chai peelayi? Biscuit nahi deeye?
Sameer: Koi baat nahi Taiji, biscuit aagli baar kha lunga. Achaa Taiji aur Chachiji main chalta hu. Bye Naina, kal school mein milte hai.
Taij: Aare Bhooluram, aaise hi aate raho.. accha lagta hai
Sameer eying Naina: Ji Taiji, jaroor aayunga
Naina shyly: Bye Sameer
Naina stood there silently feeling proud of her Jugaadu Sameer.
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