AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46)

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: docritu99
@Agnesfan
Sri i am considering that part to be "understood".!

No ways! 😳

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: Avneilll
Rii
Cliff changer again
Can't wait for the teaser to Play out😛

😆 😆
I was so sure people are going to kill me for not playing out the teaser soon.! But but but.! It will be in next update for sure.!

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Priyanka

@Postwas2

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#913

Awesome to the core😊😊😊...this is my first comment in india forums...i usually click like only...as i really don't know anout india forums😭😭😭...this is the only story which i read twice or more(also in wattpad)👏...u have such a amazing talent in writing...don't leave it at any cost...plz plz update soon...can't wait for it😛...

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#914

Much awaited answer: "pyaar karne k liye sirf ek moment lagta hai" so true. it was his case also. It was dat very first moment he fell for avni.

I hope his on point answer made some effects on avni. But what could she do? She had witnessed her mother, her grief..

Neil k bare me kya kehna! He is a more composed n committed character n his magical words are a kind of strength for avni .. He knows avni inside out, how to make her happy🤪.. Aur ek moemnt ban jata☺️

OMG!!!

Neil with Guitar .. I m drooling over him.. haaye!!❤️

" chal meri jaan " is the song i always wanted to hv in avneil scene in the show. But today somehow u fulfilled my wish... a big hug for u🤗

Everytime he comes with something new for Avni..Today MR Millionare was transformed into a college going lover boy! How could his to be wifey resist his charm!😳

U nailed it gal. your story has made me fall in love with it again n again ..Amazing update

waiting for next..

Sushree

Edited by sushfiza - 7 years ago

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#915

Aargh!!!! WTH.. how could you end it there??? No!!! In a very dramatic way of showing unhappiness for cliffhangers! Hahahahah

Mind blowing... I suck at the songs so I just went to YT to find out what were they.. and the last bit, haih!!!! It just drove me away.. I wish they played that song for Avneil! Chal Meri Jaan is such beautiful song.. it fit perfectly for the moment.. loving this lover boy Neil.. please update soon!!!!

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#916

Yay!!!

Chal meri Jaan

Thank u so much ri. I badly want this song on avneil. It's so apt for them.

Awesome update ri. I already read two times.😉

Yeh kesi aadath hogai aapki. Kyu yesi cliff hangers deti ho.🥺

I was waiting for teaser part. Next update mein milega na?

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Starting scene was so beautiful. How beautifully he made her understand why he love her so much. That was so heart touching to read.

Iam in love with that scene. No one can love her the way Neil love her.

He's pure goals. Mein phirse bolrahi hoon. Aapke Neil Khanna ke version mujhe bohath pasand hai.

Ice cream scene so cute. Bilkul sahi bola Neil ne.

Ice cream har problem ki solution hai.😆

Millionaire ab Romeo bangai.

Ur song selection was superb ri.

SaB meri favourite songs hai. But I love chal meri Jaan song.

Yesa cliffhanger pe chod di.

Totally loved it. Continue soon ri.

Eagerly waiting for next update.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#917

really loved the update, so amazing!

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

No ways!😳

I am developing the art of selective hearing, like CV's.! 😆 *evil smirk.!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#919

I said na you will make me emotional with his proposal! This guy 😭❤️ He has all my heart . World should have more Neil Khanna's! Is he even possible in this earth ! The way he opened his heart to clear all her low self esteem and doubts . "Pyar kabhi galat nahi ho sakta . Insan aur halat galat ho sakte hai " 👏👏 " I simply can't imagine my life without this simple , ordinary girl who makes everything extraordinary..." ⭐️⭐️👏Show stealers! Best part of his whole confession .

His ministrations near her lips and all her face were such sensual and arousing ☺️ My God! I never thought such simple gesture will be so hot

Best three songs for AvNeil' ! Shit ! You know how I wanted Chal meri jaan only on AvNeil than Ashish. I felt it best suited for AvNeil's story than theirs . I loved it thoroughly. Thank you for making Neil dedicating this to Avni . It was my long time dream ! ❤️😳 Soch na sake😳😳 Even media would have gone crazy seeing Neil with a guitar singing and enjoying lost in his world. Neil is such a dream with guitar . How come Avni is escaping shutterbugs s a mystery 😆

To be wifey 😳

Such a cliffhanger again . You have become so tease and expert in making us hang in confusion .😆😆 You naughty brat !

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docritu99

@docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#920

Originally posted by: Postwas2
Awesome to the core😊😊😊... Thank u so very much this is my first comment in india forums...i usually click like only...as i really don't know anout india forums😭😭😭... Wow, Ur first comment on my story. I am honoured this is the only story which i read twice or more(also in wattpad)👏 Really.! So heartwarming to know ...u have such a amazing talent in writing...don't leave it at any cost... Thank u.! I will try to retain it and more refine it 😉 plz plz update soon...can't wait for it😛...

Hey,
Thank u so very much.!
That really means a lot to me.!
Much love.!