Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLDLoved it dear
Awesome updateI really loved Dadu he was amazingI loved how teased Rahul Nahi Dulhaniya πDinner was really niceI enjoyed how Arohi and Sunaina bonded for foodSo finally Rahul and Arohi came face to faceEven Tia too joined inLet's see what happens nextThanks for the PMContinue soon π
Originally posted by: chikThanks for the PM .. Love how you have woven different characters... and now getting really interesting... Shruti Jha , Jennifer and Fawad.. great combination...
Originally posted by: .Archangel.Res. π³
------------Unres.Such an amazing update! <3The different colors/flavors of the Kapoor's are coming out with each shot and I'm loving it! βοΈI'm so glad you and all the readers are loving Kapoors. β€οΈThey are satrangi, I tell you. ππDadu. ππSuch an adorable man. :*I loved how he hasn't changed a bit and still treats his grandsons just like when they were kids, it's heartwarming to see that the ties haven't changed. :')The bit where Rahul hugs his grandfather a bit tightly cuz the video had touched the strings of his heart was beautiful. β€οΈRahul shares a beautiful bond with his whole family. It's just that some misunderstandings had drifted them apart which shall be revealed further in the story. β€οΈArjun teasing him and Dadu's nayi dulhan jaise kyun sharma raha hai..!! ππHis Sheila and Laila with Rahul covering Aarav's ears who insists that he's grown up now! π€£π€£Aww, my baby's blushing. πβ€οΈLike I mentioned in one of the comments, the best part about having siblings is pulling each other's legs. π³Rahul is an adorable big brother who still thinks of Neerav as kid. Guess that's the thing about being youngest in the family. You never really grow up for your family members. πSunita in the kitchen preparing dinner reminds me of my own mum, and Rahul being so cute as to he's as hungry as Geishu. πFinally Rahul and Aarohi come face to face, I can imagine Rahul cursing himself at his stupidity for standing in the middle. πSunita is just like any other mother. Forgetful of what she has added in subzi and what not! ππAru thinking him to be the helper for garden. πππI adore Sunita and Aru's bond, so motherly and loving. <3Sunita and Aru share a beautiful bond which will more evident as the story would progress. β€οΈAll the thoughts, sensations between Rahul and Aarohi were written so so beautifully. ππI had made it somewhat messy but you improvizsd it so perfectly! <3Spcly the bit where Rahul reminisces that she's still beautiful and the sensual tension between them when their arms brushed. Uff. βΊοΈAnd the fact that both noticed it. πAru-Rahul were always attracted to each other even when they were teenagers. β€οΈIt's just what they felt back then was an innocent attraction which almost all the teenagers feel when for the opposite sex. But now, it is more intense as they both have grown up into two very good looking adults. πTia is cute, but let's see till how long. πAru is bound to feel jealous, what they shared may have been buried but still they have a soft spot for each other which is evident.Everyone in this story has some or other flaw. No character is perfect and I guess, that's the beauty of this story. Tia too will make some mistakes, but if it ends well, all's well. No? πAru is a cutie! β€οΈUpdate Soon.You'll be updating. π
Originally posted by: taaniroyalRes..
Because I'm resss Lady πUnresFirst of all thanks for sharing a beautiful piece of writing with us.Now come to your ss.The character sketch you present is Amazing. I loved Fawad Jenni and you showed their bounding perfectly.First shot, nice start. loved Dadu message and all scene. the way he gave chocolate to Tia and last brothers Convo...You describe everything beautifully.will read shot 2 later.
Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03Hi Sweeties... Shanaya and Nandini.. hope you guys are doing well..π
"Saathi Rey" is one of my fab story I ever have read.. and trust me I eagerly had waited for the update so long.. so thank you for the pm.and also sorry for the late commentary.. due some reason I was too lazy to log in IFHey Keka. We are doing great. I hope you're good too. πThank you so much for loving this story so much. β€οΈIt's okay. However late, your comments are always a pleasure to read. πhowever, coming to the update.. in a word, it was simply awesome.no matter what how time got flew, the senior Kapoor always have been the cheerful one on the earth.. Rahul couldn't help but smiling upon Dadu's still young and childish behavior as he used to be years ago when they were still kids..hahahaπ even Dadu also teased him bringing a girl at home.. Arjun and Neerav were so naughty..I'm so glad you loved the update so much. β€οΈDadu is adorable and trust me, he will get more adorable in the coming updates. πFor your grandparents, you will always be small kids who used to play in their lap and they love you as much. π³It's our generation who has forgotten their value.Teasing and leg pulling is the best part of having siblings. πlater at the kitchen, trust me I just hold my breath here.. expecting the lovely environment I eagerly read the rest.. and yes at last it had happened,, they met again..π³rolf.. Rahul was so lost in her..π€£lol.. Rahul and the helper boy for the lawn..π what an expression he had that time..AWW!!!π³β€οΈthey were actually inseparable childhood bestie.. oh! that was great..πbut in the friction of time, they almost had forgotten about each other..!! well that was..π€Yes, they meet again and barely recognise each other. πRahul may have been away from his family for a few years but Rahul and Aru have met nearly after a decade. β€οΈTo know why? Keep reading. πThey were teenagers when they met last and now, they are two grown-up adults.however, Rahul still was pondering over how she used to be and what she had become now.. but there's one thing that hadn't changed.. she was gorgeous still.. (bravo.. he actually thought this..π³)on the other hand, Aru, if Rahul was surrounded with those nostalgia then how she could be so different from him.. after all isn't he the one she had buried in the depth of her heart..β€οΈshe was happy, awkward, wondering and what not.. so many year have passed and finally they met again.. good script.. beautifully described both Rahul and Arohi's mind state... lovely..hahaha..I really was expecting Tia to be obsessed with a lil jealousy over Rahul when she met Arohi..but things turned out in the opposite..ππ although it was unexpected but still i really enjoy it..seeing Arohi jealous for her teen crush,, it was funny yet, adorable..They may have been away for many years but they still have soft spot for each other in their hearts. β€οΈMemories are bound to haunt them. π³Tia isn't really aware of what Rahul-Aru used to share in past. So there's no insecurity as of yet. But future, can't say. ππlove it..just love it..continue soon..eagerly waiting for the next..πwith so much love..Thank you so much for this beautiful comment Keka. β€οΈWill be updating real soon. π
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