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Posted: 6 years ago
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Dedicating this os to aishu007, agirl12, jenni, Ananya..
Dearies this os only on ur damands.

Zaalim Dil


Aj fir tumpe pyar aya hai..
Aj fir tumpe pyar aya hai..
Behad aur behisab aya hai..
        Bittuji was dreaming once again..in dream, he was dancing with that writer on this song..

Recently bittuji read a novel..umm hot, sexy and mystery novel..SINFUL NIGHTS.
When bittuji came to know about the writer being lady.. well a young lady,his heart has come onto this writer lady. So he brought all her 25 novel..after reading His libido's mistake, now his libido is moving in all the direction..
So, bittuji read all her novels one by one in days and at nights, he dreams about that writer.

Is tarah se khudse aa mujhko jod tu..
Thoda bhi mujhme aa mujhko chorh tu..

Today morning, when he woke up, he decided to end this ungiven punishment.so began to think that how would he propose that lady writer, which ring he would buy..iron's ring or plastic ring and which crystal he would put on that ring..NaCl crystal or Borax crystal.. And wich words he would speak..etc etc.

Bittuji was in his room, thinking when and where he should propose his love to that lady writer...And then... suddenly his mobile rang... Bittuji received it.
It was his chief Rk's call. He was saying, "Bittuji!...Leela ji gave birth to your twelfth child... congratulations"

While bittuji,
Jaise farsh pr toot kr sheesha bikhar jata hai..
Jaise toota hua Dil apna bazar ata hai..
At night,
   Sheeshe ka Dil tha mera, patthar ka zamana tha,
   Dil toot gya...haaye..Dil toot gya..


So tell me how is it..
This is is for fun not for any insert.. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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res.. and first !

"bittuji was dreaming once again..in dream, he was dancing with that writer on this song.."
WHAT IS THIS🤣...
I dont think.. its Bittuji.. Its You Pirl.. yes u..
Who is Taking out her frustrations on me..🤣 hayee.. me sharam se Mar jaawa !!☺️
i didnt even blushed this much while writing his libido mistake..
The much i am Blushing Reading that Bittuji has Read the book.. and That HAS RESULTED IN HIS 12TH Kind🤣
. Congratulations Bittuji. For making a Cricket Team.
and My Love, Rk..
Thanks for Saving Ur Writer Man.. i owe U..
ahem.. ahem.. What song wasThat..
aaj phir tum pe Pyaar..
hahahaaa...i will Die.. Singing..
Zindagi ka safar, hai Ye Akhri Safar..
koi Samjha nai.. koi jana nai..
Thank god.. bittuji ke DIL KE ARMAAN AANSU O ME BEHE GAYE🤣
. Chal Credits, le lo pirl..
in the end u Saved me atleast..
creativitu at its peak😉 otherwise See, Bua Banane Ke baad Rishbala ke Babies ne mujhe So much tension Diya.. that i got fever🤣
hehee...❤️ it..
thankyou..
love u !
Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow.. I have no words to describe about how I felt reading this os.. Aan & bittuji.. But Aan you escaped.. How dare you bittuji..?? Your wife gave birth to your 12th child & you were dreaming about our writer.. Did you even think that she may be of your daughter's age..?? & that too your chief's sister..?? Ok.. His sister in one of pirl's previous stories.. So mottu bittu so sit there glumly & take care of your wife & children.. Dare you make your wife pregnant again.. Because of you India's population is increasing.. Lovely os dear... You always make me laugh aloud through your stories.. Thanks for the pm.. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--



res.. and first !

"bittuji was dreaming once again..in dream, he was dancing with that writer on this song.."
WHAT IS THIS🤣...
I dont think.. its Bittuji.. Its You Pirl.. yes u..
Who is Taking out her frustrations on me..🤣hayee.. me sharam se Mar jaawa !!☺️
i didnt even blushed this much while writing his libido mistake..
The much i am Blushing Reading that Bittuji has Read the book.. and That HAS RESULTED IN HIS 12TH Kind🤣
.Congratulations Bittuji. For making a Cricket Team.
and My Love, Rk..
Thanks for Saving Ur Writer Man.. i owe U..
ahem.. ahem.. What song wasThat..
aaj phir tum pe Pyaar..
hahahaaa...i will Die.. Singing..
Zindagi ka safar, hai Ye Akhri Safar..
koi Samjha nai.. koi jana nai..
Thank god.. bittuji ke DIL KE ARMAAN AANSU O ME BEHE GAYE🤣
.Chal Credits, le lo pirl..
in the end u Saved me atleast..
creativitu at its peak😉otherwise See, Bua Banane Ke baad Rishbala ke Babies ne mujhe So much tension Diya.. that i got fever🤣
hehee...❤️ it..
thankyou..
love u !



Yup Aaniya u escaped..or else he would make a mistake after reading ur his libido s mistake 😆
Hehe this song Dil k arma aasuo me beh gye, fits on Bittu ji

Shi me u got fever by reading mine love and marriage in IF.. THEN I will write more on you 🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
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A fantastic piece of writing n funny too🤣
Bittu ji in love wid d writer of my libido mistake
Omg🤣
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya h
Be hadd aur be shumaar aya h
N dat resukted in 12 th baby🤣
Aur dil toot gya bittu ji ka
Keep writing such pieces im loving dem
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu007

Wow.. I have no words to describe about how I felt reading this os.. Aan & bittuji.. But Aan you escaped.. How dare you bittuji..?? Your wife gave birth to your 12th child & you were dreaming about our writer.. Did you even think that she may be of your daughter's age..?? & that too your chief's sister..?? Ok.. His sister in one of pirl's previous stories.. So mottu bittu so sit there glumly & take care of your wife & children.. Dare you make your wife pregnant again.. Because of you India's population is increasing.. Lovely os dear... You always make me laugh aloud through your stories.. Thanks for the pm..



Lol.he doesn't know his chief s sissy is a writer..
Bittuji made a cricket team..he has a great hand in population increase 😆
B and B 😳
Thanx for commenting dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Seema...

A fantastic piece of writing n funny too🤣

Bittu ji in love wid d writer of my libido mistake
Omg🤣
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya h
Be hadd aur be shumaar aya h
N dat resukted in 12 th baby🤣
Aur dil toot gya bittu ji ka
Keep writing such pieces im loving dem



Thanks you dear for liking..
This bittuji is naughty types 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pirl18



Thanks you dear for liking..
This bittuji is naughty types 😉

bittuji k paas b dil h..zaalim dil😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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pirl first of all thank you so much for full filling my request... hehe aaniya dear and bittuji super...

his dream with aaniya perfect song selection but when Rk said 12th child i thought aaniya and bittuji u paired up ..


but thank god aaniya dear escaped .
here too you dint leave your chemical equation...

how dare bittuji think of iron or plastic ring for proposing aani dear...

Rk gives him good salary na... kanjus bittuji
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: janumkrk

pirl first of all thank you so much for full filling my request... hehe aaniya dear and bittuji super...

his dream with aaniya perfect song selection but when Rk said 12th child i thought aaniya and bittuji u paired up ..


but thank god aaniya dear escaped .
here too you dint leave your chemical equation...

how dare bittuji think of iron or plastic ring for proposing aani dear...

Rk gives him good salary na... kanjus bittuji



He is not kanjoos..all his selery leelaji is spending in air..and producing a cricket team
You taught Bittu ji and aaniya..haww.. gutter minded
Thanks jeni for liking it.