Maaneet Farewell Party Event - Page 134

Originally posted by: priya_21

Nice OS 👏
At times, we value relationships and our EGO in us lightens and value true love ... only when there is a seperation like this.

Amazingly outlined about Maan's current mindset...What all Maan Goes thro at that particular momement when he is left all alone in his home and Geet has probably moved on...

Well written👏

Originally posted by: priya_21

 

The writer has converted it into FF now and going to read the elaborated version.😛😉
Edited by Vaidhumom - 6 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

priya : what i say about next story 

Favo : this is painful

but beautiful

Sanju : one girl give seven years to one relation

Priya : but her husband not able to love her back

Favo : but this is not about geet

so just chill😉😃

priya : yes

so don't worry

you can read😉

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SAHANA ...A RHYTHM

 

Ooh sorry Sanju..I have read it but missed to comment on your personal thread. 

Really loved Sindhu-Bhairavi adaptation...👏

will post detailed comment today. 😳

Originally posted by: priya_21

Amazing OS...Loved it...

I recall the initiall story of Mohabbaten..aired on Star plus only difference in Geet is also a divorcee and has a son...Still loved the adaptation on Maaneet more.

Geet divorced Dev and have won the custody of their son Ansh. and Maan divorced Sam and  won costody of their daughter Palak

Geet and Maan live in same colony and both their families keep fighting on silly issues...but Geet took care of Maan's daughter Palak when Palak was alone and sick. where as Maan helped geet by participating in Ansh's school event for the father's day. The elders of both the families decide to get Maan and Geet Married..Initially, they protested and later agreed...and lived happilly together still having a wall of past between them until the time Dev met Geet again and things took nasty turn where Dev's currrent wife tried to shoot Maan and Geet came in between... she was  taken to hospital and treated on time and slowly getting back to safety...that's when they realised the true value of echother's lives...and they lived happilly without any wall or insecurities inbetween them.

very well written 👏

Originally posted by: priya_21

Geet : now a days am seeing 

he coming late

aaj toh inki class leni padengi

.

.

sanju : oh god my poor maan

going get scold

Priya : aaj bhut pyaar aa rha hai

Favo : wah sanju di

kya baat hai

Sanju : mujhe baki sb maan pasand hai

bs is priya ke chodke😉

Priya : not again sanju😡

.

.

           

Maan : ek taraf my wife is angry

another side my daughter

let see what punishment i going get

babji save me

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A little girl of around 7 years was pacing up and down frowning, her face contorted in anger with the clock ticking away every minute while a lady with hazel eyes, white-milky skin, black long curly hairs with a smile to die is sitting on the bed folding the clothes, glancing towards the little girl in every 2 minutes barely concealing the smile which was threatening to erupt on her pink petals.

 

  After almost 15 more minutes the little girl glanced towards the door and upon seeing him not coming out she roared in her little yet cute angry voice "It's been more than half-an-hour Mr. Daddy Singh Khurana and if you still didn't comes out then your punishment will double-up.

 ********removed due to writer demand*****crystal_flames(modified 29.01.2018)

~THE END~

Hey Vartika, will read and comment in your personal thread😛

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Me just going 🤣 reading this...

All I would say is Poor Priya...  Maan admires Priya as she has got him Good GFs in her stories while Geet hates her as she has been made to cry all the time and no BFs for her...so unfair...🤣

Priya is bullyied all the time...and now Maaneet too joining hands with Sanju and Kalpi 😆.

Loved it 😃

Originally posted by: priya_21

mein bechari 😭

Dont worry Priya...take full revenge in the upcoming event 😆

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Dont worry Priya...take full revenge in the upcoming event 😆

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hey Vartika, will read and comment in your personal thread😛

Originally posted by: _CrystalFlames_

Sure LD... Will be waiting to hear out ur take on it 😊😃

Have just commented on the blog dear😳

Me just...🤣

Really loved reading it. Its a true plight of all parents..no wonder how much they scare the enitre world..but they are bheegi billies in front of their children.. really good one...😆

Aaj tak MSK ko Kisi ne Catwalk nahin karaya...woh bhi ladki ki bes main.. 🤣YOU DID IT thro Akira... So, a biiig biiig applouse to you Vartika 👏