~FATAL ATTRACTION~ SS On MehRya , Chap 10 part B on PG-140 28/01/18 - Page 15

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40

GREAT FIRST CHAPTER DI๐Ÿ˜›

i love it so far๐Ÿ˜› 

Mehak safe sk life ๐Ÿ˜› i would love mehak to turn dark in this story๐Ÿ˜† 

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON๐Ÿ˜†


Thank you Cindy...I wanted to write today but iam dead tired 
Need a fresh mind to write the next chapter๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao



I know baby it's ''hear'' her name ๐Ÿ˜ก but kya hai na i m too lazy to write hear again. I thought u would understand what i wanted to say. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿคฃ


Ailaaa mein toh samjha rahi thi ..tu masoom bachi ko daraa kion rahi Hai๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sangana

    Sham  ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘   i loved your 1st chapter, one different story, waiting for the next chapter 

Awww thank you sangu๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I will update soon๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..




The first chapter was bingo buddy..I mean you have put up so much ...on it just like show ...the story intro was full on in 4G speed ๐Ÿ˜›


Shaurya's part of story was sad that how a normal dream guy chose to become sumthing else becoz of his parents sudden demise ...and not even cared abt his health ...?
Meets a girl online who helped him in a simple way to get sum good sleep ...who happens to save his life once in real ?
Guess his loneliness made him fall for the one who was a concerned friend ...
But with all this bad deeds he did ...will he able to redeem himself for her love or he will become devil and let her be his angle ?
Great start ...great part...

way to go
My love ๐Ÿ˜ณ conti soon...


Awww colorful feedback after long๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I thought I was dragging about Shaurya's life ... but it was necessary as I changed his profession ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

She is the one who is bringing some peace in his life ๐Ÿ˜ณ
But soon things will change when they won't have interaction for sometime๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Loved that glitters... thank you so much love . will try to update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anuteja

Di update milega kya

Weekend par hi possible Hai ..agar possible hua toh Kal try karongi๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Whole chapter was beautifully 

Love shourya and mahek chats 
Waiting for next update...
Update soon...


Thank you so much paru ๐Ÿค—
I will try to update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Weekend par hi possible Hai ..agar possible hua toh Kal try karongi๐Ÿ˜•

di try karona Kal  
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Posted: 6 years ago
Well your this story came as complete surprise...
So thot of giving u surprise from my side too ๐Ÿ˜ณ...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anuteja

di try karona Kal  

Kal se maid aajygi...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Mein try karongi maybe late night mein update karongi Kal ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Well your this story came as complete surprise...

So thot of giving u surprise from my side too ๐Ÿ˜ณ...


Loved your surprise ji๐Ÿ˜ณ