Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40
GREAT FIRST CHAPTER DI๐
i love it so far๐Mehak safe sk life ๐ i would love mehak to turn dark in this story๐PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON๐
Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40
GREAT FIRST CHAPTER DI๐
i love it so far๐Mehak safe sk life ๐ i would love mehak to turn dark in this story๐PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON๐
Originally posted by: vimikrao
I know baby it's ''hear'' her name ๐ก but kya hai na i m too lazy to write hear again. I thought u would understand what i wanted to say. ๐ ๐คฃ
Sham ๐๐๐ i loved your 1st chapter, one different story, waiting for the next chapter
Originally posted by: Thabassum..
The first chapter was bingo buddy..I mean you have put up so much ...on it just like show ...the story intro was full on in 4G speed ๐Shaurya's part of story was sad that how a normal dream guy chose to become sumthing else becoz of his parents sudden demise ...and not even cared abt his health ...?Meets a girl online who helped him in a simple way to get sum good sleep ...who happens to save his life once in real ?Guess his loneliness made him fall for the one who was a concerned friend ...But with all this bad deeds he did ...will he able to redeem himself for her love or he will become devil and let her be his angle ?Great start ...great part...
My love ๐ณ conti soon...
Di update milega kya
Originally posted by: enthusiastic
Whole chapter was beautifully
Love shourya and mahek chatsWaiting for next update...Update soon...
di try karona KalOriginally posted by: Shamrouz
Weekend par hi possible Hai ..agar possible hua toh Kal try karongi๐
di try karona Kal
Originally posted by: Thabassum..
Well your this story came as complete surprise...
So thot of giving u surprise from my side too ๐ณ...
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