Urdu OS: Patjhar ke Baad // Asfiya // Yakeen Ka Safar - Page 2

WOW. This was written so beautifully. Aap to bhai kamaal ho, you write so well in both English and Urdu. I almost wish the script was Urdu too. 

AWWW!!!!!😲

Originally posted by: Cheesybites

Wow yar! This was so poetic and natural. The flow of your writing feels melodious and beautiful. I really never wanted it to end! Please keep writing more, You're brilliant!And thank you so much for going out of your way and making an effort in urdu, loved it

Thanks Cheesybites.  Yes, I do a little rhyming but am really novice.  I guess my love for poetry shows in my writing. 

Appreciate it.

Originally posted by: SS88

WOW. This was written so beautifully. Aap to bhai kamaal ho, you write so well in both English and Urdu. I almost wish the script was Urdu too. 

Thank you yaar.  There is no kamaal.  Kamaal tu Asfiya ka jis ne humain sataya.
I was trying to find a good urdu script writer for the title but then thought, I'd just go with roman Urdu.  Why mislead my audience. 

Originally posted by: .sweetchick.

AWWW!!!!!😲

I've read many stories in English or Hindi but Urdu I guess this is the first time! 😲

Awww the magic! Like I'm totally moved to another world... Urdu is such a beautiful language... would love to understand more...and dramas and reading stories help me a lot for that😳

You have an incredible talent MashAllah ! Please keep writing stories and especially in Urdu, the magic is just something else... and plus with Asfiya... then it's just BEAUTY!!!!!

Romantic scenes UFFFOOO *blush* ☺️

YES. OMG YES. Urdu is a very poetic language and it ebbs and flows so beautifully in prose as well, if you know what you are doing.  I am really glad to have found another Urdu buff.  If you ever need help understanding I am here.

Of course I will write Asfiya.  They are my muse for everything now a days.  😆

You my friend are truly talented! You write equally well in Urdu and English. Had to Google meaning of few words but this was a fine piece. These days Iove hearing zubiya's thoughts and musings since we saw so less of hers in the last couple episodes. 

Edited by Alizba63 - 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Alizba63

You my friend are truly talented! You write equally well in Urdu and English. Had to Google meaning of few words but this was a fine piece. These days Iove hearing zubiya's thoughts and musings since we saw so less of hers in the last couple episodes. 

Also I loved your trailer os. It was the best and truly the one that made my heart race...i can't thank u enough for that one! It was like i was watching it on screen...could totally imagine and feel  the chemistry.

I assume u have written more OS...but I couldn't find them again when had the time to read as the yks threads went very very fast so can you provide links to your other stories? Thanks once again and keep writing!❤️

Thank you Alishba.  TBH English is easier to write than Urdu, for me anyways.  If you want Zubiya musings try my "Drowning."  Its my most honest piece but comes from a dark place.

Hhaha I get teased about the "Trailer" to this day.  I have written a few more:

Kab se?: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4907305

Baarish: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4909854

Drowning: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4914568

congarts 

Originally posted by: --HiNa--

congarts 

farhat read this

someone posted the link of this page

and she replied with winked smile

Are you kidding?

That lady is my IDOL!

So happy but also a little embarrassed.  😆

Originally posted by: octaverider

Are you kidding?

That lady is my IDOL!

So happy but also a little embarrassed.  😆

dont worry you written so beautifully