FF : A fire left beneath the heart- chapter four updated

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Chapter one
Preet settled herself comfortably into the guest house. She wondered how come she didn't get her manager to book a room in the Gaguwal guest house... Yeah, she had hidden intentions... She couldn't let anyone know that she's back. Her relationship with Amba had been difficult for the past two years. Ever since... No, shouldn't think about that... She was in contact with Gunjan and Gunjan was the bridge between her mother and sister... Whatever Amba told her she always edited it before it reached Preet's ears... It was two weeks since she knew that Simran was alive and living with the Bajwas... Her sister's marriage alliance was fixed with Chander as per a plan of Mohini... Within a month her sister will get married to Chander... Gaguwal... She never thought or wanted to step back in that place... But she has to get her sister and mother out of this mess... She had money now... She was a television actress and a top model in Mumbai... She had worked hard to reach the place she was now... All the Bajwa-Pavanya jodis she had helped had helped her back when she was in need... She had cancelled her shoots for the month and reached Punjab that morning... She called Gunjan "Didi, visit mummy and tell her that I am back... Tell no one else... In between mention my name in a conversation with chachi and make sure Jagan chacha hears you... Mention about how I am doing well... About my mansion in Mumbai, real estate and modelling... I don't think he ever saw 'Chand Pari' so don't bother to mention anything about that... We'll use his greed against him... ". After her call with Gunjan she thought about what Gunjan had told her about that, that cheat... Amba had told Gunjan about Simran being alive and her running away... Upon discovering that her sister was at Bajwa house Gunjan went there to collect her. They almost killed her and Simran if not for Rohan. Raj had stopped Gunjan while leaving and shouted at her for protecting Simmi while Raman was dead. Preet felt as if a dagger was pushed into her heart at the mere thought of his name. Anyway the next day the panchayat claimed Simran as a Bajwa bahu and sent her off with Bajwas. Rohan was a nice guy now, Gunjan had told her. He let Simran talk with her and Amba and took care of her. Raj had dramatically declared, visiting Pavanya house, that he won't let anything happen to Simran due to his love for Raman. Gunjan all riled up had fired him with the story of another Pavanya sister who had trusted a Bajwa. She said that Raj had looked pretty guilty and sad after that. Seeing Amba breaking down, he told her that Simran will be safe. Before Amba had the time to say anything Jagan had thrown him out of the house... Amba had gone to Delhi along with Gunjan to convince Amrit to go and stay at Bajwa house for Simran's safety. Amrit had agreed as she understood a mother's pain. Then Amba had started to look for groom for Simran despite the pleading of Gunjan and Babli that Simran's mental health was not right... Chandar had arrived due to her mother's stupidity and now she has to solve it. 

Raj was drying his hair with a towel. He thought about Rohan confessing to him about his feelings for Simran few days ago. Raj had promised him that he would never let anyone separate Rohan and Simran didi... Raj asked Rohan just to be sure whether he was sure about Simran... Rohan had told him the exact dialogue that Raman had told him ages ago... When you fall in love you will understand... He had already fallen in love and already understood... No matter how much he wished to deny it, a part of his heart was left behind in that mandir two years ago. He could never get married again,not that Amrit would allow him she always said he's already married even though he couldn't accept that marriage, he couldn't cheat another girl because he can't love her. His mother had come back to his house because Amba said. Till this day, she avoided talking to him directly. He was a murderer, that's what she said. He murdered a girl's dreams... He tried to keep going all day, working hard to his dad's delight just to forget his feelings... The guilt that chased him... But the end of the day she was back... She starred in his dreams... When he was conscious he had horrible flashbacks where he was painted as a monster... So he started drinking... Then had to stop due to his mother's tears and brother's unhappiness... Also whenever he was drunk she in a dream self would come and dance around him singing his favourite romantic songs... Then that day when he went to see Amba and tell her that Simran would be fine, Gunjan had taunted him about how he promised that he will keep her younger sister safe, so no need to keep the elder sister as safe as he kept the younger one. He had left with his heart bleeding. He punched the wall angrily. They all had no idea, no idea how he managed to abandon 'her', the girl he was crazy about. It wasn't easy to realise that he was in love with his brother's murderer... He hated the panchayat for banishing her from her home. Seeing her at times, even just to taunt her... Seeing her from far away to soothe his heart... Getting information about her life from their spies at the Pavanyas... He had looked forward to that... He hadn't expected her to disappear completely... She wasn't allowed to contact her family... He thought she might stay in the pind just to be near her mother... Amba didn't have any contact with her as much as the household staff knew. His guilt had peaked when they heard that Amba was forced to live in the aangan. Luckily Gunjan had shown up with a lawyer and warned Jagan... He had gone along with his father to watch the drama. Gunjan had on her earphone at the time. He had realised Preet must be at the other end of the line telling Gunjan what to do... That was so like her, helping out her family even from a distance... He had felt happy due to unknown reasons when he understood that Preet had communication with her sister...
Rohan came into his room after knocking at the door. The sound had brought him back to reality. "Veere, it's Simmi's roka tomorrow... I have been trying to calm down a hyper Gunjan on the phone from morning" Rohan said sadly. His love is going to be unrequited after all. Raj comforted his brother "We won't let Chander take away our house's bahu..." 
The roka was supposed to be held at a hall Gaguwal and Jagan was busy with preparations. His mind was reeling with what Gunjan had told his wife. So now Preet had money and power. All the more reason to keep her away from the house. She'll want revenge from him for her banishment. Gunjan came there and started manipulating him. She convinced him that the only person who Preet wanted revenge against was the Raj Bajwa. "Maybe she'll even help you with that property dispute case. What you have been doing is illegal. Preet and I can help to keep you out of jail".At the end Jagan was convinced to let Preet attend Simran's marriage functions. Gunjan gave him the phone to talk to Preet. "Chacha" a chirpy voice welcomed him. You would have thought she was talking to her best friend. As she talked to him sweetly and convinced him of her intentions towards Bajwas he was happy. "Okay, Mannu seth, come to Simmi's wedding and attend her roka tomorrow". They decided that they won't let anyone know that she's coming. The Bajwas especially Raj should have a shock. Gunjan talked to the panchayat and Jagan informed Harjeet that they should come early to the venue so that Simran's mother and sisters can have the pleasure of getting her ready for the ceremony. He didn't mention how many sisters are gonna be there. 
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Awesome story I loved it please do continue 
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Hey do continue it. Only in entertainment industry can you earn name and fame so quickly. That was very sensible of you. Please continue the story and also your other story. 
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In this story Preet is famous for her role in a children's series called Chand pari... She's the lead in that... It will make sense as Raj won't be watching children's shows... Also she's currently completed her first film... Which is yet to be released... Preet got that chance because of kismat... You'll see... Jagan is in for a shock... Whether it is pleasant or not you'll see.. 


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Yeah that makes total sense. Only in the entertainment industry can luck favour you so much that you end up becoming a famous and a wealthy person in two years time.  But most serials will have their protagonist become successful and ruthless business men and women in two year time. And then show them as very righteous people. If your business is so successful in 24 months then there nothing legal or righteous about you business. Edited by Ash.raje17 - 6 years ago
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Chapter two
Preet told Amba her plan to stop the roka ceremony. After all the crying and hugging out of the way she was now talking normally to her mother. Even Jagan promised to help as he had his own selfish motives... "What do you exactly want?" Jagan asked her. "After I save Simmi didi, I want 'him' grovelling at my feet, begging for forgiveness" Preet replied coldly. She didn't mention what she planned to do with Jagan for putting her mother and sister through the torture firstly.
The Bajwas reached the venue early morning along with Simran. Gunjan ran to the car and pulled Simran out, hugging her. Raj and Rohan smiled gently seeing the affection display, while Harjeet and Mohini looked bored. Chander smiled flirtatiously at Gunjan while she turned away her head in disgust. Rohan stepped in front of Gunjan blocking Chander's perverted view. Chander walked away to the mandap.  "Chalo, Simmi didi, today both your sisters will help you get ready" Gunjan said, sneaking a glance at Raj. Raj thought nothing of it as he supposed she was talking about Babli. Preet was decked up in a designer white lehenga with dark blue net over it. Her hair was arranged in an elegant manner with braids on the upper side and elegant curls flowing freely. Her hair was decorated with pearls and she wore long diamond earrings. She had white gold bangles and a diamond bracelet. Her make-up was done to perfection. All in all she resembled a fairy princess. Absolutely gorgeous and stunning, Jagan had trouble ordering guys around who were busy swooning over her. When Gunjan started to walk away with Simran to her direction and Bajwas walked to the left towards the mandap, she started running towards Simran. She called out 'didi' in her loudest voice and Raj froze while the rest of them turned around. Raj could see Nihal's face. Nihal's jaw dropped and his eyes glazed over. "wow" Nihal muttered. Raj turned around and saw an angelic form throwing herself upon Simran, hugging her. She didn't spare him a glance. Raj stood there totally mesmerized for what seemed like an eternity. "She's gorgeous... This girl was living like a boy for eighteen years??? What a waste of beauty!!! She's more beautiful than the rest of the village put together..." Nihal said, clearly in awe. Rest of Harjeet's thugs nodded along with him. Raj was standing in a daze while Harjeet angrily said " If all of you have put your eyes back in their sockets, can we go to the mandap". Raj knocked himself out of the daze he was in and accompanied his father. "Bro, you managed to abandon 'that' at the altar??? How did you manage??? I can barely take off my eyes from her..." Nihal asked excitedly to Raj. Raj felt a ripple of anger on the surface of his numbness. He gave a glare to Nihal indicating him to shut the hell up. Rohan watched the drama quietly.
Inside Simran was having the time of her life with Preet. Preet gave her lots of chocolates and toys. She had brought her personal hair and makeup stylist with her from Mumbai. Nadiya did Simran's grooming while Preet became friends with Simran. "Drink this" Preet told her, giving her a glass of juice. As Simran's roka proceeded Preet ignored Raj though he was staring at her intensely. Rohan gave a gasp of horror as Simran stumbled and fell as foam came from her mouth. 
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Great one Megha. Keep it up. Description of Raj's expressions is amazing!!! 
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Megha do complete this FF. 
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Chapter three
Raj felt sick. Rohan was crying heartbroken. They have been waiting forever for the doctor outside the ICU. He looked over to Amba. She was sitting there and crying. She put on quite a show but Raj felt something was wrong with her reaction. The sound of anklets made his head turn. Preet walked to her mother with a bottle of water in her hand and patted her head comfortingly. Raj let his eyes wander over her slim lovely form. "kisne socha tha, ki chota sa Mannu bada hokar itna khoobsurat ho jayega" he heard Chander say. He turned to find Chander looking at Preet open mouthed almost drooling. Raj felt a wave of nausea with disgust. Preet looked calm and composed. The doctor came out and Preet and Rohan rushed to him. He said that Simran would have to be hospitalised for a few weeks. They were going to shift her to a room now. Preet signed Gunjan and Gunjan started to talk with Amrit sweetly. They told Amrit that since they need women to stay back with Simran and Amrit was not well Simran's mother or one of her sisters can stay at the hospital. Mohini tries to say that she will stay but Amrit says she won't let a characterless woman stay with her son's widow. Preet turns to Chander "jeejaji, if either me or Gunjan didi stays you won't have a problem, will you". Raj thought, even rocks won't say no to her and Chander by the loosest definition was human only. Chander was ecstatic that she was talking to him and says yes. Mohini was furious. "I and Rohan veerji will also stay here in the corridor till Simran didi gets discharged. She's still a Bajwa bahu.." Raj said suddenly. Harjeet looks happy as he feels his son is trying to disturb the Pavanyas. Rohan looks gratefully at Raj. Preet feels happy... Two birds with one stone.. She recalls how she added a mild medicine to Simran's juice and bribed the doctor to hospitalize her. Now Raj is going to stay here... Payback time darling...
Soon Simran was shifted to the room. Amba started feeding her khichdi. Simran told Preet that she wanted more sweets. Raj and Rohan looks on while Preet assures Simmi that she'll get her sweets after she eats the khichdi like a good girl. Preet says "Chacha I'll go to the guest house and change". Jagan, in Raj's hearing range tells her "come to your own home bache, why would you live in the guesthouse?". He orders Sukhi to bring Preet's luggage to PH. Raj tries to not feel happy about Preet's living arrangements. Gunjan and Preet leave with Jagan and Sukhi to freshen up leaving Amba with Simran. Amba talk with Rohan politely and inquires where both of them are going to sleep if they stay there at night. Rohan replies they will sit on the bench outside Simran's room. Amba says either Preet or Gunjan will stay with Simran at night and both of them at day. Raj again tries not to feel happy about it. Meanwhile Preet tells Gunjan that she will be the only person to stay at night while one of Jagan's goons act as her bodyguard and stay outside the room. She tells Gunjan her plan to teach Raj a lesson. Gunjan assures her that she will help Preet with her plan. Preet wears a one piece dress that reached her ankles and went to the hospital. ( https://www.instagram.com/p/BbCmbYrhXLj/). Raj didn't see her. Gunjan went first and started discussing with Rohan about making plans to save Simran. "Simmi didi ke liye kuch karna toh padega... Oh God, this idiot... Here Chander is let loose and she is roaming around like a bloody wedding cake" drawing Raj's attention to Preet. Preet was standing there pretending to be disinterested in their conversation while she saw with satisfaction Raj's jaw dropping. He looked away suddenly. He tried to pay attention to what Gunjan was saying but it was difficult as Gunjan always spoke to his brother only and pretended Raj didn't exist. Her dressing style had definitely changed. It was easy hating her when he didn't have to deal with the attraction. He thought. What was she doing now... Away from Gaguwal. The exile had changed her. She wasn't the old girl who freaked when her dupatta slipped. He realized he was staring at her again while she looked at him. Should he smile? What does one say to someone who they are madly attracted to? Sorry, that wasn't the case, was it? He had cheated her. He hardened as he thought of the reason behind it. He was looking at his brother's murderer. She stared at him coldly. They stared at each other with pure hatred. Suddenly Rohan cleared his throat and both looked away. Preet felt that her mission was going to be more difficult than she anticipated. He still held her responsible for Raman's death. But she hadn't missed the desire in his eyes. She still had the same effect on him. "Didi, you go home. I'll take care of Simmi didi". Gunjan nodded. "I think we can take care of Simmi didi... She's a Bajwa bahu..." Raj said, his jaws taut. "Yeah, everyone knows how Bajwas take care of their bahus. No need to bother about my sister" Preet snapped. Finally she was acknowledging his existence. "Besides you don't have much claim on her anymore. Her fiance has said himself that I can take care of her. Toh acha ye hoga ki tum log apne manhoos shakal lekar jao yaha se". Raj didn't know what to reply. Preet went inside to Simran's room. Gunjan went home whereas Raj and Rohan stationed themselves outside the room. Raj found the situation highly uncomfortable. The Pavanya goon who had also situated outside Simmi's room leered at the Bajwa bros. Preet came outside the room to fill the water bottle and Raj felt an electric shock. The nightie she wore now clung to her figure. The overall was loose and he could see each of her curves defined. ( https://www.instagram.com/p/BPd0OlEBMqk/ ). He gulped and looked away. Her hair was loose and it fell on her face and shoulders. She was going to bring trouble if she carries on like this. She was too pretty and these weren't the clothes that you see in a village. But then she is Manpreet Pavanya, former shah. She would shoot anybody who will dare to mess with her. If he wasn't stupid this firecracker would have been waiting for him at his home right now with a nicely cooked meal as his mother would have taught her. He doubted Amba would have taught her cooking. Maybe she wouldn't have been this slim if she was left with him for two years. She would have definitely been a little bit or most probably quite a bit round in the middle. He would have waken up to this lovely face, buried in the pillow beside him. He dozed off on Rohan's shoulder his thoughts changing into dreams.  After a few days he decided that he'll take revenge against Preet again. His father confirmed this whereas Rohan looked pained. "Veere, you're gonna hurt yourself only by hurting her. I have seen in your eyes that you love her". Raj snapped angrily at his brother "just because Simmi didi is innocent doesn't mean her sister also is. She killed my brother. I'll make sure her life is painful". Firstly he scattered glass pieces where she was going to walk. Preet trod on them and screamed and fell down. Her feet were bleeding badly. Harjeet and Mohini who were watching laughed. Raj bend down as if to check on her and smiled cruelly. He pinched her wounds smiling more as she winced. "Arrey, nurse... Zara ointment la dho" he said doing overacting while he pinched her wound again. "Koi, zaroorat nahi... Iska dawa mere pass hai..." she signed her head towards Raj and pulled out a spray from her handbag. She opened her bottle and sprayed it directly into his eyes. Raj howled with pain and scrambled away from her. He was for the first time experiencing girl power : pepper spray.  Preet took the help of Gunjan and went away from there as Rohan dealt with his brother. Another time he paid a bar dancer to dance with him in the corridor of the hospital to the music in the lobby just to make Preet jealous. Instead of getting jealous, Preet along with the entire Pavanya clan howled with laughter as if he was putting on a comedy show. Just as he was about to stop to avoid getting more ridiculed police came and arrested him along with the dancer for public nuisance. A very angry Harjeet had bailed him out making him promise that he won't do such stupid antics again. 
*After 15 days*
 Simran was to be discharged from hospital. Today they held Chander and Simmi's sangeet and sagai at the Shaadi mahal at Gaguwal. Preet wore a very beautiful black suit ( https://www.instagram.com/p/-4IOKmvsC6/) and guys were going gaga over her. She had donned a simple set of diamonds to go with it. ( https://www.instagram.com/p/Ba4My_3ALJm/). Raj tried to crush down the feelings that arose when he saw her. She danced to some item numbers. Then Gunjan came along to show them all a video. Chander and Mohini were accusing each other. Mohini told him that if anyone ever finds out that she killed Raman she'll tell everyone that he gave her the gun to shoot Raman as he was jealous of Raman for getting Simmi's love. There was an uproar at this as Mohini ran out. Raj was feeling numb. He fell on his knees shaking badly. He had flashbacks of their wedding and how he abandoned Preet. He recollected hurting her. He suddenly pulled himself together and went towards Preet who seemed to be like an impassive statue. His tears started flowing through the barrier that stopped them for two years. He stroked her face. Nobody was noticing them in the mayhem. He took a strand of her hair and kissed it. He came close as Preet pushed him away. "Stay away from me!" she said angrily. "Please give me a chance... I know I am not worthy... But please... I really love you... And I know that you still love me" he said wiping his eyes. Preet's eyes were dry and cold. "You're right..." she said. Raj smiled, she was admitting that she loved him still, after everything. "You're really right... You are not worthy of me or my love" Preet said coldly as she turned away from him. "SIMMI..." Amba's scream made both of them turn. Rohan filled Simmi's maang with sindoor and made her wear mangalsutra announcing that nobody will separate them. Raj cursed. His brother had to complicate things right now!!!!! Preet had seen what Raj had failed to see. Chander was trying to do the same with Simran when Rohan intercepted him. Jagan stupidly announced "oh great... Now we again have another Bajwa bahu for a daughter". Amba collapsed onto the floor in dead faint. Preet, Gunjan and Simran rushed to her from three different directions and held her before she hit the floor. ( farz nibhade laadli plays). As they rush Amba to the hospital Rohan explains why he did it to Preet and Gunjan and to his relief they accept him as a brother in law... At the hospital Simran watches as Gunjan and Raavi calls Preet Mannu and hugs her. She says "Mannu..." and feels dizzy. She has a flashback of Amba yelling "Mannu tumhara bhai nahi, tumhari sabse choti behen hai Simmi...". Then she remembers the temple scene before her wedding where she was sitting with her Mannu and telling her "Preet, tu bahut achi hai. Agar tumhari jaga mera koi bhai bhi hota na toh phir bhi mere liye itna nahi karta jitne tune kiya hai". She screams "Mannu..." and Preet rushes to her. Simmi tries to hug Preet but faints into Rohan's waiting arms. 
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Wow! That was too good. A bit rushed, but intriguing never the less.