Il Mio Amore[My Love] (Part 11|Pg 25|Feb 15) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Awesome story.
Loved it.
Read all d parts..
Very well written.
Oh god don't know who is kid..ishu is not less than Ruhi..
Ruhi is soo cute..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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IL MIO AMORE(MY LOVE)-PART 5

Mr bhalla saw his wife smiling and looking down from the window. He gave a sweet peak and snaked his hand around her. At first she was shocked but later smiled seeing his husband's antics. After being married for 32 yrs, she knows her husband so well. "Kya bhallaji, Raman ke wajha se kush ho tho ussi ko de dete na kiss" she said still looking at Raman who opened door for Ishita.
"Mai sachi mai bohot kush hu Raman ke liye. Usse lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata wo kyu Neil ko le ke mere samne custody aur Ruhi aur Ishita ke baate kar raha tha." laughed slightly seeing his son who was moving out with his wife. " Mujhe pata hai Toshiji wo Ishita se pyar karta hai bas humhe nahi ke raha tha."
"Ap baap bete ek dusre ko bewakoof samahte ho par dono ka jawaf nahi." said Toshiji removing his hand.
"Waise Toshiji" he said releasing his hand and brushed his lips on her and said "Aap moti ho rahi ho. Todha dieting sieting kiya kora" and pinched her little and leave laughing after seeing her open mouth and flushed cheek. He has no doubt he is in love with this amazing woman.
****
If there one thing Raman is irritated now is by Ishita's likeness to lipstick. Its not she is like of make up but she is fond of lipstick.
"Ab no more kissess Raman. You spoiled my lipstick 3rd time in car." she said fixing her lipstick.
Raman again cornered his car while Ishu was looking her watch.
Raman was about to kiss her when she stopped him. He raised his eyebrows asking the reason.
"Meri lipstick lagate lagate khatam hogai." she said making a cute face.
"I will buy you a new one." he said caressing her face with his thumb.
"Nahi sab bolte hai but koi nahi dilata." she said throwing her empty lipstick cover and red was all Raman could see because of anger.
"Kisne nahi dilaya?" said Raman some how controlling his green eyed monster.
"Vandu akka and that miku." making an irritating face. "They use my lipstick but never buy me one."
He looked his wife with are you serious look and said, "Mai dilaungana"
Ishu ruffled his hair hair and Raman started correcting it with irritating face"Kitni mushkil se kiya tha Ishu aur tum ne bigardiya."
"Dekha aap bhi irritate hue." she said.
Raman catched herhand softly and said, "Tum mere kiss se irritate ho thi ho kya, Ishu?"
She looked down and said, " I like it Raman. I always love them but Ruhi bhi intazar kar rahi hogi na. Aur Radha ma says we should always look presentable aur meri lipstick bhi khatam ho gai thooo..." very softly.
Raman pulled her in side hug and drove towards his little devil.
*****
Ruhi was very angry. She was waiting for them for so much time but they are no where. "Mai tho baat hi nahi karungi" Ruhi was mumbling softly then she heard "Rrruuuhhhiii" her Ishima's voice. And she ran towards her only to hug with anger long forgotten.
"Mai apke liye apki favroite butter chicken layi hu" Ishu said slightly pulling her nose.
"Ha ha jo ki meri mumma ne banaya hai" Raman said from side.
"Aur Ruhi ki mumma ko khana banana nahi aata ye tho Ruhi ko bhi pata hai." Ruhi said making Raman chuckle and Ishita pout. "Ruhi time hua jaldi chal" said Ruhi's friend.
Ruhi looked down towards her friend and signalled her to move saying she will come.
"Ishima"
"hhmmm"
"Mujhe na aaj school nahi jana" Ruhi said playing with her taali.
Ishita looked toward Raman who was pretending he was not listening anything.
"Raman"
"No. Ruhi not today na baba. Waise bhi you will have to read only half day babu." Raman said softly.
"Ruhi again look Ishita with puppy eyes and Ishu said, "Raman pls na. ,mei sachi ghar me sab pada dungi. Paka promise"
They both look at other and "Plsss Raman/Papa" both pleaded at same time making it impossible to Raman.
"Ruhi beta chalo" said Ritu mam(Ruhi's teacher). She passed a filtry smile to Raman.
"Mam mere stomach mei na pain hai" Ruhi said and Ishita said "So we are taking her with us."
"And you are?" Ritu said.
"Ruhi's mumma" Ishita said giving Ruhi to Raman and forwarded her hand, " Ishita Raman Bhalla"
She accepted saying, "Ritu Mehta, ok mei chalti hu. Take care Ruhi. Bye Mr. and Mrs Bhalla" with some sadness. Its not she wasnt happy looking Ishita. Ruhi was a cute and lovely child and seeing only Raman with Ruhi she had thought him to be single parent. And being Raman all handsome and caring for Ruhi made some soft corner for him but she was happy seeing a happy family.
Ishita pulled her right ear mumbling a quick sorry to god and same did Ruhi for lying. Raman shook his head and move towards car with with his queen in his hand and princess in queen's hand.
Ruhi was settled on Ishita's lap in passenger seat all clad in red frock. They were in their own world and suddenly car stopped. Ishita put her hand arround Ruhi and Raman around Ruhi and Ishu after balancing himself.
Pls look below too.
Edited by Gigli - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Updated new part hope its good. I will end court part and Ishra's first meeting if good response in next one.



Sooo my best friend shouted me making me understand that a doctor being unknown to physical relation isnt practical. So I changed Ishu's profession in good way as I myself was feeling its not woking. Have look at CS slight changes and even to know about Ishita's Radha ma.


I got this idea looking at a couple in our Town. They were married for 5 yrs and they had no child. You all know how society talks bad about girls. But we got to know it later ki she was from a rich family and as her minsuration cycle didnt started till 20(her marriage age) so her family gave her only limited information. And the boys family delibrately choose her so that noone doubt about their sons manliness(He was impotent). But she was only educated to 8th standard and later her mother teach her other household things so that her one fault could be neglected and I didnt wanted Ishu to uneducated so was little confused. But my best friend came as rescurer.

Thank you for reading my stupid ranting. Do like and comment.
Love you all;
Gia

Edited by Gigli - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Awesome update
Loved ishu and ruhi
Both are nautankis
Update soon
Thnx for the pm😊
Edited by srithika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Awesome update dear
Love senior bhalls romance
Nd ishru is Soo cute
Continue soon as possible
Nd thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Lovely update dear
I loved it
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Oh god, ishu is so worried for her lipstick n
Raman is irritated..
Loved ishra scenes.
Ishru r soo cute..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plz continue soon..
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Superb update
Ishra scene was lovely
Ishru scene was cute
Ishru both are nautanki
Pls update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
superb update dear
love ishra moments
ishru scene was cute
waiting for next part
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Nice update dear
Ishra scence were so cute
Ishu is mostly cutest
Loved ruh ishima scene
Updatr soon
Thanks for pm

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