MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020

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CHARACTER SKETCH
Maan Singh Khurana: A 26 year old Straightforward guy.Belong to rich family
Amar singh Khurana: Maan's father. Disciplined man with down to earth nature. Loves his mother, son and wife so much. Owner of Khurana empire.
Anjali Khurana: Maan's mother.A perfect mother, perfect  wife personality. Manages whole home very well.
Savitri devi Khurana: Maan's dadi. Loves her family and relation with daughter in law is like friendship .
Geet Handa: 22 year old Silent, Innocent, Sweet girl Apple of her father's eye. Belong to middle class family.
Brij Handa: 26 year old. Geet's brother.Protective towards Geet.
Mohinder Handa: Geet's and brij's father.Man with values. An honest person.
Rano Handa: Geet's and brij's Mother. Her whole world is her family.
Devki Handa: Geet's  and Brij's dadi. A strict woman.

PART 1

In Hoshiarpur
At Handa Home,
Mohinder came home. He was so tensed. Rano brought water for him. 
Rano: Kya hua ji pareshan lag rahe ho?
Devki : Kya hua puttar ji ? 
Mohinder: Ab meri naukri nahi rahi. Factory band pad gayi. 
Devki: Baba ji ye kya ho gaya? Achanak se.
Mohinder: Achanak nahi. Jis tarah se Factory me kam chal raha tha ek din ye hona hi tha. Main janta tha.
Rano: Ab hum kya karenge ji?
Mohinder: Delhi. Hum sab Delhi jayenge. Waha mera dost Manchanda rehta hai. Wo hamari madad jarur karega.
Devki: Delhi. Apna ghar chhodkar Delhi.
Mohinder: Jaana Hoga hame aur koi rasta nahi hai. Mujhe waha jarur naukri mil jayegi. 
Devki: Jaisa tujhe thik lage.
Mohinder: Rano main aaj hi Delhi ke liye nikal raha hun. Yaha dhyan rakhna. Jab tak mujhe waha naukri aur hamare rehne ke liye achhi jagah nhi mil jati aap yahi rahoge. Kuchh dino me bacho ki pariksha bhi hai. Uske bad hum sab delhi jayenge.
Rano: Ji main yaha sab sambhal lungi. Ap chinta na karo.
Mohinder left for Delhi. Before leaving he informed Manchanda he is coming to Delhi.
After journey of hours he reached Delhi. 
At Ramesh Manchanda House
Mr. Manchanda: Kaise ho? Safar me koi taklif to nahi hui?
Mohinder: Nahi.
Nirmala( mrs. Manchanda) brought snacks for them. Pinki saw him.
Pinki: Uncle Geet aur Brij bhai nahi aaye. 
Mohinder: Wo sab aayenge bete phir hamesha sath rahoge.
Mr. Manchanda: Pinki bete jao padhai karo.
Pinki: Jee papa.
Mohinder: Tum to jante ho Ramesh mera yaha aane ka karan 
Mr. Manchanda: Haa mohinder tum chinta mat karo tumhe job mil jayegi. Tumhe accounts ki kafi achhi knowledge hai.Hum milkar tumhari naukri ke liye koshish karenge. Maine mere pehchan walo se bat ki hai. Unhone kuch jankari di hai. 
Mohinder: Bas naukri mil jaye phir rehne ka bhi intezaam karna hai.
Mr. Manchanda gave him address of some companies. 
Mr. Manchanda: Ye jo company ka address hain na ye Khurana construction hai well known in Delhi. Agar yaha naukri mil gayi na chinta ki koi baat hi nahi hogi.
Mohinder: Phir to main pehle yahi jaunga. Waise bhi ek tarah se acha hi ho raha hain. Delhi me jo padhai hogi bacho ki wo hoshiarpur me nahi hogi. Yaha achhe  school me padhaunga
Mr. Manchanda: Sab thik ho jayega. Chalo khana kha lo. Phir kal subah hame jana bhi hai interview ke liye. Main tumhe chhod dunga KC office.
Nirmala served them food.
Nirmala: Bhai sahab Maa ji rano behen bachhe sab kaise hai boht din hui unse mulaqat nahi hui. Par ab aap sab yahi aaoge to dher sari bate karenge. 
They had talk and finished dinner and moved to respective rooms to take rest.
Next morning.
Mohinder and Ramesh get ready. Ramesh dropped him to KC .
Ramesh enquired about interview at reception.
He went in cabin. And greeted
Mohinder: Good morning Sir. 
Mr. Amar Khurana: Good morning Have a seat.
Amar saw his folder. And asked him.
Amar: Pehle aap hoshiarpur me kam karte the. Mr. Khanna textiles. Aisa kya reason tha ki itna nuksan ho gaya.
Mohinder:Sir main ek mamuli accountant tha. Bas mera kam hai accounts dekhna. Main matlab mujhe kisi ke bare me kuch kehne ka koi haq nahi hai. Mr. Khanna ko apne bete par blind trust nahi karna chahiye tha in term of work at least. Shayad aaj sab thik hota. 
Amar: I know aap soch rahe honge ki main ye kya puch raha hun. Main sab janta hun is company ke sath kya hua kaise hua. But your answer isase pata chalta hain you are honest toward your  job. Mujhe kuch aur puchna bhi nahi. You are hired. Apko aapka appointment letter mil jayega wait outside. 
Mohinder: Ek request hain aap mujhe aap mat kahiye tum kahiye mujhe achha lagega. 
Amar smiled and nodded
Mohinder felt happy. He came outside. Asked receptionist permission to make a call. He dialed Handa house number. 
Rano received.
Rano: Hello.
Mohinder: Mujhe naukri mil gayi. Bas rehne ka intezaam ho jayega aur bacho ki exam hote hi hum yaha aayenge.
Mohinder collected appointment letter. Went to Manchanda house . 
Ramesh was happy listening. Nirmala brought sweets. All were happy.
Here, Rano to shared news to kids and devki 
From next day , Mohinder joined office. Amar was very impressed with his calculation accuracy. He thought he will give him some progressive project accounts for approximate calculations
Just then , 
Mohinder: May I come in Sir?
Amar: Yes. I must say tumne boht impressive kam kiya hai. Kya hua? Take seat first. Baitho baitho.
Mohinder: Sir mujhe ye kehna nahi chahiye kyunki aaj mera pehla hi din hai. Par mujhe half day chahiye. Kuch dino me mera pariwar mere sath hoga. To mujhe rehne ke liye ghar dhundhna hain. 
Amar: Par  abhi boht sara kam baki hai achha thik hain  main tumhe rehne ke liye ghar dunga. Par ek shart hain . Din me rat me main jab bhi bolunga tumhe aana hoga. 
Mohinder: Jarur sir. Par sir aapne rent ka kuch bhi ...
Amar: Relax. Sab thik hoga. Tumhare ghar me kon kon hai?
Mohinder: Mere alawa meri maa, patni, 10 sal ka beta aur 6 sal ki beti.aap ka pariwar sir?
Amar: Mera bhi beta 10 sal ka hai. Meri maa, meri patni and me. Amar gave him card sham ko aa jana.
Mohinder: Ye to apka ghar ka address.
Amar: Relax maine bola na sham ko ghar aa jana. Tab tak tum wo accounts ke files check kar lo.
Mohinder: Ok sir.
In evening
Mohinder arrived at KM and told he want to meet Amar. Guard enquired and allowed him to enter. Servant  went to call  Amar.  Amar came 
Amar: Tum khade kyun ho baitho. 
Just then Savitri and Anjali came. Amar introduced him to both. Anjali told servant to make tea.
Mohinder: Sir aap mujhe wo rehne ke liye jagah. 
Amar: Haa. Maa main keh raha tha ki Mohinder ko hum outhouse de dete hai.  Waise bhi band hi rehta hai. Aur jis tarah accounts ka kam pending hai na I need Mohinder at anytime
Savitri: Haa kyun nahi. Par yaha bhi kam. Amar beta kabhi to aaram kar lijiye.
Mohinder: Koi baat nahi mam ab main aa gaya hu na sir ab jarur aaram karenge.
They laughed together.
Anjali: Bhagwan ne kisi ko to bheja meri pareshani dur karne ke liye.
Mohinder: Par sir main aapke ghar 
Anjali: Bhai sahab aap chinta mat kijiye.
Savitri : Haa bete. Par ek baat ki chinta hai aap mujhe mam mat bolo. Maa keh sakte ho.
Mohinder:Thik hai maa ji. Sir ghar ka rent etc.
Amar: Main iske  liye naa kahunga to tum to manoge nahi. Thik hai jo bhi rent hoga I will cut from salary dont worry tum afford kar paoge.
Mohinder: Thank you. 
Just then Maan came . 
Maan: Good evening papa. 
Amar: Good evening beta.  Mohinder ye mera beta Maan.
Maan: Hello uncle. 
Mohinder: Hello beta. 
Savitri: Aapka bhi beta hai na Amar ne bola tha.
Mohinder: Haa ek beta aur ek beti. 
Anjali: Beti bhi hai. Aap boht nasibwale ho aapki beti hai. 
Amar:  Chandu inhe outhouse dikhado. 
Mohinder thanked him. 
Maan : Dadi ye uncle kaun hai? Wo outhouse kyun jaa rahe hai
Savitri: Papa ke office me kam karte hai. Aur outhouse mein rehenge.
Anjali: Aur unka beta bhi aapke age ka hai Aapko ek  naya dost milega. Aren't you excited?
Maan: Yes Mom and hugged her. 
Precap: Handa family at outhouse
PLEASE Ignore spelling mistakes. I hope you will like this story too.
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wow I am first😊 thanks 4 posting so soon! congrats on the new story! 
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awesome character sketch  
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terrific update! beautifully written! Mohinder lost his job n goes 2 Delhi 2 find a job! he n Manchada r friends! Mohinder gets a job at KC! Amar Khurana also gives him a place 2 stay - OH! he meets the Khuranas who treat him with respect! Maan's mom wants him 2 b friends with Mohinder's son who is his age! Maan agrees! update soon! waiting 4 Maaneet 2 meet! thanks 4 da pm Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Congratulations on your story 

Character Sketch is so Interesting 
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Nice story please continue soon
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Such an Amazing Start 

Mohinder has lost his job and now he and his family is tensed but he also tells them 
that they will go see his friend Ramesh and once in Delhi Ramesh gives the address of
KC 
Mohinder goes for an interview and immediately Amar Khurana is impressed with his personality 
he also lets him know that he and his family should live in their outhouse
Mohinder is treated with so much respect in the Khurana home that is something admiral already about the Khuranas
Maan now happy that he will have Brij as his friend 
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nice cs 
and nice start maaneet r kid's mahidar came fr job and get in KC 
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Nice concept... Handa family living in outhouse... Grtt.. curious to know chemistry of maan brij n geet... Cont soon
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Congrats for the new story
Nice start
Mohindar had shifted to Delhi
He will be staying in outhouse
Very interesting