OS: Keep It Simply Sweet - Page 5

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing!! 👏

Loved it, it was so sweet. 

I was surprised how hesitant Suraj was in telling her his feelings I thought he was more confident. 

Chakor is so innocent, when he told her he wants to meet her parents, I wanted to scream at her to say yes.

Can't believe she kissed him first. 😆

I don't think she's fragile, may be lacking in confidence. To be fair, Suraj didn't make his intentions clear, she thought he was toying with her.

Originally posted by: vk1nonly

Phew...
Really I am tired of searching good words in my dictionary to define your work and appreciate your writing. It was really a cute one( sorry not intelligent enough to have a good word).
Throughout I felt Suraj is the game played but I was like aaaw when Chakor kissed him.
Throughout I felt Suraj pretended to be lusty and may be lusted on her which will later convert to love but I was like aaaw when he refused to kiss her in front of everyone.
I simply loved it and I think I have another content that I can use to refresh my mind.
Loads of love.

Originally posted by: amrutha131

It's so sweet and beautiful Maithu 👍🏼
Never expected Chakor to kiss first and their cheek kisses are so cute😆

Originally posted by: vvv

Awesome

fantastic

fabulous 

you stole my heart girl!!!

i loved it so so much

actually it was simply sweet

👍🏼

Originally posted by: sumsukor

very very sweet

I would say simply superb!!

Nice the way Suraj is appearing as a playboy but serious in his own ways!

Chakor... the strong girl,,  seems to be vulnerable with Suraj.

Good one though

really enjoyed it

Originally posted by: chasa

Aww..really enjoyable...nice one maithu

Originally posted by: aishagup

awwdorable and sweet!!

thanks for writing and sharing.

Originally posted by: appledesire

Perfectoo...

I loved it...

Love @ first site.
Kiss = keep it simply sweet..

Superb dee..

Again.. thnx a ton.. for beautiful wrk..

Originally posted by: taahir004

This was just a Phenomenal piece of work 

I loved every bit of it 

Suraj at first I thought of him as someone that is arrogant and a total jerk like telling Chakor the kiss on her first day was just a bet then he always staring at her I mistook that gesture of his for trying to make her uncomfortable but instead it seems like he was drawn towards her 

his actions always told of an untold emotion towards her though he never voiced out anything but he certainly held emotions for her that carried care and concern too 

the trip where he dedicated the song to her I felt he was letting Chakor know about his deep feelings for her 

then he confesses that it was never a bet which certainly means he is very much interested in her 

and I so love how he calls her Sweety 

Suraj taking photos of his Sweety that is cool and it does seem like he is serious as he ask her can he meet her parents okay Chakor is confused as she believes because after college they both will go separate ways but his talks say differently 

now the truth or dare game which indeed benefits both Suraj and Chakor though I think its probably difficult for girs to just kiss a guy especially when she knows she has feelings for him 

both kissed and Suraj confessed he loves her Chakor while she too confesses her love just that moment itself was priceless now both comfortable enough to speak through everything now both are a couple and Chakor no longer has to be sad or in pain thinking that the guy she likes was just playing her 

Originally posted by: Charaju

Sweet! Superb, fantastic...
No words to describe 👏