Is it goodbye?? Rikara shots. Shot-4 pg 6- 9/7/17

Nice one dear loved it...
I am waiting for the moment the word stay from om's mouth...

Superb update

Very nicely done... can't wait for the next part.



Edited by writergenie17 - 6 years ago

Loved this so much. I wanted to read something about the post CPR scene, glad i came across your writing. The way you portrayed gauri's thoughts and feelings is just so wonderful. Waiting for the next shot. Post soon :)

Originally posted by: jodh57

Lovely interpretation...

thanks for your valuable cmnt😃 Edited by ....Anabella... - 6 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

Nice one dear loved it...
I am waiting for the moment the word stay from om's mouth...

 thanks, the next part would have Om's POV am working on it😊

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it 

 thanks Ayushi for your cmnt😃

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Superb update

Omkara stopped her

Even I was wondering after being shut in freezer

How could Gauri just walk out

She would have needed a hot shower🤣

She somewhere doesn't want to go

Not only for her love for family

She has some feelings for omkara

But can't. Name them

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

. Thanks Vrinda😃. Mutual feelings insan freezer mein band rehke kaise  kahin PR bhi ja sakte hai there's a thing called after effects of hyperthermia cv's shayad bhul gaye like usual amnesia hogaya😆. Am working on it will update asap Edited by ....Anabella... - 6 years ago

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Very nicely done... can't wait for the next part.

I've always wanted to know just what their mental states were after that CPR scene. The show unfortunately cut off for the MS before we could explore that a bit more. I'm so glad that such a good writer as you is tackling that for us. 

You beautifully conveyed Gauri's thoughts at that time... Can't wait to learn Om's part of this and find out what happens later.

Eagerly waiting for an update!

p.s. Thanks for the PM!

 thanks Genie for such a lovely comment it means a lot .I really wished they could have explored their mental states after the CPR scene it  could have unleashed Rikara magic and would've progressed their relationship. Aish!! Am not such a good writer as you, I just not random stuff at.occasions. your always welcome😃