Rikara SS - Yeh Kaisa Ishq Hai

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Rikara SS - Yeh Kaisa Ishq Hai

Hey guys! Mainly a silent reader of the forum. I'm more of a reader than a writer, but thought of this idea, so decided to write. 
Begins after Gauri and Omkara's marriage with Omkara back in Mumbai and Gauri has followed him due to her mother's wish. Also, Gauri lives with Tandi and his wife for the time being and Kali Thakur is back to get revenge off Omkara and Gauri.

Tandi's house:
Gauri: bhaiyya ji main kaam dhoondne ke liye bahar jaa rahi hoon
Tandi: teek hai kab tak vapas aaoge?
Gauri: pata nahin bhaiyya shayad mujhe der ho sakatee hain
Tandi: acha phone kar dena
Gauri: teek hai ab jaa rahi hoon bye
Tandi: bye

His eyes stared with lust, desire and anger at the pretty girl's picture. The thought remained in his mind and haunted him that she could've been his right now if it hadn't have been for her saviour. "Main usse nahin choodoonga! Usse chot lagne chahiye! Aur iske liye main uske parivaar ke liye aaonga." His dreaded laughter began to spread as his mind began to build together a treacherous idea of what he wanted to do. 

A beautiful middle aged woman with her stylish clothes and bag walked along the pavement lost in thought as the wind guided her along, but what she didn't know was the danger surrounding her. A man in his early 20s walked towards the woman each step revealing danger. In a hurry he latched onto the woman's bag which startled her and in flash he tried to run, but...
"Ek jhaap me deewar pe sat jaiye be. Tumhari himmat Kaise Hui bag ko choree karane kee." Before the man could run off with the woman's bag at the scene reached Gauri Kumar Sarma. Although her hands are delicate the force on the man's ear stopped him from running off. "Chal de bag vapas aur sorry bol." He returned the bag to the woman and stared at Gauri in disbelief. "Arre Bol sorry!" 
"Sorry" The woman accepted the apology and asked Gauri to let him go which shocked Gauri as she tried to protest the woman explained that she should let him go and he should use this as a lesson to which Gauri understood and freed the man and in a flash he was gone.

"Waise Thank You" said the woman with a smile.
"ThankU mat boliye aap humse barre hai" said Gauri.
"Phir bhi jo tumne kiya uskilye kuch toh mujhe kehna aur dena chahiye"
"Agar aapko kuch dena hai to aap mujhe sirf ashirward dejiye" said Gauri as bent down to take the woman's blessings.
"Jeeti raho" said the woman with a big smile. 

As the two continued to talk and laugh a pair of eyes were watching them in disgust which belonged to none other than Kali Thakur. "Mujhe maarne ke baad ye apne saas ke saath has rahi hai!" His mind began to rage as he ordered his men to do something which the two innocent women weren't expecting. 

End of part 1 guys. Sorry there was no Rikara scene and sorry for the Hindi it is not exactly my first language I only know what I've picked up on from shows and films. Also, if you want me to PM you the next part please say and buddy this account.

Index
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 2
Chapter 3: page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
Great start. Poor the innocent ladies. Are they happened to be the Oberoi ladies???? waiting for your next update
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Like the way you right the the scene where gauri saved her Saad without knowing was nice scene I thought the man was the man of koi Thakur but he was someone else... Looking forward to another shot
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Originally posted by: sara1990

Great start. Poor the innocent ladies. Are they happened to be the Oberoi ladies???? waiting for your next update


Thank you for your comment.
And it was meant to be jhanvi and Gauri.
I'll try to update soon.
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Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Like the way you right the the scene where gauri saved her Saad without knowing was nice scene I thought the man was the man of koi Thakur but he was someone else... Looking forward to another shot


Thank you so much and i wanted Jhanvi to know that gauri is a nice person, so thought its best to show Gauri save her. 
Also, i was trying to build the suspense, but obviously Kali Thakur is a man who doesn't need to the dirty work himself, so it can't be him.
Thank you again I'll try to update soon
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Thank you for your comment.
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It's jhanvi and Gauri... KT kya karega?? Interesting continue soon
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Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

It's jhanvi and Gauri... KT kya karega?? Interesting continue soon


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Chapter 2

 

"Chodo mujhe! Kaun Ho tum?" Said Jhanvi trying to feed off her kidnapppers.

"Hum ne aap ka kya bigada hai? Chodo hume!" Demanded Gauri.

"Jhanvi Oberoi aur Guari Kumari Sharma aapne Humara bahut saara Barbaad kiya hai" said Kali Thakur stepping into the light.

Gauri's eyes widened as she realised who the voice belonged to. She wished that it was nothing, but a bad nightmare, but that was too far from happening "Aap? Aap kabhi nai sudro ge!" Jhanvi watched the scene unfold among her, but she was too exhausted to continue fighting if her kidnappers and ended up collapsing. Gauri then realised that she wasn't alone and someone else needed protecting. "Mujhe rakhna hai ton rakhlo isse jane do! Aunty ne aap ka kya bigada hai?"

"Bigada kuch nai par usne uss insaan ko to janam diya hai. Badi ayi apne saas ko bachana ke liye!"

"Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? Ye meri saas nahi hai main toh balki aaj inse milli hoon."

Kaali Thakur refused to answer and instead went and ordered his men to keep an eye on them as Gauri continued to ask questions.

"Koi isse chup toh kar!" Kali Thakur said as he slammed the door and went leaving Gauri puzzled as to what just happened.

 

Oberoi Mansion:

Omkara Singh Oberoi had it all looks, money, girls you name it, but one thing which let him down was trust. His trustworthy nature caused him more pain than ever as he always seemed to trust the wrong people. They ruined him so much that the thought of love was just an illusion for him and it was nothing more than a compromise. He sat their in thought by the window as the wind blew his once freed hair, but even that had been tied to hatred like his heart.

"Maine teek kiya aise ladakyion ke saath aise hi peesh karne ka tareeka hota hai." Omkara closed his eyes as the flashbacks if her getting hurt haunted him again. He opened his eyes again and came back to reality that although, she was his; he never made her his. "Yeh kaisa rishta humara main usse nafrat karta hoon par iss nafrat mein bhi main uski kadar karta hoon. Mann karta hai ke uska khayal rakh hoon aur yeh bhi mane ke liye tayyar hai ke uski koi galti nai hai par mere ankein kaise dhooka de sakti hai."

 

Kidnapping Area:

"Mujhe kuch na kuch kar ke yaha se nikalna hai." Thought Gauri as she looked at Jhanvi who needed to be helped. Gauri looked around to see how she could get herself and Jhanvi out of this mess. She noticed the window, but before she could escape she needed to find a way to untie the ropes which surrounded her hands. Her eyes wandered about to see if there was anything that she could use to cut the ropes and then she noticed the broken glass bottle that laid in the corner of the dark and damp room, but to reach it she'd have to distract the guard. "Mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai!" Gauri announced which started the guard.

"Toh main kya karu? Yaha tumhe koi 5 star hotel nazar ata hai kya." Said the guard.

"Mujhe Khana hai aur who bhi warna main chillaongi" said Gauri which followed by her screams to eat.

"Chup!" The guard said annoyed at her. "Main kuch lekar ata hoon." He left the room whilst Gauri prepared to make a run for the bottle. As soon as the guard locked the door she darted towards the bottle and cut the ropes with struggle and her next job was to make sure Jhanvi wakes up as she alone won't be able to take her very far. There was jug full of water lying there for the guard which Gauri used to her advantage.

"Aunty, Ankhein kholye. Hume yaha se nikalna chahiye. Aunty." Jhanvi slowly started to come to her senses. As Jhanvi was in no state to talk Gauri quickly opened the window for them to escape as time was ticking. Both of them ran till they couldn't run anymore.

"Beta, bhaagh toh liya ab kahan jaayenge?" Said Jhanvi trying to gain her breath back.

"Pata nahi aunty main toh aap nayi ayi hoon. Hum apne dost jaise bhai ke saath rehte hai. Hume pura sheher ka pata nahi." Said Gauri wondering how she was gonna get out of this mess.

"Fikar mat karo, hume sirf main road tak jana hai aur mujhe apna ghar ka raasta pata chal jayega. Ab chalo yaha she isse pehle koi aajaye." They started running, but along the way Gauri hurt her arm, but didn't say anything as getting to safety was the most important thing. They reached the main road and were close to the Oberoi mansion, but Jhanvi pulled a muscle, so was finding it difficult to walk, but when Gauri Kumari Sarma is there; there is nothing to fear. Jhanvi guided Gauri to her house as the two walked together with Gauri helping Jhanvi.

 

Oberoi Mansion:

Bua Maa: "Pata nahi Jhanvi kaha hai. Dekho kitni deer hogi hai kahin kuch galat naa hua hai uske saath."

Omkara: "Bua Maa kuch nahin hua hai main jake phone karta hoon pata lagane ke liye."  (Omkara leaves the scene whereas Rudra consoles Bua Maa)

"Rudra." Came a voice from the door.

"Maa! Kaha the aap? Aur aapko kya hua?" Asked a concerned Rudra whilst helping Jhanvi with Gauri to the sofa.

"Kahan thi Jhanvi? You know I was so scared! Aur kya Haal banake rakha hai tumne?" Said Bua Maa.

"Main teek hoon ab par mujhe deer hogi thi kyun ki kisine mera kidnap kar liya tha. Agar aaj Gauri nahi hoti toh shayad main nahi hoti. Thank you Gauri, main tumhe pehle nai keh sakti isilye ab kehti hoon." She then noticed that Gauri's arm was bleeding and asked to see it, but before she could answer Omkara came back and hugged Jhanvi, but his back was facing Gauri, so they couldn't see each other.

"Kahan thi aap? Pata hai hum sare kitna dar ge the."

"Omkara, main teek hoon. Main deer ayi kyun ki kisine mera kidnap kiya tha par aaj agar Gauri nahi hoti toh main shayad nai hoti aaj. Pata hai Omkara usne mujhe do baar bachaya tha, pehle uss choor se aur ab in kidnappers se." As Jhanvi was looking towards Gauri, Omkara turned his head around to find the most bitter and sweet surprise. Gauri was speechless for her destiny played the best game as she met up with her husband once again whether or not he acknowledges the wedding of theirs. For Omkara, it was probably the worst moment of his life. His wife which he didn't want to acknowledge was here to haunt him again. He didn't know what to say or do, the women he hates the most in his entire life had just saved the women he loves the most, but his thoughts was left hanging as Rudra noticed Gauri's arm was bleeding a lot and needed to be treated.

"Arre aap ke baanh se kitna khoon nikal raha hai. Main abhi first aid box lekar ata hoon." This alarmed Omkara as he just wanted to take care of her, to hold her and ask her if she was alright, to comfort her even if she was a home wrecker.

Coming to her senses Gauri said "Main teek hoon, mujhe ab chalna chahiye."

"Are you crazy? Raat kitni hogi hai. Tum kahin nai jaa rahi ho. Yahi rahoge aaj keliye." Said the ordering Bua Maa.

"G dhanyavaad par main yaha nai rai sakti. Yeh aapka ghar hain bahla hum kaise rai sakte hai yahan." Said Gauri as her anxiety continued to grow.

"Beta rehlon yahan. Abhi bhi bahar katra hai." Said Jhanvi trying to convince the girl who's been helping her all day.

Amongst all this Omkara realised its due to him she doesn't want to stay here, so decided to say something "Aapne meri Maa ki jaan bachayi hain usse main aapko kitni bhaar thank you bolonga utna hi kum hoga isilye aaj raat keliye hi sai par rehlo yahan." In the meanwhile Rudra came back and was surprised the way Omkara was speaking and looking at Gauri this made a note to himself to ask O about it.

To say Gauri was shocked would've been an understatement for the first time she had seen a different version of Omkara and to say she didn't like this version of him better would've been wrong. "Teek hai main aaj keliye yahi rehloongi." This put a smile on everyone's face, but the biggest smile plastered on Omkara's face. Rudra came forward to bandage her arm, but she denied and said she'd do it herself to which Rudra did protest after all it's not everyday he gets to help a beautiful girl, but Gauri wasn't one of them and wished to be shown her room to which they obliged as everyone bid each other goodnight telling them they'd speak about what happened tomorrow. There was one person however, who couldn't care for the surroundings as his eyes were just fixed on Gauri as she walked towards her room for the night with the first aid box in her hand.

 

That's all for part 2 guys. Sorry if it's too long and sorry again for the Hindi. 

Edited by Love_Family - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting... I love the fact that Gauri isn't forcing herself on Om ... Can't wait to read more