RiKara's OS-GalatFehmiyan

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Posted: 7 years ago



G
alatFehmiyan
Its just a small version of Rikara's post marriage drama
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Aap ki himat kaisey hui humse shaadi karney ki???...
Waisey tu har dui ghari baad hamrey character pe ungli uthatey they aur ab achanak se itna pyaar kaisey aa gaya hum par ke shaadi hi kar li...


Gauri was going on and on like a non-stop radio and Omkara was so much irritated with this that he put on his ear phones to avoid the chatter box called Gauri Kumari Sharma...


Humri baat tak nahi sun rahey hum yahan pareshan hain aur yeh geet sun rahey hain...ji tu chahta hai ke aik jhaanp de deewar pe satt jayi bey par kya karein by fault hi sahi ab ye chirota humra pati hai...


Seeing him comfortably listening to the songs with his eyes closed, Gauri's mind boiled out in anger she almost pounced on him and snatched away his ear phones...
Sharam bhi aati hai ya nahi hum tab se boley ja rahey hain aur aap yahan geet sun rahey hain...


Shaadi hi kyun ki agar beth ke sad songs hi sun'ne they, hamarey saath ye mazak kyun kiya...humein biwi tu bana liya ab agey kya chal raha hai tumre dimagh me ye bhi bata do...
He was giving her no response but the wrinkles on his forehead were getting thicker and thicker with her each word...


Ab yehi chup baithey raho gey ya kuch agey karo gey bhi...hamra matlab ke..


This time her words really added fuel to the fire...


Ae lardkhi apni bakwas bandh karo
...Omkara stood up feeling extremely annoyed ,even before he was just acting to wear ear phones...he was not listening songs or any other thing...he was very much hearing what she was blabbering in the last few minutes...and now he was losing his patience...


Kyun aur kaisey chup kar jayein yeh hamri jindagi ka sawaal hai...patni bana kar layein hain aap humein...patni lafz ka matlab samajhtey hain aap...biwi hain hum ab aap ki...aap ki zimedari...aur aap ye bhi nahi bata rahey ke hum se shaadi kyun ki???...


His nostrils flared up in anger...pulling her towards himself he spoke in a very taunting way biwi bana ke laya hoon tu kya chahti ho kya karoon???...

Tumharey saath suhaagraat manayon... tumharey chulbul pandey ke style me geet ga ga ke tumharey saath romance karoon...tumhein aney waley waqt ke haseen khawab dikhayon...ke gauri kumari sharma omkara tumhare liye chaand tarey tor kar le aye ga, tumhein gaon ki gori se sheher ki rani bana de ga...tumhara future secure kar dega...aisey hi onchey onchey sapne dekhey hongey na tum ne right???...he was literally crushing her into his body...

Kis baat ka dukh hai tumhein... ke maine tumse shaadi ki tu ab tum aur ghar barbaad kaisey karo gi...paisey kaisey looto gi but guess what iss sab se tumhein kuch khas farak nahi pardhna chahiye kyun ke tumhein paisey chahiye na wo tumhein miltey rahein gey...main doon ga tumhein paisey...jab tak tum iss shaadi ko manogi...kisi aur ko nahi phasayo gi...vaada hai omkara singh oberoi ka ke tumhein kabhi paisey ki kami nahi hogi...


Abey oh aik jhaanp dein deewar pe satt jayi bey...tum samajhtey kya ho khud ko...she jerked him away with full force and shouted in such a furious tone that for a second omkara himself felt scared of her but his hatred...yes his extreme hatred was there the very next minute to mask his all other feelings...


Humein iss shaadi ke badley paisey dena chahtey ho...himat bhi kaisey hui...the poor soul was literally shaking in anger...dhanda karne wali dikhti hoon...kya samjah ke rakha hai ke kali thakur ki tarah koi bhi mard aye ga  aur humein kisi cheez ki tarah apni dolat se kharid le ga...aap main aur uss kali thakur main koi farak nahi hai...her eyes filled with pain and her pain trickled down her face...


Aur rahi baat sapno ki tu mere sapne aap ki soch jaisey onchey nahi hain aap ko har cheez me dikhta hai tu dhoka ya dolat lekin mujhey dikhtey hain tu sirf apney rishte...humein laga ke aap hamara sach jaan kar hamari izzat bachana chahtey hain, humein logon ki gandi nazron se door karna chahtey hain, par nahi aap ne bhi hamari keemat laga di..sheee...gin aati hai humein aap ki soch pe...

Lekin humein na aapki aur na hi kisi aur ki bheek me di hui hamdardi chahiye na hi dolat...her face was all wet with tears she was crying...crying for the man whom she thought had married her to protect her from the evil world..but she was wrong...he married her but for his own bloody reasons...


She wanted to punch him in the face for all what he said...but all she did was that she left the place without saying him a further word...


And there he was, standing alone speechless and all quiet...her words still echoing in his mind..
''Humein laga ke aap hamari izzat bachana chahtey hain. humein logon ki gandi nazron se door karna chahtey hain par aap ne bhi hamari keemat laga di..sheee...humein na aap ki aur na hi kisi aur ki bheek me di hui hamdardi chahiye na hi dolat''


He always thought her Svetlana part 2,a gold digger but...but she proved him wrong somewhere by her harsh words and behaviour...he knew what he said was in anger he didn't mean that truly but atleast among all this one thing was clear to him that both of them are misunderstanding each other at some point...and now he was feeling guilty...guilty for insulting her, for marrying her...for not trying to hear her truth...



Will this guilt change into love anytime soon for omkara😳
For this keep watching Dil Bole Oberoi😉😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
awesomeee
their love story will be so intense...
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesomeee

their love story will be so intense...

thanks dear for reading this😛...and yeah waiting for their lovestory to start😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nicely narrated. Keep writing
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Originally posted by: NancyPaul

Very nicely narrated. Keep writing

Thanks dear😳
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superb as always
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yeah!!!! Finally meerab's first writing in DBO!!!!
Woh bhi gauri ki boli mein..wah bhai kya baat hai😆😉
Me too waiting for the confrontation after the marriage in DBO..

Nice one meerab...thank u...👏
Waiting for more to come

Ps- lovely banner...always been a fan of ur writings and editings..
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Nice dear, plz make it a ss & update 😃 and thanks for pm.
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lovely story dear
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Reswa in class will read soon