MB+ZY: Mehbeer And Zaya Love Story - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Nice promo
Now meher has told her mum what happened
She passed out
Abeer helping
Aaalia got some payback although she did attack zain too gonna make him think to retaliate
As for abeer choosing sides he should choose meher but he is really close to zain
Looking forward to update
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Well written update
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chp 5

Alia throws a fake snake at Zain and his friends but they misunderstands it as real snake and gets scared, at first Abeer and others get shocked but when Alia shows them thumbs up, they understand and smile. Finally they throws the snake away. Alia and Abeer with others laugh.
Alia: my God! Today, the one who scares got scared. Tututut

Abeer comes and says: u deserve it.
Zain: u too?
Abeer: m saying about others, let's go guys
They go back to their table.

Mukti: these two new girls are becoming too much for us specially Alia.

Zain: we shouldn't forget that we were the ones who started the fight.

Ali: someone is developing care and possessiveness about the girl who came one day ago.

Manik: what? I m not being possessive.

Alisha: then why are u pointing at us?

Zain: I don't want to say anything about her...leave it.

Zeeshan: Buddy ko Alia pasand hai (buddy likes Alia [baby ko bass pasand hai tune])

Zain giggles along with everyone else.

Abeer: wow Alia u r awesome, u scared them off.

Meher: yes, they are too much.

Alia: this was just the starting of my revenge.

Meher: what are u going to do next?

Alia: the thing they did to me.

Meher: ohh

Abeer smiles seeing Meher happy.

Nisaar whispers: why are you smiling?
Abeer whispers back: because now Meher is feeling good, she got her hearing sense back, m happy for her.

Nisaar smiles at him.

Abeer: guys let's jam together right now what say?
Meher: I m also in a mood but I don't know how to play any instrument.
Abeer: don't worry, when Abeer is here what's the fear?
Nisaar laughs on him.
Sasha: I also want to come.
Nandini: me too
Nisaar: me also
Abeer: let's go then

They all go from there to the jamming room after taking their instruments. They all jam for sometime, Meher only sings and the others play instruments as well. They all go from there except Meher and Abeer. He thinks to teach her any instrument.
Abeer: do u want to learn how to play any instrument?
Meher: yes, violin.
Abeer: OK, here u go.

He gives a violin in her hand from back and makes her hold it in a correct position.

He keeps his hand on her hand which was holding the violin stick and plays it. Her back touched his front, she smiles as he helps her in playing it.

They both were really close that Meher could feel his breath on her neck. He slowly gets close and nuzzles in her neck, she closes her eyes feeling his touch.

Sham bhi koi jaise hai nadi
Lehar lehar jaise beh rahi hai
Koi ankahi koi ansuni
Baat dheemi dheemi keh rahi hai
Kahi na kahi jaagi hui hai koi aarzoo
Kahi na kahi khoye hue se hai main aur tu
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahe
Gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye hai na


She enjoys playing it and he parts his nose away from her neck, she looks in his eyes and smile. He smiles back at her.

Suhani suhani hai yeh kahani
Jo khamoshi sunaati hai
Jise tune chaha hoga wo tera
Mujhe wo yeh batati hai
Main magan hoo par na jaanu
Kab aane wala hai wo pal
Jab haule haule dheere dheere
Khilega dil ka yeh kamal
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahe
Gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye hai na


Meher: thank u Abeer
Abeer: no problem we are friends

They keep aside the violin and she hugs him, he too hugs her and smiles.

Yeh kaisa samay hai kaisa sama hai
Ke sham hai pighal rahi
Yeh sab kuch hasee hai sab kuch jawa hai
Hai zindagi machal rahi jagmagati jilmilati
Palak palak pe khwaab hai
Sun yeh hawaye gungunaye
Jo geet lajawab hai
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahe
Gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye hai na


She was hugging him really tight smiling but suddenly she starts crying recalling her mother, her crying voice couldn't be heard by him as she was doing it silently. They slowly part away and she was the first one to get out of there. She walks through the corridors cryingly, she missed her mother a lot. She goes to the exit gate and hires an auto to go to rehab. She tells the directions and she finally reaches. She goes inside towards her mother's room. She slightly opens it and sees her sleeping. She walks in towards her and kisses her forehead trying not to disturb her sleep. She kneels down keeping her head in her lap, the most peaceful place ever. Tears roll down her cheek and her mother(Suman) wakes up.
Suman: Meher
She lifts her head from her lap and looks at her standing up.
Meher: sorry I disturbed your sleep.
Suman: no no u r still my little girl, I don't mind waking up for u.

She smiles at her and notices her crying.
Suman: why r u crying?
Meher: nothing, u sleep, take rest.

She was about to go.
Suman: why do u cry too much? And why r u wearing these hearing aids?

Meher: on your divorce night, papa tortured me, he threw things near me which bursted my ears.

Suman is shocked, Meher hugs her and cries. Abeer sees them through the glass. Suman is stressed, she too cries caressing her hair. Suddenly she faints.
Meher: Maa! I want u I need u, plz u don't go leaving me.

Abeer enters inside and holds her as she cries.
Meher: u here?
Abeer: I followed u I knew something is wrong so that's why...is she your mother?
Meher nods.
Abeer: don't worry she will be fine, we will find a good doctor for her.

She hugs him, he too hugs her.





In the college, Zain collides with Alia, she annoyingly tries to go but he stops her.
Zain: what have I done? Don't be so rude, can't we be normal?
Alia: which normal? Like this, hi Zain, hi Alia, how r u? I m fine...this normal?
She says sarcastically. Zain starts laughing.
Alia: and what's there to laugh?
Zain: u r so funny, let's become friends? I promise I won't do pranks on u.
Alia: friends my foot, your friends will surely play pranks on me if they get to know this.
Zain: oh God, we will meet like Romeo and Juliet.
He sits on one knee holding her hand.
Alia: what the hell? Stand up!

He gestures her to be quiet and let him say.
Zain: we will keep this friendship a secret.
Alia: I don't think that will happen.
Zain: till u don't agree I won't stand up.
Alia: OK ur wish, your friends will come and see what r u doing here, that will bring a rift between u all, OK we can be friends, now stand up.

He stands up and jumps in joy, she feels weird and laughs. He forwards his hand closing his middle finger and ring finger, she too does the same joining her index finger and pinky finger together. Then they both join their thumbs together unjoining their index finger and pinky finger swirling their hand and opens their middle finger and ring finger and do a handshake. (I hope u understand this he he) They smile at each other.





Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm So sorry for not Commenting on Last Parts,I am Busy in Exams.😭
It was Awesome and Interesting Story.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Nice update
Abeer getting closer to meher
Meher telling her mother truth
Mother faints from shock
Abeer promising to get her mum best treatment
Zain proposing secret friendship with alia
Looking forward to next update
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
mehbeer violen scene was very romantic. wish you had put picture there as a similar picture is available from BD.meher revealing about her deafness to suman was touching. sad.says scene was funny.the way zain pleaded for aliya's friendship and Aliya accepting it with no option left was nice.you have put meher's picture under the chapter by mistake instead of zaya pic.missed zaya pic
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Chp 7

Meher: that's not how u treat freshers.
Ali gets angry and takes her hearing aids from her, she too gets angry and slaps him. Abeer looks on.
Zain: how dare u slap him?
Meher: how dare u bully everyone? Don't u dare do it again.
Abeer looks on. Meher tries to take her hearing aids.
Zain: say sorry
Abeer comes and stands by her side.
Meher: no I won't.
Zain: u won't ?
Meher: no
Zain: ok
He takes the hearing aids from Ali and was about to break them but Abeer snatches them from him.
Abeer: enough Zain
Zain is shocked.
Abeer: and u, what's your name?

He asks the new girl.
Girl: Sneha
Abeer: u can come to us if any problem is there.

He goes taking Meher from there to a classroom, he makes her wear the hearing aids.
Meher: I m sorry, u fought with your brother because of me.
Abeer: no it was necessary to do so, u did good by slapping his friend, laaton k bhoot baaton se nh maante

Meher: I don't want a rift between u and your brother.
Abeer: I will explain him, don't worry...he was using your disability

Meher: leave it, u do a lot for me that's enough, don't fight with your bro because of me.

She goes.
Abeer: yr I did this for her and she is favouring him.

He nods his head in disbelief and goes.

Zain: yr like seriously? He shouted on me for that girl?
Mukti: when she will come, I will smash her ugly face.
Alisha: calm down Manik, everything will be alright.
Ali: what will be alright?? She slapped me, Ali the great.

Zeeshan laughs.
Zeeshan: hahahahaha u joke even when u r angry.
This makes everyone else laugh as well. Ali gets angry.
Ali: shut up guys, think of a plan.
Alisha: I have a plan, we will make her fall and her hearing aids will fall as well, we'll break them to pieces.

A voice from back: Alisha u were a great person, how could u do this?

She turns.
Alisha: bhai its personal
Zain: Arsalan just go
Arsalan: yeah yeah what you people know besides bullying? I will come back but not to bully that girl, but to bully you, Arsalan promises to change for good.

He leaves.
 Arsalan: The playboy, betrayed Mukti in love, betrayed his sister Alisha as well by betraying her friends but decides to change for good.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Meher slapped Ali for misbehaving with her. Glad that Abeer stood for her & helped her to wear the hearing aids. Zain is planning with Mukti to take revenge from Meher. How cheap! Good that Arsalan is opposing them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
sad for meher.but she was bold to slap him.sad that zain is not supporting meher.loved abeer supporting meher. but sad to see abeer zain relationship getting ruined.sad that zain is going to take revenge on meher with his spoilt friends. hope their plan fails