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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2 This is going to sound crazy, but... from the moment the hero first set eyes on heroine, he haven't been able to stop thinking about her...
It was like kissing her at the deck of ship...jaise titanic chal rahi ho moment to the hero...he was so mesmerized in her sparkle eyes...like their was some kind of magic in her eyes...
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 3
Ek ladaki ko dekha toh aisa laga...
Best part of the love story is to love each other, even when we hate each other. No running, ever. Nobody walks out, no matter what happens. We'll take care of each other even when we're old and smelly and senile. This is forever." 
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 4...I love the ending...when they both declare their love for each other in a very simple way...If you love someone, you tell them. Even if you're scared that it's not the right thing. Even if you're scared that it'll cause problems. Even if you're scared that it will burn your life to the ground, you say it, and you say it loud and you go from there." -
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

loved the description of Tara.mrityunjay is already lost in her. perfect song for the situation..ek ladki.but he is restless to know if she noticed him gazing at her...if she would slap him.πŸ˜†


Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒ

I love that song πŸ˜ƒ

Yeah, he could be slapped for that πŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

he can be relieved as she was not eating him up..she just passed by his side.he is observing her minute expressions.so cute.naughty guy loved her fragrance.she smelt like lily.naughty.is that her name or not?naughty guy didn't reveal her name. but the name is as beautiful as her.sweet.5 minutes love story..the end.he is wrong for sure.this is just the starting of his love story.waiting to know her pov



Yeah, he is safeπŸ˜‰

I agree he is naughtyπŸ˜‰

I am glad you enjoyed reading  itπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

wow. I was waiting for tara's pov. I thought she noticed mrityunjay there without his knowledge and started admiring him secretly but this was unexpected. she noticed him at different places and got carried away.she feels that his long hair and accessories suit only him.so romantic. naughty girl will reveal his name only later.he will get his biggest surprise.she dedicated a beautiful song for him 

I am glad you were waiting for Tara's POV!

No, she didn't saw him! Lucky for him πŸ˜‰

She knows when she can sneak-a-peak!πŸ˜†

A girl can have her opinion on a man πŸ˜‰ 

Yes, he is in for a big surprise!😊

Yes, she didπŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: RubabNoor11D

Awesome Story..Love it

Beautifully written

but I hv a question to writer . 

Ek Nazar mein pyar Kesy possible ho sakta hai.? 

read karny mein bhot acha laga but realty mein ek nazar mein pyar not possible,

pyar na howa tified fever ho gaya jo raato raat ho jaye ga. πŸ˜†

please don't mind last line mein ny Mazak mein likhi hai ye kisi k emotion ko hurt krny k liye ni hy. πŸ˜Š

but likha bhot acha hy too good. πŸ‘πŸ‘


Good question dear! I don't have any idea about love at first sight but I hope whoever found it true is happy!smiley1

I enjoyed your view! smiley37

But please don't compare it with typhoid! I have suffered that 4 times in 10 years and know it is very painful!😭


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

the call got disconnected.oh.mrityunjay having many doubts about the girl...his teacher's daughter? finally he reached her house.loved their sweet simple meeting.when he asked her why she didn't confess her love that day what she told was emotional. confession of love was sweet and romantic 

I tried to keep things small and sweet. It was instant love!πŸ˜†


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RubabNoor11D

Kafi time bad kuch acha read karny ko mila. 

I am glad to hear that!πŸ˜ƒ

1st part bhi amazing tha 2nd bhi Superb hai. 

Thank you!πŸ€—

mujhy samajh nai ata k jis ko bhi pyar hota hai us ko dusary ki eyes world best eyes hi lagti hain.

I totally agree with your observation!

Banda is say puchy pyar hony say phely duniya k sabhi logn ki eyes ko hi dekha hai kia jo pata hai k world best kis ki hain.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Too much research🀣

larki ko agar Ph py RJ say baat karni hi nai thi toh ph kiya hi kyn ?πŸ˜†

Good questionπŸ˜‰

bekar mein bill par gaya us ko.πŸ˜ƒ

Jio ka phone hogaπŸ˜‰

Anyways overall story was superb. too good.

Thank YOU!!!smiley31smiley31smiley31

and Shaina dear tum nay story ko or beautiful bana diya. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

No argument on that smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31

I will reply on 3rd part after a while. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

take your time

till then bye take care.😊

You take care as well!!!smiley31smiley31smiley31


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RubabNoor11D

Wah . kia baat hai kia likha hai ji. Superb. πŸ‘πŸ‘

Thank youπŸ€—

3rd part bhi bhot acha tha  short and sweet. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Thank you ji☺️

RJ nay toh jesy Girl ka pura interview hi liya.

yesπŸ˜†

kitna baat karti hain girls. πŸ˜†

Too  muchπŸ˜†

Thank you Shaina tum ny mujhy ye story resd karny ko bola .

Thank You Shaina for spreading the wordπŸ€—

mujhy varjit ni rakha tum ny is say..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

hehehe

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