~Serendipity~ TS: Shanaya-Ibaad.. Epilogue Pg 4 (17/02) COMPLETED

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SERENDIPITY : PART 1

It was yet another morning in the city that never sleeps. The sun filtered through the envelope of clouds, painted them in beautiful peach and pinkish shades. Finally an end to the two days long rain. No matter how beautiful rain might be, the consequences aren't exactly the same. The puddles of muddy water can be spotted at every two steps with school children jumping in them as they head to their schools. One can just spot the Dabbawallahs pulling their trolleys as they cross the middle of the road, bringing the traffic to a standstill. The car honks were unceasing and irritating. The vendors shouting to sell their commodities only added to the already chaos. Amidst all this, there were local buses with passengers spilling out of them. This is exactly how is the everyday morning of Mumbaikars and rains only makes it worse.
Just like any other local bus, there was one whose inhabitants were as noisy as the street outside. The unending chattering and giggles were prominent for girls were major part of the crowd and to top it was the old black radio of driver which played all the old romantic songs. There were girls gushing over the pictures of bollywood actors while some had their compact make up boxes opened in front of them, touching up their lipstick and blush. A group of boys in the front seats were discussing the last soccer game between Brazil and Argentina as if it were some topic of national importance. While some boys were busy watching the couple in back seat who has taken the concept of khullum khulla pyaar way too seriously! They were kissing supposedly but it looked like more than each other, they were interested in kissing each other's tonsils. Another couple which was in the bus were fighting at the top of their voices.
Aloof from all the madness and noises, there was someone who was sitting in the middle row of seat, looking out of the window. In plain pink and white kurta salwar with white dupatta draped all around her face apart from her eyes. This was Shanaya Imam!
The bus suddenly came to a halt a little ahead of the bus stop and a whole bunch of passengers stepped in along with a young man, who brought all the activities to a pause. Handsome face, well defined jawline and walnut eyes as deep as thousand oceans combined together. His fair complexion and those tousled black hairs were a add on in his beauty. No doubt Ibaad Ashraf made girls go weak on their knees with just a look!
The girls collectively sighed but he walked past them unaffected, his walnut orbs looking for a seat. He spotted one besides the veiled girl who was probably the only girl in the bus, not staring him.
Standing near the seat, he cleared his throat, "May I?" He asked her in his deep rich baritone and the girls sighed again. He could hear hush whispers making round of the bus.
Shanaya turned to look at him and then she looked around herself only to find girls looking at her with envy.
"Pardon?" She spoke up in her soft honey like voice.
"Can I sit with you?" They were again blessed with his husky baritone.
She nodded as she picked up her bag from the seat besides her and shifted a little towards the window. This was surprising for he was used to girls throwing herselves on him, sitting deliberately closer and how much he hated that!
He settled down and bus started with a jerk, making him catch hold of the metal handle tightly. He stole a glance of her to find her looking out of the window.
She had a beautiful wheatish skin tone and her jasmine perfume was tantalizing. He couldn't see her face for it was covered in the niqab but he did saw her mesmerising green eyes. He could see her thick braided pony peeping from the edge of her dupatta and sure she had thick and gorgeous chocolate brown hair. Her nail were small, finely trimmed and painted in nude color. He knew he shouldn't stare her but he couldn't help. It was as if there was some magnetic pull around her which had captured him. 

She wasn't unaware of a pair of eyes watching her very intently and dunno why it gave way to thousands of butterflies in her stomach. Was it the way he was looking at her or something else, don't know! But it sure made warm blood rushed to her cheeks.

She couldn't understand, why did he chose to sit besides her at the first place when there were so many pretty girls in the bus? And now, why was he staring her like that? Was there something weird abt her that he was staring at? 
She turned to look at him at last, her green eyes narrowed and questioning with her brows pulled together and he looked away almost immediately somewhat flushed. She had caught him looking at her and God knows, what must be thinking about him?

Hell! Why is he bothered abt that?

Though for the rest of the journey he was mostly looking ahead but he couldn't help and steal a few glances of her. A little later, the bus stopped at another station and she again looked at him.
"My stop!" She spoke up in a low voice.
"Oh! I'm.. sorry. Su.. Sure!" He fumbled cutely as he scratched his head getting up and giving her way to get down.
She got out of the bus and was about to leave, when he came running from behind.
"Excuse me?" He called out for her and Shanaya turned to look at him.
"Yes?" She asked him, clueless.
"Is it yours?" He asked her, forwarding her a brown leather pouch. She immediately checked her bag and surely her purse was missing. She took it from him but even before she could thank him, the bus started and drove off.
Ibaad came back to sit on his seat. His mind still in reeling in the time he had spent with that mysterious veiled girl. Though he hardly knew her yet he could feel a strange loneliness engulfing him after she left which was insane! There wasn't anything spectacular about her yet something made him want to look at her again and again. Something which wasn't there in the girls sitting around him but her. Something that made her stand out in the crowd. He better figure out this something tomorrow!

He could still smell some parts of her sweet jasmine perfume when the bus conductor came to sit on the vacant seat besides him.
"Kahan khoye hue hai bhaiya?" The man in khaki uniform asked him with a touch of bihari in his accent.
Ibaad ignored him but he went ahead to probe him further, "U ladki ke baare mein sochat rahe kya?" 
Ibaad turned to look at him shocked, How did he know?!
The man chuckled at his cute surprised expressions making Ibaad realize that he was making it obvious.
"Na.. nahi! Aisi koi.. baat. Aisi koi nahi hai!" He fumbled adorably.
"Jhooth kaahe bolat ho! Waise hum aapka bataye dein, u ladki hai na? Woh Juhu bus stop se chadhti hai!" He told him, a knowing smile playing on his lips.
"Yeh sab tum mujhe kyu bata rahe ho?" Ibaad asked him, pretending irritated and indifferent but the case was completely opposite.
"Gussa kaahe karat ho? Hum toh bas bata rahe the tum ka." He replied laughing a little as he got up for next stop was abt to come! 

The next day,
Ibaad got into the bus, removing his black Ray Bans as he looked around for her and she was there. This time in the second row. He walked upto her in a few majestic strides and settled down besides her. Her jasmine scent engulfed his senses again. Damn! It was so hell attractive!
She was wearing a beautiful, crease-free orange kurta salwar today and her face was still under wraps of a floral dupatta. She was also wearing a jingling silver bracelet in her right hand wrist which was again very simple yet elegant just like her.

And he was staring her again! Maybe he was expecting a thank you for yesterday? He surely deserves one!
But how was the question? Should she leave a written note for him? No! That'll be too filmy. Then, how?
This nervousness was something new for her. It's just a matter of thank you and she's getting nervous as if she's confessing her love for him! Love? Really? Where did that came from?
Taking a deep breath she turned to look at him, "Thank you!" She spoke up in very low voice.
He looked at surprised, "Aap mujhse baat kar rahi hai?" He asked her, his perfectly arched eyebrows up.
Shanaya nodded, "Jee. Thank you for yesterday!" She smiled a little.
"Mention not!" He replied, reciprocating her smile.

My Goodness! He's got a charismatic smile.

"Waise? Main itna bura bhi nahi hu jitna tum mujhe samajhti ho!" He spoke up, making her look at him surprised.
"Aur aapko aisa kyu laga ki main aapko bura samajhti hu?" She asked him, amusement much evident in her voice.
"Well.. kal main tumhe dekh raha tha toh tumhe zaroor laga hoga ki main koi awaara, badmaash kism ka ladka hu!" Ibaad replied with a chuckle.
Shanaya couldn't help but laugh too at his cuteness, "Jee nahi. Koi awaara yaa badmaash kism ka ladka mera purse nahi lautata." She replied sweetly making his smile go wider.
"Woh bhi hai par main kya karta? You've got beautiful eyes!" He complimented huskily, his walnut orbs twinkling with admiration.
She could feel warmth rushing up her cheeks. This was surprising again.
"Shukriya!" She spoke up in a low voice which he found very cute.
"Ibaad Ashraf!" He introduced himself, extending his hand towards her which she took.
"Shanaya Imam!" She replied softly.
"Beautiful name." He complimented her yet again to which she just nodded smiling.

As the days slowly passed away, their conversations increased and they got to know more about each other. She told him about her tastes in books and music which surprised him coz they had strikingly similar preferences. She too loved watching Hollywood movies like him and was allergic to the cheesy romance of Bollywood which was again so him. Both of them were pursuing MBA and were in their last year.
She was fascinated when he told her about his plans to become photographer after completing MBA which was rare. Coz whenever he told anyone abt his future plans, the person would look at him as if he has gone crazy. She even went on to tell him that she would love to see his captures if he'll show her and sure enough, he brought a whole album to show her the very next day. The admiration with which she looked through them tugged the strings of his heart. Never before he had seen that kind of appreciation in someone's eyes for his photography. 

A few weeks later,
It was raining on and off from midnight and even at 9 in morning, there was no sign of sun just dark grey clouds that dominated the sky. The roads were as usual blocked and to top it was the poor drainage system of Mumbai. The windows were dripping water and Shanaya chose to sit a good bit away from it. The bus as usual stopped at Ibaad's stop and Shanaya looked at the door, expecting to see his handsome self getting into the bus but much to her disappointment he didn't come. In past few weeks, they have grown used to each other's company. The way he indirectly flirts with her all the time, his silly jokes, adorable clumsiness always brings an endearing smile on her face.
Are they just friends? Not really! She knows it, otherwise why does his smiling face flashes before her eyes whenever she sits down for evening prayer. She's sure he too feels the same for her, she can see it in his eyes. But guess some things are better delayed than rushed and it has it own sweet fun!

She waited for him to show up but when he didn't, she looked away disheartened as the bus started to move. May be she won't be meeting him today and dunno why? This sudden realization made her sad. It was just when a hand caught hold of the door handle and Ibaad stepped in. Almost immediately a beautiful smile adorned her face but it soon faded away as her shameless eyes took in his drenched self. His Angry Bird yellow T-shirt sticked to his perfectly chiseled chest revealing a good bit of what lay beneath. Water dripped from his black hairs, turning them a shade darker as he moved his fingers through them. Small water droplets that adorned his fine square jawline and those bulgy biceps made her gulp. He waved at her smiling and she managed to wave back somehow!
As usual he came to sit down besides her but owing to the rain and that dripping window, the space between them had decreased dangerously. Their arms brushed past against each others whenever the bus hopped over some pothole and it was certainly affecting both of them. His musk and amber cologne only made it worse for her! One could just sense the thick tension between them. They weren't unaware, just didn't knew how to react to it for it was something new for both of them.

"Aaj toh miss ho gayi thi bus!" Ibaad exclaimed laughing, to lighten up the atmosphere.
"Ghar se nikalne mein late ho gaye?" Shanaya asked him softly.
"Nahi. Tumhare liye kuch khareed ne mein late ho gaya!" He replied smiling as he opened the zip of his bag and produced a set of beautiful green glass bangles.
"Yeh mere liye hai?" She squealed with child-like excitement. He knows exactly how much she loves bangles.
"Jee bilkul!" He replied looking at her adoringly. She still had that little girl like innocence in her which he loved. She's someone whom you can please with your small affectionate gestures more than anything else.
He made her wear the bangles in one hand as she moved her fingers through them making a beautiful jingling sound.
"Thank you!" She spoke up, her eyes sparkling with happiness.
"My pleasure!" He smiled, "Waise, tum se milne ke baad meri life do bahout bade changes aayein hai!" Ibaad spoke up as Shanaya turned to look at him intrigued.
"Really? Kya?" She asked him.
"First, meri attendance badh gayi hai!" He told her, counting on his finger.
"Second, jitni shiddat se I hate Sundays now I swear I haven't hated anything else like that!" He added with a soft chuckle.
"Kyu?" Shanaya asked him clueless.
Really? How innocent was she?
"Oh well.. Sundays ko college nahi hota na? Isliye tumse mulakat bhi nahi hoti." He replied huskily, his deep walnut orbs intent on her. Warmth rushed to her cheeks, tinting them in gorgeous crimson as her green eyes turned shy and she looked down.
She smiled beautifully and he knew she was smiling, for he could see that smile reaching up her eyes.
"Sach mein?" She asked him gazing straight in his walnut orbs.
"I wish.. I wish I had words to describe what I feel when I'm with you!" He replied sincerely as he held her hand ever gently.
Shanaya looked at their connected hands as she shifted closer to him. Linking her arm with his, she rested her head on his shoulder, ushering an unknown warmth and happiness through him.
"Me too!" She whispered softly.
"I love you Shan!" He confessed, keeping his head over hers.
"I love you more!" She confessed too softly.
Shanaya could see her stop approaching and for the first time, she didn't wanted to get down. She was loving the warmth that his arms were providing her. Ibaad too noticed that final turn which everyday marks the end of their journey and in an instance, he held her hand tightly. Shanaya smiled at his cuteness as she turned to look at him, "Time to go!" She whispered.
"Not today!" He whispered back, looking at her. His walnut orbs pleading her stay. How she wanted to stay back but she had an important assignment submission today.
"Tomorrow. I promise." She replied as she gave his hand a loving squeeze and he smiled a little.
"Okay." He nodded, getting up from his place as he held the grab handle given to support standing passengers. She too got up as she turned to look at him with a smile. He reciprocated her smile and she was abt to make her way towards the door when the bus stopped with sudden jerk making her fall on him and he held her by her waist. Her eyes were squeezed shut out of fear. How cute did she looked?
"Shanaya? You okay?" He asked her concerned.
It was his question that made her open her almond shaped eyes. She nodded cutely, heaving a sigh of relief. But the next moment she realized that she was now caged in his iron strong arms as he held her with her waist. They were so close that she could just see that faded mark of stitches above his eyebrow which he got when he was 5 as he had told her once. His warm breathing fanned her face and that feel of his hand around her waist was maddening. His skin was still damp for she could just spot some tiny droplets on his milk white skin which glowed in the dim yellow light of the bus.
He noticed that sleek dash of kohl in her eyes which enhanced the beauty of her eyes furthermore. Her dupatta that covered her face was a semi transparent one and Ibaad could just make out her luscious lips behind it. His mind couldn't help but wonder how would they taste which amused him. This girl sure has corrupted his mind.
The way he was eyeing her lips made her blush like insane. She knew what he had in his mind but it was neither accomplishable nor would be enjoyable with this veil between them. But the man seemed to have different opinion about it coz he leaned in towards her. They were dangerously aware of the periodic rise and fall of their chests and before he could bridge the gap between them, Shanaya turned around to leave smiling shyly.
Ibaad too chuckled at her cuteness as she rushed out of the bus, totally flushed but before stepping out, she turned to look at him with beautiful smile and waved him bye. Ibaad waved back but not before giving her a sweet flying kiss.

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After this it was as if their lives took a complete U-turn in the most beautiful way possible. Bunking the last lecture almost every second day to steal some extra time together at Juhu became a routine. Whole day long WhatsApp chats were sundays lifeline. The days turned into weeks and weeks into months in a blink and their love only grew stronger and deeper with every passing day. It was as if they found a missing piece of themselves in each other and no doubt people say, Sometimes greatest relationships are the ones you never expected to be in. They entered into each other's life out of nowhere and now meant world to each other. Maybe that is what serendipity is all abt, unexpected people gives you all the unexpected happiness!

One day,
Shan : Can we meet? 
Aabi: Sure! :) Kahan?
Shan: Juhu at our spot?
Aabi: Perfect! Time?
Shan: Abhi.
Aabi: Ohkay.. all cool?
Shan: Not Really... Let's meet I'll tell you.
Aabi: I'll be there in 5 mins! ❀️

Ibaad waited for a reply but it didn't came. Usually whenever he sent her a heart or a kiss emotion, she would either send him back a blushing face or the same emoticon but today she didn't. This clearly meant that she was very upset about something. Did he do something to upset her? Not that he remembers!
He better rush!
Ibaad reached their fav spot on the Juhu beach after somewhat 10 mins and she was there already waiting for him.
"Shan?" He called out for her. This what he lovingly calls her.
Shanaya turned a little to look at him and his heart sank a bit more. He could see her eyes were all puffed up and red. Had she been crying?
He rushed to her tensed and sure he could see tears in her eyes.
"Kya hua Shanaya? Tum to kyu rahi ho?" He asked her panicked all of a sudden.
In an instance, she hugged him tightly. Ibaad wrapped his arms around her securely as she silently sobbed in his embrace.
"Tum mujhe pareshaan kar rahi ho! Please batao kya hua hai!" Ibaad tried again only to feel her grip going strong around himself.
Ibaad tried to figure out the possible reasons just when he remembered, "Tumhara aaj Campus Interview tha na?" He asked her to which she nodded a little.
Making her face him, he lovingly cupped her face in his palms and wiped away those tears from her eyes.
"Kaisa hua? Job nahi mili kya?" He enquired further and she started crying again.
"Koi baat nahi meri jaan! Doosri job mil jayegi.. usme itna rone wali kya baat ho gayi?!" He consoled her by hugging her again.
"Woh.. woh baat nahi hai." She spoke up in between sobbing.
"Toh phir?!" Ibaad asked her clueless, not understanding what could be the possible reason for her tears if this wasn't.
"Job mil gayi lekin.." she started again as he looked on expectantly.
"Lekin?" He probed her to go further. Only he knew how tensed he was right now! Never before in past 6 months he has seen her so vulnerable and weak.
"Lekin meri placement Bangalore mein hui hai." She told him as fresh tears made their way down her eyes.
"Toh usme kya.." Ibaad started but then he realized what she had just said and he stopped that very moment.
Bangalore? Really?
"Oh!" He spoke up after a long silence as he tried to come in terms with this development in their lives.
Spending Sundays away from each other was hell of a task and now, they will be in two different cities? Hell, two different states!! 
How is he going to survive that? He can't even imagine not seeing her for that long. The mere thought kills him.
They sat there on the sand in complete silence, for dunno how long! Ibaad looked at her, she had stopped crying and now was playing with the edge of her dupatta. Holding her hand ever softly, he kissed them lovingly.

"This had to happen someday Shan! We better accept it." He spoke up softly. She looked up at him, her green eyes still glassy.
"I know! But.." she stopped for a moment before continuing, "But.. it's difficult Aabi. It really is!" She replied as a lone tear rolled down her cheek.
Gently wiping it away with his thumb, he forced a small smile, "I love you. Nothing is going to change this! Aur waise bhi maine suna hai ki dooriyon se mohabbat badhti hai." He replied in muffled voice.
"Phir tum weekends par toh aaogi he! Aaogi naa?!" He added looking at his, his walnut orbs too glistening with moisture.
Shanaya nodded before hugging him tightly again, "I love you Aabi!" 
"I love you more! I love you more!" He whispered, hugging her close.

The following day their Final Semester Examination Date Sheet came out and the upcoming entire month was tightly packed. Anyways their exams went pretty well and romance? They did managed to steal some time for each other in the name of group studies. But All this while, her Bangalore trip was not discussed even once!
No matter how much they wanted this time to pass away as slowly as possible, the time flew away with wings and they were exactly a week away from her departure. She was supposed to leave the following Friday evening.

Shanaya walked into a clothing shop bored. Shopping never had her any interest but her mother insisted that she should buy herself a couple of new office wear, so they were here. They were looking through some pieces when her mobile beeped announcing the arrival of a WhatsApp message. She immediately checked it and it was Aabi.

Aabi: Watcha doing?
Shan: SHOPPING! (Sigh!)
Aabi: Hahaha.. you're one exclusive piece I swear!
Shan: It's torturous Aabi.. I hate shopping!
Aabi: Aww.. my baby!
Aabi: Free this Sunday Morning?
Shan: Nope! Gotta visit Dargah as usual.
Aabi: Really? When did THIS started?! 
Shan: Humesha se! :)
Aabi: AND YOU'RE TELLING ME THIS NOW?! 
Shan: Kya ho gaya? (Laughing!)
Aabi: It's not funny, okay?
Shan: My bad. I'm sorry! 
Aabi: It's kay!
Shan: Something important on Sunday?
Aabi: Naah! Just wanted to meet.. some other day then!
Shan: Sure! 
Aabi: Love ya! Bye.
Shan: Love you too! Bye.

The next Sunday morning,
Ibaad entered the holy premises of Dargah as he covered his head with his handkerchief and he could already feel a strange peace engulfing him as walked inside, peace and comfort that his mother used to talk about. He washed his feet, hands and face before entering the main prayer hall as per the ritual. As he was walking to the hall, his eyes were just looking for her. But she was nowhere to be seen! Anyways finding her in the crowd of hundreds of veiled women is not going to be easy too.
In the prayer hall, there were separate chambers for men and women separated by a semi transparent purdah. 
He sat down on the holy mat to offer his prayer and his lips curled up in beautiful smile. What has this girl turned him into? He was never a religious person and didn't believed in the concept of prayers but today, Just for her sake, he's doing that even! 
Closing his eyes, he simply prayed for the well being of his family and to give him enough strength to face all the hardships that life has to offer. He bowed down in front of the supreme power, touching his forehead with the ground.

Just parallel to him in women's chamber, Shanaya got up after bowing down, her eyes still closed. She walked out of the prayer hall after offering her prayers, to the beautiful backyard to light the diyas. Pigeons were flying free in the sky and chirping happily as if they were praying with people. She could even spot a couple of rabbits hopping down the stairs of Dargah. Coming here every Sunday was a part of her weekly routine. It always fills her being with positivity and strength to accomplish her goals. The constant chants of verses from Holy Quran are pleasing to ears. She went ahead to light the diyas arranged in the steps of stairs. As she was lighting them, "Aapi? Aap har baar yeh diye kyu jalati hai? Maine toh sunna hai log apni mohabbat ki hifazat ke liye inhe jalate hai!" Pari, her younger sister asked innocently.
Shanaya closed her eyes after lighting up all of the lamps and like always his face flashed before her eyes. She could just feel a smile creeping up her lips.
"Batayein na Aapi? Aap kiske liye itne pyaar se har baar dua karti hai?" Pari asked her again. 
Shanaya turned to look at her with a smile as she pulled her cheeks lovingly, "Tumhare liye!" She replied laughing at her cuteness as Pari rubbed her cheeks.
"Achha jee?" Pari looked at her suspiciously with narrowed eyes.
"Bilkul. Kyu? Main tumse mohabbat nahi karti kya?" Shanaya asked her as both of them sat down on the stairs itself.
"Baatein na banaye! Main jaanti hu koi toh hai aapki zindagi mein jiski salamati ke liye aap har baar dua karti hai!" Pari spoke up with a knowing smile and Shanaya could feel warmth rushing to her cheeks.
"Abb aap yahan baithkar sharmaye, main thodi der bachho ke saath khelne jaa rahi hu!" Pari announced, nudging her sister teasingly. With that, she went downstairs to the open field to play with children there. Shanaya couldn't help but wonder, is it that obvious?!
Just when her eyes caught the red thread in her hand. Mannat ka dhaaga. She had almost forgotten about this!
Getting up from her place she went ahead to tie the thread. Just when she saw one of the diyas lighted by her was about to blow away and she immediately went to cover it with her palms. Shanaya heaved a sigh of relief as the flame stabled a little. Just when her nose caught a very familiar smell. His cologne, that musk and amber one! Is he here?

He stepped out of the prayer hall which opened into a spacious open verandah. He looked around himself confused, almost every lady there was in purdah. How the hell he's supposed to find her? He knew he gotta be careful while looking for her coz mistake may cost him high! He cutely scratched his head thinking of a way out.
Look for her eyes!
Yes! That'll work, most probably!
He walked into the open space looking for her just when he saw so many diyas lighted up on the stairs and their were women lighting them up. This was something new for him! He walked up to those stairs and could see one of the diyas was abt to blow away. Dunno why but he felt like he need to save that one! On an instinct, he rushed to it but even before he could cover it, a girl clad in gorgeous white anarkali came up, covering it with her palms. He swear on his life that he knew this jasmine scent. It was hers! Has he found her?

She turned around and he was there, alright! In white kurta and pyjama and unkempt hair, he was one heart stopping sight! To top it, that smile he gave her.
"Finally!" He spoke up huskily, his walnut orbs intent on her.
"What are you doing here?" She asked him, surprised.
"What do people do in Dargah?" He asked her with a smirk.
"Tum kab se itne religious ho gaye?" She asked him with a soft chuckle.
"Bas aaj se!" He replied smiling again, "Khair! Come with me!" He added holding her hand, making Shanaya look around consciously.
"Koi nahi dekh raha chalo!" He rolled his eyes looking at her.
"I need to tie this first!" She told him, holding up the sacred red thread.
He looked at it for a moment, "Okay! Let's go then!"
Holding hands they walked up to that corner where the people tied the threads after making a wish. Resting his frame on the that wall, he stood there watching her adoringly as she closed her eyes, made a wish and then after touching it on both her eyes, she went ahead to tie it when Ibaad caught hold of it too. Shanaya smiled looking at him which he reciprocated back and then tied that sacred thread together.
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Next part: A fight?!

A/N: First Post was already very long so adding a small note in the end!
First of all, Shanaya Di.. Thank You so much for your untiring help! This one wouldn't have been possible without you! ❀️
And Yes! She doesn't only shares your name, it's you babe!  Love you.. *Muahh!*

I really hope you guys will like it.
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Edited by pcnsb - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res. Res. Res. *Faints!*
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Unres. πŸ˜³
Where Do I Even Begin?! I mean I don't even have the words to describe this beauty! Wish there were enough emojis on this IF to describe what I feel right now. *DREAMY!* β€οΈ

When you first told me about this idea, I was instantly in love with it but the fact that the lead shared my name and the lead Ibaad is apna Fawuu had me happy in my own little world but then you made her, me! A Big Bone Crushing Hug for that! πŸ€—πŸ€—
Though I've already given you pal pal ke comments on WhatsApp like Aaj Tak! πŸ€£
But then I'm here again, cuz you deserve this babe. :*

The scene opens up with such a beautiful description of Aamchi Mumbai and like I mentioned that other day on call, that I love those small instances you put up in your description. Beautiful. β­οΈ
Actually, I'm like Shanaya! I hardly pay attention to anyone getting up or getting down, maybe I'm too engrossed in looking outside or listening to my music with earphones plugged in. πŸ˜›
Aabi..!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Isn't he such a cutie pie with all the female attention thrown at him and go gushing after his baritone. πŸ˜³
Hayee! I can imagine him asking for a seat in that baritone, gosh! β€οΈ
And Shanaya is such a cutie looking aroumd when he addressed her. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Ahaa! Thats attraction at first sight for Aabi and even Shan too but she's too ignorant to notice that, but I love the gentleman Aabi is as he returned her wallet. β­οΈ
Even Shan is a cutie for fumbling trying to thank him, these two are a pair of adorables! β€οΈ
And finally the ice melts between them and I'm glad Aabi did that, for it was cute as to how they got to talking. πŸ˜³

And where do I even begin at the beautiful beautiful rainy day scene?! Wish, I wish IF had more emojis. 
That GADAR Sexy Description Of a Drenched Ibaad! *FIRE!*
I mean I could visualize that cute Angry Bird T-shirt sticking to his chest! *AAA!* That sexy jawline and those luscious hairs! β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
Shan is exactly feeling what I would feel and that tension which is so visible and so thick between them yet they're so innocent as to not to know how to react. Babies.😳
The tension was so sensual. β˜ΊοΈ
And Oh. My. Life! That's so so so adorable of Ibaad to bring green bangles of her and that innocent happiness of Shan! Beautiful Just Plain Beautiful! 

And his sweet, heartfelt confession. Im a sucker for such sweet confessions without doing it OTT. The way he made her subtly realize about her place in his life, the feelings he has for her and the way he held her hand. 
The way Shan shifted closer and their confession, Bliss. β€οΈ
And how he didn't want her to go. Awieee! Cutie. β€οΈ
And then that fall, that intense sexual tension, that almost kiss! *BLUSH! BLUSH! BLUSH!* β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ

The second part was as much beautiful! β­οΈ
How Shan cried like a baby in his arms.. I too felt bad for them. πŸ˜­ Long Distance Relationships are actually heartsinking for a couple and yahaan toh they're s much in love. πŸ˜­
Loved how Ibaad consoled her. β€οΈ
Shan is me, I hate shopping too and that really makes me classic. πŸ€’πŸ˜‰
The Dargah Bit was beautifully serene, and Ibaad the unreligious guy offers prayers and is here for her. That's the power of love! 
Pari is a cutie and the Dia Part was beautiful too! πŸ˜³
But my favorite was when they tied that Mannat Ka Dhaaga and Ibaad observing her, lovingly! GOALS. β€οΈ

Update Real. Real. Real Soon! 
LOVE YOU! πŸ€—❀️
Edited by MohabbatGirl.x - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful OS
Soft love Story
Let's see what happens next
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Thanks for pm
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Beautiful
d first meeting
d attraction
d lil convo
d tension
d confession
everything was pure
luvd d second half
she cried llyk a baby at d thought of separation
he consoled her
n d last scene was just aww
continue soonish
thnxxx 4 pm
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Nandini, good to see you again  πŸ€— Always loved to read your stories !!
Will try to read this one for sure..
Comments reserved till I read 😳
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Beautiful TS! πŸ‘πŸΌ

I loved how you kept the scenarios & situation so simple yet so beautifully written down. πŸ˜³
Each description, whether about the atmosphere, the gorgeous Shanaya or the alluring Ibaad, you described them so finely. <3
My favorite part has to be the one where it was raining & Ibaad caught the bus late.  Plus the Dargah scenario *simply loved it* β€οΈ

Also, the best thing was you kept such a simple yet sweetest confession of love between the couple, it came like an unexpected moment which I really enjoyed. <3

The beginning itself is so intriguing, I'm curious to know what happens next. :D Please continue quickly. πŸ˜³
Thanks for the PM, Shano! πŸ€—
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Wow Nandini thanks you remembered me and pm😊. Do Not know what to say ! I am speechless and believe you for me that is  very rare . Bec the words do not describe the beautiful of the story . '⭐️ please update the earliest possible , it's always a pleasure to read your stories . 
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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Res. Res. Res. *Faints!*

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Unres. πŸ˜³
Where Do I Even Begin?! I mean I don't even have the words to describe this beauty! Wish there were enough emojis on this IF to describe what I feel right now. *DREAMY!* β€οΈ

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Bows! Ahh.. ditto my feels when I read AM updates.. :*

When you first told me about this idea, I was instantly in love with it but the fact that the lead shared my name and the lead Ibaad is apna Fawuu had me happy in my own little world but then you made her, me! A Big Bone Crushing Hug for that! πŸ€—πŸ€—
Though I've already given you pal pal ke comments on WhatsApp like Aaj Tak! πŸ€£
But then I'm here again, cuz you deserve this babe. :*

Like mentioned in Note.. this wouldn't have been possible without your constant help.. That was a surprise for you from your Oswald. :*
Babe, you've no idea how much I love those pal pal ke updates on WhatsApp and our discussions..

The scene opens up with such a beautiful description of Aamchi Mumbai and like I mentioned that other day on call, that I love those small instances you put up in your description. Beautiful. β­οΈ
Actually, I'm like Shanaya! I hardly pay attention to anyone getting up or getting down, maybe I'm too engrossed in looking outside or listening to my music with earphones plugged in. πŸ˜›
Aabi..!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Isn't he such a cutie pie with all the female attention thrown at him and go gushing after his baritone. πŸ˜³
Hayee! I can imagine him asking for a seat in that baritone, gosh! β€οΈ
And Shanaya is such a cutie looking aroumd when he addressed her. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Our calls are like live discussions of whatever we can't discuss on WhatsApp.. πŸ˜†
See.. I kept her just like you.. And Aabi is love no matter what!

Ahaa! Thats attraction at first sight for Aabi and even Shan too but she's too ignorant to notice that, but I love the gentleman Aabi is as he returned her wallet. β­οΈ
Even Shan is a cutie for fumbling trying to thank him, these two are a pair of adorables! β€οΈ
And finally the ice melts between them and I'm glad Aabi did that, for it was cute as to how they got to talking. πŸ˜³
Yes! They are very adorable.. someone had to break the ice, so why not Aabi?!  

And where do I even begin at the beautiful beautiful rainy day scene?! Wish, I wish IF had more emojis. 
That GADAR Sexy Description Of a Drenched Ibaad! *FIRE!*
I mean I could visualize that cute Angry Bird T-shirt sticking to his chest! *AAA!* That sexy jawline and those luscious hairs! β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
I understand coz even I need fire emoticons for ZA sequences you write..
This was another surprise element for you! Ever since I was thinking about this TS.. I had a scene like this in my mind. I can just imagine Fawad like that yaar!
I'm glad you could visualize too.. πŸ˜‰
We have #GutterMinds after all..

Shan is exactly feeling what I would feel and that tension which is so visible and so thick between them yet they're so innocent as to not to know how to react. Babies.😳
The tension was so sensual. β˜ΊοΈ
And Oh. My. Life! That's so so so adorable of Ibaad to bring green bangles of her and that innocent happiness of Shan! Beautiful Just Plain Beautiful! 
The feels both of them evoke in each other is something out of the world. Anyone  in their place would react in the same way.. I'm glad you liked the bangles part coz I was unsure abt that one! :) 

And his sweet, heartfelt confession. Im a sucker for such sweet confessions without doing it OTT. The way he made her subtly realize about her place in his life, the feelings he has for her and the way he held her hand. 
The way Shan shifted closer and their confession, Bliss. β€οΈ
And how he didn't want her to go. Awieee! Cutie. β€οΈ
And then that fall, that intense sexual tension, that almost kiss! *BLUSH! BLUSH! BLUSH!* β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
Even I love simple yet deep proposals.. coz confession is something personal between two people who are in love and you don't have to flaunt it. It'll reflect itself if it's real. ❀️ 

The second part was as much beautiful! β­οΈ
How Shan cried like a baby in his arms.. I too felt bad for them. πŸ˜­ Long Distance Relationships are actually heartsinking for a couple and yahaan toh they're s much in love. πŸ˜­
Loved how Ibaad consoled her. β€οΈ
Shan is me, I hate shopping too and that really makes me classic. πŸ€’πŸ˜‰
I'm happy you loved this part. Long Distance relationships are difficult for sure but like said dooriyan mohabbat ko aur gehra karti hai.. 

The Dargah Bit was beautifully serene, and Ibaad the unreligious guy offers prayers and is here for her. That's the power of love! 
Pari is a cutie and the Dia Part was beautiful too! πŸ˜³
But my favorite was when they tied that Mannat Ka Dhaaga and Ibaad observing her, lovingly! GOALS. β€οΈ
We had planned it in a different way but I guess this one turned out to be more beautiful.. coz I can again imagine Aabi tying that Mannat ka Dhaaga with Shan.. 

Update Real. Real. Real Soon! 
LOVE YOU! πŸ€—❀️


Thank you so much once again for this beautiful comment. You've no idea how much your appreciation means to me! *Muahhh*

Love too babe!