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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Awesome part 


So madhu's introduction finally but still is she n honey same or is it like a twin sister of madhu n patil si the servant of mallik n he ia taking care of madhu..
Everything is mysteries 

Thank you.will update soon.please keep reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: RijaMalik

Awesome update.. 

So finalluly madhu enteted the story.. 
RK named her as DD.. 
patil.is madh's brother..
Ghost wrote a note to RK.. 
Thnks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Tinku16

😛wow atlast face to face with the cute DD...nice how rk n madhu get together...and I think honey is also DD...the story is going in a nice phase...cute n smooth...so honey told them to goback...waiting for the next...👏 Thank you for the pm...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Awesome update loved it.

Patel and Madhu do this ghost act to make people run from there i suppose, Marble Meadow belongs to Madhu and family.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

awesome update di. .
rishbala meet. .
madhu lied rk ..
he gives her DD names. .
madhu know everything about rk. .
I think madhu cook food when rk and bittuji come there. .
rk start calling honey for ghost. ..
so madhu is Patel sis. .
early waiting for next part. .di
thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
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   Marble Meadow

   Part4



"but why honey...you got bored with me..you need a new friend or else I am disturbance yo you."rk
He heard the anklet
"she said yes"bittuji
A book flew and hit bittuji on his back."ouch.."bittuji cried
Rk laughed"you got your gift..."rk
"honey we will talk tomorrow I feel sleepy...goodnight"rk

Morning

"where is chief?"bittuji
"he left to town in the morning.you slept a little more"Patel
"Patel DoD u talk with honey?"bittuji
"no I just tried...but no answer"Patel
"ok"bittuji went back to his room
"I will try to talk with her...hey hello...honey.. Can u hear me...hello...why did you hit me yesterday han...tell me"bittuji tried for so many times but no response.
" I think honey is in love with rk"bittuji

Town

"goodmorning madhu"rk
"rk...,y r u here"madhu
"just went to meet you"rk
"me but y?"madhu
"I want to say..."rk
"goodbye?"madhu
"what...no...will you come with me to
Mumbai?"rk
"Mumbai...for what?"madhu
"I want you to meet my mom"rk
"mom...?"madhu
"yeah.."rk
"I am sorry rk...I didn't went out of this place yetso I am scared to go anywhere."madhu
"I am with you.. Then what's the problem?"rk
"I can't get leave from here... You know na..I am the only employee in this shop"madhu
"you gonna take leave for ever.. Then? "rk
"what do you mean by that? Are you going to kill me?"madhu
"oh ho...you are really dd..girl don't you see any movies.."rk
"yes...occasionally"madhu
"damn..."rk hit on his head. 
"what happened rk...r u alright?"madhu
"yeah...I am proposing a dumb and deaf girl..what else to be happen more than this"rk
"proposing me,..?"madhu looked at him astonished
"yes...madhubala...Will you marry me? "rk
Madhu slightly shivered.her eyes welled up.she looked at eyes...she felt dizzyand passed out.rk hold her from falling.
"kaka...some water"rk 
Kaka came with water.rk sprinkled water on madhus face.she opened her eyes. She realized she is lying on rks hand.She immediately stood up and looked at him comfused
"madhu r u okay?"rk
Madhu nodded.
"you want to go home?"rk
"no...no thanks"madhu
"ok...madhu...I... I meant what I said."rk
Madhu was about to tell something.. But to cut her words"no...don't take any decision now...take time and think"rk
Rk went to the car and drove back to meadow.

Marble meadow

"chief...I slept a litte more...y don't you call me.. I wwould have come with you"bittuji
"it's okay bittuji"rk

Evening
Dining room
"chief  you looking  worried?"bittuji
"yes bittuji"to
He explained e verything to bittuji.bittuji started laughing..
"we should add such a scene in our next film...hero is proposing and the heroine passing out..it will be a new one na"bittuji
Rk glared at him.soon a book flew from upstairs and hit bittujis head.
"ouch"bittuji
Rk jumped from the chair and looked up. He saw a pale white hand for a fraction of second.
"who is that"rk asked loudly. He ran to the staircase and reached the first floor in a minute.he looked around and found no one.he was about to turn...his legs got hurt by something.he leaned and took it.he looked at the ear ring and smiled.he put it in his pocket.rk went to the dining room.
"chief...what's it...anyone there?"bittuji
"no it was just an illusion.,."rk looking at Patel
Patel smiled"yes sir I didn't see anyone"
Bittuji rubbed his head."honey is your fan"
"yes she is my knight in shining armour"rk

Night

"Bittuji I am going to write...I got a thread..,you sleep"rk
Rk went to the hall and Sat on a rocking chair.he took the pad and began to write.he heard some sound from the kitchen.he cat toed to the kitchen.rk saw Patel talking to girl.he couldn't see her face.he tried to hear theit conversation.
"really...but y did you deny?"Patel
"no I didn't...but I can't... You know it"girl
"yes...but there should be an end for everything"Patel
"no I can't drag one more life into danger"girl
To suddenly get inside the kitchen.Patel startled to see him.the girl saw him tried to escape but he caught her hand.the girl turned to him.
"Madhu..."rk
"yes...why did you do this...we got terrified"madhu smiled
"I thought...leave it...why are you here?"rk
"I just went to meet bhai"madhu
"okay..."rk
He looked at patels pale face
"I am sorry Patel ...,r u okay?"rk
"yes...yes"patel
"r u staying here tonight?"rk
"yes..."madhu
"come let's talk.."rk
Madhu looked at patel.he nodded.they went to the hall and Sat on chair.
"madhu did you tell Patel about me? "rk
"hmm...no"madhu
"no...?"rk
"I didn't think of it...then how could I tell him"madhu
"y madhu... You don't like me?"rk
"I like you rk...but"madhu
"but...?"rk
"my life is different from yours...its like sky and earth.."madhu
"what sky and earth madhu...it's just the feelings of heart.if love is there nothing will be impossible"rk
"its not that rk...there are so many things in this world which cannot be changed...you can't imagine it"madhu
"what is that? "rk
"please rk leave it..."madhu looked around
"madhu what are you searching for?"rk
"nothing ...well rk you got any thread to write?"madhu
"yeah...I was writing and I heard your sound from kitchen"rk
"oh I am really sorry"madhu
"it's ok madhu...but I will write it later"rk
"rk I know.. When you got a thread you like to write it in one go"madhu
"yeah...but how do you know"rk
"I read it on your interview printed on z magazine"madhu
"so that's how you know about me..."rk
"yeah I read all your stories and watched the movies too"madhu
"so you are my fan?"rk
"no...I like to read your book.that's all"madhu
Rk stood from the chair.he went towards madhu. He leaned holding his hands on the armrest.madhu felt his breath on her lips
"don't you feel anything for me?"rk
Madhus breath hitched.rk realized her change.madhu was about to tell something.they heard gauge voice from near by room.rk and madhu went there and saw the mirror is broken into pieces.they heard another sound from the hall.they went there to found the shelf fallen and everything is messed.
"what's it?"rk
"I don't know"madhu
Bittuji heard the sound and run towards hall.
"what's it chief?"bittuji
"don't know bittuji"rk
"honey ..."bittuji
They heard sound from kitchen.Bittuji and to ran to the kitchen and found it messed.they again heard the sound... This tome from thier bed room.they went there and saw a flower vase broken.
"chief..."bittuji pointed on the wall

'DONT ROAM WITH THIS GIRL.DO YOUR WORK AND GO BACK OR ELSE YOU WILL BE IN DANGER'
                   HONEY

Fresh blood was oozing from the letters.


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Edited by magicalmirage - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
This story is getting mysterious day by day 
Why madhu is scared to accept rk's proposal 
Why honey threatened rk to stay away from madhu 
And how rk's life will be in danger if madhu will accept rk 
So many questions di...
Pls update soon
Btw awesome update di 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
awesome update
rk loves madhu nd madhu too
but she don't want rk's life in daner
who is doing this nd why?
why he don't want rk with madhu?

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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
superb update chechi..
Who is that preatham..?????
y she is hating madhu...
questions...
update next soon..
 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update,
the story is getting more interesting,
Honey only talks with Rk,
Rk proposed Madhu,
in the mansion Rk felt someone's presence and found a ear ring but he didn't shared it with bittuji,
Madhu came to the mansion she knows everything about Rk,
that person warned Rk to stay away from Madhu,
continue soon