ShraMan TS~ Der Schnste Moment *Part-1 Pg.5* Jan 16

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello EDKVians!

Much to all your consternation, I'm back..๐Ÿคฃ

But sigh in relief my friends as this is but just a teaser. Drop in your valuable reviews so that I know how I'm doing here...

So here we go!

Warning: This is not what you think it is.

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                                 Teaser

"SHRAVAN...!"

As soon as Shravan heard her scream, he ran from the entrance of the Tiwari Killa towards the closed doors of her room.

He banged on the door but it was firmly locked and he was being held back from ramming the blasted door off and down. He felt a burning sensation in his chest when he heard her sobbing inside the room.

"Urghhh Shravan!" She screamed again and Shravan had never felt so helpless before in his life! His love, the woman who was the center of his entire universe, the reason of his existence was in pain and he could not do anything to help her.

He had vowed to her that he would always protect her and won't let any kind of pain touch her. He had promised her that he would always be there with her, through thick and thin. He had broken his vow and he felt so undeserving of her at the moment.

"Don't go Shravan..."

Her soft plea kept resounding in his head and her troubled pleading face flashing in front of him eyes. How could he have refused her? Why didn't he see the pain that she must have been in? Why? How did he become so blind?

"SHRAVANNN...!"

"Sumo!"

The entire house fell silent after her heart-wrenchingly painful scream. Shravan had stopped breathing altogether and the deathly silence was unbearable for him.

And then he heard it...


                     To be continued...

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Sooo?

Lemme know if I left you all hanging in there!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Will try to get back soon but can't promise that... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Till then

Love
Cas ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 7 years ago
What the...!!!!!
How could you stop there Casy...!!! 

How on Earth could you do that??? This is so torturous...!!!

Casy darling.. Pls update soonish.. 

As this anxiety will definitely kill me otherwise. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aaahhh...๐Ÿคข
How could u stop right there..???๐Ÿ˜ก
Kyaa yaar...๐Ÿ˜ญ
I know its goona be very mild but tumne itna bada shock diya hai...
Must be some rat or lizard for sure...๐Ÿ˜†
And if not..then m gettin very bad feels right now...
Please please jaldi update kariyo...
Love,
ANU๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 7 years ago
How naughty of you to keep us hanging in there. .and now my gutter mind has come up with this weird explanation. .
Is she by any chance getting labour pains๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by reshmanair356 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Haan verry nice... Pehle interesting title do... Banda raat ke do baje phone open karke eagerly post dekhe๐Ÿค“
Phir tension do... Banda nakhun chabaate hue padhne lage๐Ÿ˜ณ

Phir hanger pe rakho and upar se timeline bhi na do... Neend gayab, soch mode ON... How cruel cas... ๐Ÿ˜ต

Plz jaldi update karna... Or we ll keep reminding.

We r a persistent group like tht๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

How naughty of you to keep us hanging in there. .and now my gutter mind has come up with this weird explanation. .

Is she by any chance getting labour pains๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


U got mine to work now as well resh... Delivering 6 feet 4 s baby at home... Sumo will get Ashok Chakra.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn


U got mine to work now as well resh... Delivering 6 feet 4 s baby at home... Sumo will get Ashok Chakra.๐Ÿ˜ณ


๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ m laughing like a maniac...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
THIS IS JUST NOT DONE...๐Ÿ˜ญ
You cannot leave us with a cliff hanger like that...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Please please please update ...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

How naughty of you to keep us hanging in there. .and now my gutter mind has come up with this weird explanation. .

Is she by any chance getting labour pains๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

thats exactly what i guessed๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 7 years ago
how ill mannered of you to leave us right on the que
but throughly agree with reshma
probably thats whats happened
but the title is not suiting my suggestion
anyways whatever it is you need to update soon
 
DO GET THAT CLEARED IN YOUR BRAIN๐Ÿ˜‰