RAYA SS : LOC PART 1 on Page 2 update 24-12-16 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello Anyone Remember Me ????😆 Ok i know i have lot of story to complete but this one is so close to my heart i have startd this on Pyar ko kho jaane do forum but Shuru karne se pahle show khatam ho gaya Now I am continuing this on RAYA Hope i get good response so i will continue 😉


This is short One as i have already written This


Uncle Uncle Aap "Ram" ho naa  A boy said to Ram ...

Ram nods in reply ...

Boy gives him a letter...He about to ask that boy who told him to deliver this letter to him (Ram) ..but that boy runs away and Ram looks around and then he opens the letter ...A smile appears on his face which disappear in a second when he started reading the poem

 

Chand lamhe bache hain tere mere saath ke,

Mumkin hai ke bichar jaayen bina mulakat ke,

Kahan aansuon ki ye saugaat hogi,

Naye log honge nayee baat hogi.

Main har haal me muskurati rahoongi,

Gar tumhari mohabbat mere saath hogi.

Chiragon ko mehfooz rakhna aankho main,

Badi dur tak andheri raat hogi.

Musafir hoon main bhi, Musafir ho tum bhi

Phir kahin, kisi mod par mulaqat hogi... 

(credit : original writer )

He folds the letter and keeps in his Blazer's  pocket...and murmurs 

Mulakaat hogi...jarur hogi




Miles away someone looks at the Sky and sighed

someone put hand on her shoulder a smile came to her face and a poem describe the pain behind her smile


Yaqeen Hai Ki Na Aayenge Woh Hum Se Milne
Phir Ye Dil Ko Mere Intezar Kesa Hai ???

Edited by Janilover - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

it's really nice start brings smile on faces too good as it's on RaYa awesome mind blowing...


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Posted: 7 years ago
We all remember you and hoping that you will complete this story. From the poem it's indicated a love story where one is longing for her beloved.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start... seems its love story..
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start.
Waiting for the update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
very nice
pls continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago


Thanks 😛
Janilover thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04


it's really nice start brings smile on faces too good as it's on RaYa awesome mind blowing...




Thank u so much 😛😃