The Heart Gets What The Heart Wants/FF ShivIka(Ud:May08 Ch:34a/pg141)

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

Gosh.. Shivay is now having hard time controlling himself around his pretty wife.. 😆 Asya U have given perfect reason why shivay never used to take much advance towards anika even after having feelings for her.. it was his promise to Tia to get married.. Now that reason is dead... his feelings are more uncontrollable like.. whatever pulling those feelings back is gone now.. haha Por shivay.. Aniak is innocent seductress.. n more than that she is pretty dumb in x-rated matters.. Plz show that too Asya.. it would be fun to watch Shivay is trying to for something like dat.. n anika poora uska kachara kar dalegi.. 🤣 I can imagine Shivay's face.. den.. Thanks for PM asya.. 😊

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idolovestories

@idolovestories

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#402

WOAH WOAH!

You have an amazing insight into the characters and this is surreal.

I can see a beautiful relationship evolving between these two. Thanks for the pm and thats it for now because i am going to re read the chapter and i can't wait

Bye

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poemssyndrome

@poemssyndrome

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

This is so beautiful! The way you understand Shivaay, is extremely amazing. You have actually found the heart of his character.
The progression of their relationship is what makes this so special. It is nicely paced. Anika didnot forgive Shivaay too soon or too late. Similarly we see him having the guilt of the things he did to her. More than her forgiving, it matters to us that he is guilty. Bcoz Anika always has been someone who forgives easily, that doesn't mean that she should be taken for granted. This is so nicely reflected here.

And I like the fact that Anika didnot need to prove Tia wrong or even Daksh. Shivaay found it on himself. I love the fact that you make them fight equally for what they have.

So so beautiful! Just loved it!

And thank u so much for this update & Pm. It was such a sweet surprise to come back home from my exam & have some thing this beautiful to read!

Edited by poemssyndrome - 8 years ago

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#404

WOW this part was just wow

not only i learnt about business studies but also such great shift in shivika relationship

yipee

loved it

please do continue

bye sumi

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pal81

@pal81

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#405

Im a little confused..isnt it too soon for Anika to trust shivaay? I mean wat has he done to earn it or redeem himself..nothing as far as she knows. Not only tht she doesnt even know the reason for his brutal behaviour at the wedding.. so wats going on?

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#406

Lovely. ..Shivika. ...so happy

I just don't understand one thing..he keeps on harping about his promise to tia...now is marriage not a promise?

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#407

Hello dear... Amazing writer you are...

Read all the updatds... Was really hooked to it...

The tharrat anika and shivaay..devru and om.. All so nicely depicted...

Good to tej and jhanvi helping anni in all way...

Plzzz cont soon

Can i alao get a pm

Whenevr u update

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: bworm
Lovely. ..Shivika. ...so happy
I just don't understand one thing..he keeps on harping about his promise to tia...now is marriage not a promise?

This answer is only in reference to Shivvay's character who I have tried to stay true to.
He did not marry Annika under normal circumstances, eg. propose to her or fall in love with her and then make a joint commitment to marriage.
She was, in his opinion, a stand in bride who was not supposed to be discovered by the family at all. Had it been Richa in her place he would have had the same attitude. It was a temporary set back that is all.
Hence there is no feeling of commitment with Annika as it was in the case of Tia who he had already built the commitment with. But as days go by and the rituals etc are done one does start feeling a sense of relationship especially when the family accepts this as a lawful marriage.
That is where his possessiveness and jealousy towards his wife which are very much in Shivvay's nature,even a temporary wife until the divorce seeps in.
Now the Shivvay I have in my story is at a point where this temporary has become very much real and hence the 'promise', again very much part of his basic nature, has kicked in towards Annika.
I hope I am making sense ... lool This is Shivvay the complex after all

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: asya34

This answer is only in reference to Shivvay's character who I have tried to stay true to.
He did not marry Annika under normal circumstances, eg. propose to her or fall in love with her and then make a joint commitment to marriage.
She was, in his opinion, a stand in bride who was not supposed to be discovered by the family at all. Had it been Richa in her place he would have had the same attitude. It was a temporary set back that is all.
Hence there is no feeling of commitment with Annika as it was in the case of Tia who he had already built the commitment with. But as days go by and the rituals etc are done one does start feeling a sense of relationship especially when the family accepts this as a lawful marriage.
That is where his possessiveness and jealousy towards his wife which are very much in Shivvay's nature,even a temporary wife until the divorce seeps in.
Now the Shivvay I have in my story is at a point where this temporary has become very much real and hence the 'promise', again very much part of his basic nature, has kicked in towards Annika.
I hope I am making sense ... lool This is Shivvay the complex after all

Thanks dear. ..makes sense

Your Story Is So Good, Shivay Ka Original CHARACTER Thoda BHOOL Gaye the

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#410

Asya love,

Such a beautiful update!! I love the way you tell the story from Shivaay's POV here, how his emotions shift from first trying to reign in his growing attraction for his wife just because he wants to wait for her to feel the same way about him too...that was so unselfish of him.I love the way Ani brings out the best in him and now he is helping her grow as her mentor.

His love and concern for her and that last tiny bit where he fears that she might not trust him anymore and finally his relief and gratitude when she does was lovely to read.I wondered what Ani was thinking about throughout though!

Cant wait for the next part so please update soonish...

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