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OMG.
YOU BE THE BEST!
This is utter utter fitness and a mind blowing peace.
So unique and so beautifully written.Cannot even explain how I felt after reading it *_*
Girl,you got some creativity and magic with words.It was the most adorable stuff I have ever read.
You made me smile and laugh hard.
So Neil Malhotra is officially a patatao sorry he is a gobi 😆
The raining in pants,he venting about elders, getting possessive about his dad,flirting with Singh's daughter and all that he feels were so so good.
Bookmarking this already now.
My favorite part is this
""What have you decided to name him aloo?" What the... Who is this aloo? The same creepy vegetable after eating nanu spends hours in the washroom? But why the hell is my dad smiling? Ohhkkay he is aloo?! And he is going to name me? What the...? He seriously cannot give me any stupid name like gobi... c'mon man I gotta make a reputation among girls, what will I introduce myself as? Gobi Aloo Malhotra? Yaar ye log lawyers hai ya sabzi bechne wale?"
My god,I laughed so hard here,you got me scolding from my family.This is way to hilarious and just mere words bring that magic.
Okay Okay! I want you to write more and more on them,if possible.Please *grins*
Thanks for the PM.
-Mitali
Edited by SleepyPsycho - 7 years ago
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