The night fight-shraman os

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello everyone i am a silent reader in the forum but decided to write something first time to reduce the frustration and sadness we all are going through...i want to tell u guys that this is my first piece and might be not that good so sorry for that in advance..
So finally coming up to the story..

Shraman has sorted all their problems and leading a good life together as hubby and wifey...
At 8:00 pm
Sumo:shravan kaha ho tum abhi tak aye nhi usually you are back till now.
Shravan: sorry jaan aj bohot kam h but i promise to be back at 10:00
Sumo:okay
Shravan: and listen have food don't wait for me like you always do I'll have something in the office.
Sumo:but... shravan
Shra: no but's jaani i love u so have food ok??
Sumo: ok but promise me that u'll be back till 10:00..
Shr: promise
At 10:pm 
Sumo  tries calling shravan but his phone is switched off and he is busy working
At 12:00 
Shravan enters in their room and sees sumo lying on their new his back facing him
He quickly changes and goes and lies behind her and hugs her from back
Sumo tries faking sleep
Shr: soyi nhi na abhi tak?
Sumo: doesn't reply
Shr: pata h jag rhi ho
sumo: no reply 
Shr: sumo bohot zorki bhook lagi h kuch khane ko h kya?
Sumo: suddenly gets up from bed and says abhi lati hu 
Shr: pata tha soyi nhi hogi and pulls her hand
Sumo falls on shravan
Sumo: kya kar rahe ho bhook lagi h na bolo kya chahiye
Shr: tum 
Sumo: kya keh rhe ho? 
Shr: I want u Mrs. Malhotra and mujhe bhook nhi lagi h
Sumo: makes an angry face.. in that case mr. Malhotra apko yaha kuch nhi mil sakta let me sleep (in an angry tone)
Shr: sumo maaf kardo yar please
Sumo: mene kab kaha ki me tumse naraz hu
Shr: kaha nhi to kya hua Mrs. Malhotra me apko 12 saal se janta hu apke dil ki baat nhi samjhunga kya?
*Sharman eyelock*
Sumo : shravan mujhe sone do subhe bohot kaam h
Shr: itni jaldi kya h? Pulls her towards him
Sumo: tumhe nahi par mujhe h
Shr: sumo sorry na tum samajhti kyu nhi aj kal kitna kaam hota h Jab se mene apna naya firm shuru kiya h everything is not easy sumo there are some problems and i have to face them alone pehle to papa or pushkar hote the help karne ke liye but now i have to Handle them all alone *shravan said in a very serious time nearly tearing up*
Sumo: cupping shravan's face pagal ho kya tum sahi kehti thi Mr. Buddhu malhotra pehle to ye samajh lo ki tum akele nhi ho me hu tumhare saath zindagi bhar chahe kuch bhi ho jaye Samjhe??
*shravan nods*
Or dusri baat me samajhti hu shravan ki tumhe kitni problems h i know kyuki mene bhi pct ki starting me problems face ki thi or me tumse bilkul gussa nhi hu kya ab wifey apne cute se hubby se mazak bhi nhi kar skti
*she said making innocent face*๐Ÿฅฑ
Shravan hugs her tightly and says i love you sumo
Sumo: i love u too mere buddhu 

And and then they slept cuddling hugging and kissing gaining strength to continue their lives next day...

Ps: thanku for handling me so long i know this could be bore..๐Ÿ˜›
Pss: sorry for typos
Psss: please like and comment if u liked and and progressive criticism is always welcome๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Joyness

Very nicely written 

Thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Very nicely written 

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beautifully penned...
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Beautiful
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Originally posted by: arshuaar

beautifully penned...
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Originally posted by: Sunain

Beautiful
very wel written..keep writing ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks i will try to write if i get more ideas
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Posted: 7 years ago
Not a bore... would like to read More! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: ishraland

Not a bore... would like to read More! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Ha ha that's a rhyme and thanks a lot definately I'll write